I've already made my comments on this piece, so I'll just repeat the biggest one. I love the way you set up the scene depicted on the card. Overall, very nice work.

Like Raven, I already said my bit on the original thread.

(Spoiler alert: I liked it!)

This thumb points in the upwards direction.

While there's nothing really wrong with the line, "etherium powered the most awesome spells," I find the word awesome stands out quite a bit. I try to avoid using the word while writing whenever possible.

Typo?
I'm pretty sure that "so" doesn't belong there.

Otherwise, I think it fits very well with the rest of your series (that I've read so far) and feels very Esper-ish. Not much else I have to say about it.

Apologies, I had some one-time obligation that made me forget about this. This gets in, joining the others in this series.