Duplicitous Diviner Creature - Human WizardWhen Duplicitous Diviner enters the battlefield, target opponent looks at the top three cards of your library, then puts them back in any order. That player may have you shuffle. Then, draw a card.
2/1
Her scrying is for the buying. cute. I like how, despite the flavor text, the effect is
ponder, not
preordain. limiting your opponent's options here makes it feel a bit less punishing while still giving them significant control. I also agree with you on balance: it's still overall a pretty clear upside, but the drawback should give you clearance for the +1 power over
elvish visionary. is this really giving information as its primary drawback? feels close enough.
4/5Control the Narrative Sorcery (U)
Draw a card, then each player reveals their hand. For each player, you choose a nonland card revealed this way, and its owner discards it.
House Dimir's secrets are well-kept, and they know just how powerful it can be to let one loose. really good. as you say, very technically this does require the reveal in case your hand is all lands, but I don't really care about that. should maybe cost
since it's mainly a sidegrade on
coercion, but coercion isn't really the standard anymore. still, might as well be nice to multiplayer tables. anyway, that aside the flavor's great, the card's interesting, and it fits the criteria really nicely.
5/5Orcish Strategist
Creature - Orc Advisor
: Scry 3. An opponent controls you while you scry this way. Then, draw a card.
Though General Khurzog's closest advisors frequently made the case for surrender, their aid was nonetheless invaluable.1/1
this feels like a thing I'm gonna say a couple times this round, but messing around with player control feels like swatting flies with a nuke. you could just as easily get this effect by spelling out the options they have ("Target opponent looks at the top 3 cards of your library, then puts any number of them on the bottom of your library in any order and the rest on top in any order.") or just use
fateseal, and then you don't have to untangle all the dangerous implications of temporarily granting an opponent control. the card seems solid otherwise, though, and the flavor's nice. there is some question of whether the main thing it's giving away is
information, as opposed to control, but I let Cato get away with it.
3/5Guardian of Firm Resolve
Creature - Angel
Flying, vigilance
Play with exactly one card revealed from your hand. You may change the revealed card at the beginning of your upkeep, or whenever you have no revealed cards in your hand.
You can't play cards from your hand other than the revealed card.
An oath taken in Lady Veratia's name forms a bond stronger than steel.4/4
I like this but I think I'd prefer if it changed at end step instead. the most useful thing to know is, on my turn, what are you doing on your next turn? and this doesn't give me that. it forces me to show you any responses I plan to do, but if my deck is more proactive, which I'd expect from a 4-drop
serra angel, that's unlikely to be a huge problem. swapping on end step means committing to my next-turn plan, so you can make choices that take advantage of that information more effectively. still, cute, and good flavor.
4/5Orc Berserker Creature - Orc Berserker (R)
As Orc Berserker enters the battlefield, choose an opponent.
The chosen player controls you during combat.
Orc Berserker attacks each turn if able.
Rage is all it knows.3/3
similar thing to Tevish but more significant because they'll control you while you while you have priority, leading to
lots of possible choices that have nothing to do with what the card's trying to do. I think that's maybe intentional here, since a 3/3 for 1 is a lot so the drawback should be big, but it still feels pretty orthogonal to the overall point, and pulls pretty far away from the question of
information as a primary resource being spent. flavor's also weird in that context: how is this guy so angry that the
prodigal pyromancer sitting next to it doesn't get to choose who to target anymore? feels like if you
are gonna go in the full control direction, it'd take a lot more justifying.
2/5Kaladesh Central Station.
Legendary land
This land enters tapped.
: Add
, spend this mana only to cast spells or to activate abilities of cards in your hand.
At the beginning of each opponent's upkeep, if this land started the turn tapped, you may reveal your hand, if you do untap it.
"The Automatic announcer was the main legacy of Dovin Baan on Kaladesh, able to predict the arrival time of every public vehicle in the next 30 minutes, delays included"
I like the idea, and the flavor's good. I'm not sure you need the spending restriction, though: colorless mana is already a significant drawback. I get that the point is so you can't just go hellbent to remove the drawback of the reveal, but that's its own drawback anyway and I think you could save the awkward wording. speaking of which I wish there was a better way to do the if-this-was-tapped thing but I don't know what it is. overall though it's a fun idea, forcing you to warn your opponents of what you're gonna use the mana
for, and once you've done it once, you can even try to bluff an answer by not revealing again when most of your hand is known to imply you don't want them to see the hidden card.
4/5Simpleton Bruiser -
Creature - Ogre
As an additional cost to cast ~, reveal your hand.
At the beginning of your end step or when ~ enters, choose a number. As long as ~ is on the battlefield, you can only cast spells with mana value equal to the chosen number until another number is chosen.
The guardsmen knew what the ogre was going to do, but none knew how to stop it.5/4
is this enough to justify such a huge body for a 2-drop? maybe, but probably not. not sure what the revealing part has to do with anything. I guess it gives them a little extra info to start in conjunction with the other ability, since they'll know which, say, 3-drops you have available. still, though, not sure I get it. but I do like the restriction. kinda like Shrimp's but with a bit less information given away. still enough to seriously restrict you if you choose wrong, though, and especially in tournament play where your opponent is likely to know the common cards in your deck, they can do a lot of planning around being told that number.
3/5Geas of Silence -
Enchantment
As an additional cost to cast ~, name two cards in your deck. You can't play cards with those names for as long as ~ remains in play.
Creatures you control get +1/+1
I'm torn 'cause I like the idea of this but, by default, I'm looking for cards that can exist in paper sets, and this is clearly digital-only. I mean, there's nothing in the rules that says this doesn't work in physical play, but it's got no room for cheating prevention and no easy way to fix that without requiring you to reveal your entire deck to your opponent, either when you cast it or at the end of the game. and it's such a shame 'cause it's a really lovely design for a digital set. I just don't feel like I can grade it fairly against other entrants, y'know? but I do like it.
3/5Shimmershell, the Sporadic |
Legendary Creature - InsectCompanion - Your starting deck contains no instants or cards with flash.
You may cast spells as if they had flash.
Spells you cast during your main phase cost
less to cast.
3/4
I'm generally torn on whether Companion is primarily about giving away information, but in this case knowing you have no action on their turn is a
huge advantage so while I'm not sure, say,
jegantha, the wellspring really counts, this certainly does. (technically you could still have action with, say,
channel, but that's an edge case and you can easily keep this out of standard with those.) I do wish the abilities were different, though, especially since they pull in opposite directions. I'm not sure exactly what I want them to be but I just don't find this version inspiring in the way the initial companion promises. it's a great take on the challenge, though, and I love the name.
[c]4/5[/b]
Beguiling Cohort Creature - Devil (C)
Haste
Play with the top card of your library revealed.
"Aren't ya just a wee bit curious? Let me stick around, and ya might see a thing or two that'll blow ya away."[3/1] I'm always ambivalent about the [c]goblin spy[/c] ability because of how much it kills the flow of information, but I think this makes a strong case for itself. the numbers are aggressive enough to actually want the body on its own merits (as opposed to spy) and by being an early aggressive threat, it encourages your opponent to kill it and lose access to that info. very similar vein to the prompt card, but different enough in enough ways to carve out its own purpose, and the flavor's a good extension of its mechanical implications.
5/5Mistmaro
Creature
As ~ enters the battlefield exile any number of cards from your hand face-up. For the rest of the game you may play those cards as if they were in your hand.
Whenever you draw a card, you may choose to exile it face-up. For the rest of the game you may play it as if it are in your hand.
~'s power and toughness are equal to the number of cards currently exiled by Mistmaro.
*/*
I liked the earlier, less complicated version of this better. it still works, but I liked how it sort of inevitably ticked downward. this is just
Maro with a fiddly hand-reveal clause, but it's hard to imagine not wanting to exile any given thing I draw. maybe I can get some bluff value out of making the choice to shrink my threat in order to keep a card hidden, but I'm probably not running this with many cards I want to hide. does add the
graceful adept ability to it, which is nice, but the wording gets really messy since you have to repeat the "you may play those cards" thing twice to avoid the version where you lose them if your Mistmaro dies. I dunno. just feels messy now that the exiled cards are literally just a replacement hand.
2/5Military Exercise Sorcery (R/M)
Choose an opponent. Look at each other's hands. Untap all creatures they control and creatures you control gain Vigilance until end of turn. Creatures both of you control deal damage to creatures the other controls in form of +1/+1 counters this turn.
I don't mind cards that are more interesting in multiplayer, but I'm generally not a huge fan of cards that are
only interesting in multiplayer. I'm also not sure what the looking at each other's hands accomplishes? beyond fitting it to the criteria. it's maybe helping with the flavor of an exercise if you know each other's plans, but mechanically it has basically no impact on the rest of the card which is a shame 'cause it's the only part of this that fits the criteria. I like the damage dealing clause but I think there are better ways to use it.
1/5Blend Into the Crowd Instant (R)
Exile any number of target nontoken creatures you control face-down, then cloak those cards tapped. As long as those creatures are face-down, they gain "when this creature blocks, becomes blocked, or attacks and isn't blocked, turn it face-up."
feels like a stretch to call the existence of a duration a drawback. is the fact that you can still die on later turns a drawback of
angel's grace? if anything turning them face-up for free is an upside: you can use it to skirt expensive morph costs, or to sneak through valuable saboteur abilities. that moment where they get flipped up is exactly when you'd
want the cloak to expire. I do like the card, it seems like it'd be fun to play with, but this feels like the opposite of giving away information.
2/5Nefarious Plot SorcerySearch your library for a card and exile it with a number of time counters equal to its mana value, then shuffle. If gains suspend if it doesn't have it.
(At the beginning of your upkeep, remove a time counter from that card. When the last is removed, you may play it without paying its mana cost.) suspend as information-giving makes sense. I wonder if doing it from library is the best way to capture that, though, since it's giving information that otherwise wouldn't exist. still, giving them forewarning of your plan. I'm surprised this doesn't exist yet, it's very straightforward but in an effective sort of way.
4/5Captain Ahab, Monomaniacal Hunter Legendary Creature ─ Human Pirate (M)
Whenever Captain Ahab enters or attacks, exile the top card of your library facedown.
Opponents can look at and cast facedown spells from exile with mana value X by putting X cards from exile into their owners graveyards.
Reckless
(This creature attacks each turn if able.), madness ─ Exile a Whale card from your hand facedown.
5/5
"Thar she blows!" ok, I'm kinda lost here. reckless as a keyword seems plausible in the vein of defender, but beyond that I don't really get it. the scale of card accumulation is slow enough that the drawback doesn't really go anywhere, madness for a whale is a flavor fit for the source material but really specific mechanically (there are 15 whales in all of Magic) and not tied in with the rest of the card, and it's also not even like you're giving your opponent usable information: they can look at the cards, but what can they do with knowing cards you're not gonna have access to? I'm struggling to tie this together into a coherent card, or into something that meets the criteria.
1/5Pewter Sight —
Enchantment (R)
Play with the top card of your library revealed.
You may play lands from the top of your library.
There's always a new horizon. courser of cruphix without a body? sure, seems plausible. they'll probably print it at some point, although I doubt it'll be with such a restrictive cost. still, that ability has never really treated the reveal as much of a drawback, so I think it falls into that thing I was saying in the OP about cards where the revealed information is incidental to the design. when you're considering running
courser of cruphix, or
conspicuous snoop, or
future sight, you're not really trading the revealed information against the strength of the card overall, you're just looking for the effect in general and that reveal happens to be part of how that mechanic works, like how tutors with conditions have to reveal to avoid cheating. flavor's nice, and the design makes sense (although I think it's weaker than courser, so
seems likely) but it's not super exciting and it doesn't really do what I was looking for this round.
2/5Abyss-Gazer Creature - Eye Warlock
Vigilance
Opponents may look at the top card of your library at any time.
Pay 3 life,
: Reveal the top card of your library. You may play that card from the top of your library until end of turn.
2/2
the connection here feels a little tenuous. it feels like the activated ability should involve some input from your opponent to take advantage of the information imbalance, but here all they can really do is prepare, and maybe bluff that the card is stronger to get you to pay the life. I do like how, if they do that and you activate it, you're stuck with it even if you can't or don't want to play the card: it doesn't just exile and let you cast from there, it leaves it on top so you have to use it or draw it. and viewing the second ability as a pure drawback that's not meant to be tied to the third, it is definitely interesting if maybe a little physically fiddly in in-person games. vigilance on a 2/2 for 4 seems kind of unnecessary but whatever, evergreen keywords are low-load.
4/5Landslide Elemental -
Creature - Elemental |
UTrample, haste
Play with the top card of your library revealed.
Landslide Elemental gets +X/-X, where X is the mana value of the top card of your library.
An entire mountain gone in a flash.1/4 similar to Parad's, the drawback here doesn't really seem to be the reveal itself, it's more in the vein of, like,
skill borrower where the reveal is just a necessary precondition of the actual effect, but at least here that effect is itself kind of a drawback. honestly feels pretty similar to ELC's card in that way, although I like that one better here because it's more consistent and the reveal is a straight drawback. although this does also give away some deckbuilding info in that you're not running it with things that cost 4 or more. still, though.
3/5Disinformation Exchange Enchantment
Players play with their hands and the top card of their library revealed.
: Exile the top card of each player's library. Activate only once each turn.
: Each player discards a card. Activate only as a sorcery and only once each turn.
lantern control in one card? seems dangerous, especially since it jumpstarts your information by revealing hands as well. I do like it but I think, given how annoying it could be in practice, it'd make more sense to put it on a creature so you could cost it up to fit a larger body. still, that's probably the only thing I'd change: make it, say, a 3/3 for
and I think it's a contender.
3/5Villainous Monologue Enchantment - Saga (R)
You can't cast spells.
(Including plotted ones.)I, II, III: Plot a nonland card from your hand or graveyard. You lose life equal to it's mana cost.
so the info here is the set of spells you're gonna cast at the end of it? I guess Plot is, itself, kind of about info-giving as a drawback. I mean, it's mostly about tempo, but the reveal is there too. doesn't really read as info though. the card is interesting, feels pretty weak in most cases but is probably one of those
ad nauseam designs where it has to look really weak in order to be even remotely balanced in the more degenerate situations it's actually built for. still, very slow. which is fine, just observing. I think it's a solid design, just not entirely sold on it for the round.
3/5Cruel Courtier Creature — Human Noble Advisor
At the beginning of your upkeep, target opponent looks at the top card on your library and chooses a number. You may put that card in your hand and lose life equal to the chosen number. Otherwise, exile that card and that opponent loses life equal to the chosen number.
For all its evils, war is a game that you at least know you are playing. No such nicety exists for politics.1/1
it's interesting in that the information disparity only exists for a second, but it still feels integral to the mechanic's design. is the mechanic a
drawback? I don't know, but I really like it. the game seems really interesting to play, and if your opponent is worried about their life total they can always just opt out by picking zero. (or 1, more likely, to get at least a little damage.) I wonder if this wants to be an 0/1, but in practice there's not much difference between the bodies. just might be more aesthetic if it didn't actually attack for damage. still, lovely card.
5/5Bumbling SpyletCreature - Human Rogue
Bumbling Spylet can't be blocked.
Whenever Bumbling Spylet deals combat damage to an opponent, reveal your hand to that opponent.
Getting in and out isn't his issue, it's not leaving behind a trail of evidence that he hasn't quite mastered yet.2/2
ha, very cute. kinda similar to the prompt card but the flavor's very different and I like the execution. could probably be cheaper:
phantom warrior is
old and this isn't even better than that without the drawback. more recently there's
jhessian infiltrator and even
mercurial spelldancer which make this feel pretty underwhelming. doesn't have to be quite as pushed as spelldancer, but
seems like a bare minimum to make this considerable in limited. other than that I like it.
4/5a lot of folks took the criteria more loosely than I intended it to be read, and given the frequency of that I'm going to have to concede that it's probably my fault, not y'all's. could've written it clearer, sorry about that. tried to be reasonably generous in my interpretations where possible to compensate. anyway I think for me the clear winner here is
Jim! congrats, nominating now.