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PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2024 9:10 pm 
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Destroy target attacking creature with power 4 or more. If you do, end the combat.
His remains blasted across the riverbank, Krugnar Oathbreaker achieved in death what he never could in life: the silenced awe of his clan.


it's been a long time since we did a flavor round and this is very much a flavor card, so let's go with make a card that represents a pivotal moment in a larger narrative. probably helps to namecheck specific places and/or people but you don't have to.

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That card is spectacular. Just sublime.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2024 11:43 pm 
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Modify the Scroll
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Target player reveals their hand. You may choose a nonland card from that player's hand or graveyard. If you do, that player casts that spell if able and pays life equal to its mana value rather than paying its mana cost. If a spell wasn't cast this way, draw a card and return this spell to its owner's hand.
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Edit: Tweaked the card a bit to feel slightly less useless.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 01, 2024 11:58 pm 
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That card is spectacular. Just sublime.

yeah I miss JV

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 02, 2024 12:42 am 
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I was thinking about going full Universes Beyond but it seems fairer if the card is trying to tell an original story rather than evoking one that already exists

Birth of the New Regime
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As an additional cost to cast Birth of the New Regime, sacrifice X creatures.
Each opponent sacrifices X creatures. Put X +1/+1 counters on up to one target creature you control.
Joseph Kastov betrayed his king, betrayed his ideals, betrayed his followers, and claimed everything for himself.

The UB option because I think it's janky but it's in my head

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Are EDH-only cards okay?


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When ~ enters, exile target nonland permanent until ~ leaves the battlefield.
When ~ leaves, sacrifice a nonland permanent you control.
By sealing Nahiri away in the Helvault, Sorin had consigned both of their homes to ruin.

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Are EDH-only cards okay?

I broadly prefer cards that are intended for standard-legal sets but I've accepted some Commander references in the past so I'll say I don't mind but I'll be considering balance in the same way regardless of the intended format.

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 02, 2024 6:28 am 
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Then I will stick to something standard then. Was thinking of 'if an opponent lost this turn' ability but that's really only applicable to multiplayer formats.

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Until end of turn, whenever a creature you control attacks, create a 1/1 white Soldier creature token tapped and attacking. If this spell was foretold, create a 4/4 red Dragon creature token tapped and attacking instead.
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Creatures you control have Haste.
At the end of your turn, if no creatures you control attacked this turn, you lose the game.
Their Oath shall drive them, and yet betray them, and ever snatch away the very treasures that they have sworn to pursue.
- The Silmarillion, J. R. R. Tolkien

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Destroy target creature. Create a 2/2 black Vampire creature token. If the destroyed creature was an Angel, put two +1/+1 counters on the token. If the destroyed creature was white, put a lifelink counter and a menace counter on the token.

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Enchant two creatures
If one of these enchanted creatures leaves the battlefield, the other leaves in the same manner. (Examples: If one is put into its owner's library, the other is put into its owner's library; if one is put into its owner's hand, the other is put into its owner's hand; etc.)
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Galactic Harvest | :8::b::b::b::b:
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Mill your library, then shuffle each noncreature card in your graveyard into your library.
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“We wait.” Syndali's lips betrayed half a grin as she watched the elixir begin to brew.

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You may cast this spell without paying its mana cost if it targets a creature you own.
Enchant creature
You control enchanted creature.
"You made me blow my cover!"

On a side note, is there a mechanical difference between "Cast this spell without paying its mana cost" and "You may pay 0 rather than pay this spells mana cast."? Scryfall has a mix of both across all manner of spells.

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Avacyn's Sacrifice
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When Avacyn's Sacrifice enters, starting with you, each player chooses a creature. Exile all creatures chosen this way until Avacyn's Sacrifice leaves the battlefield.
Evil bound at any cost.


im pretty sure this event already has a card associated with it but whatever

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Put a creature card from your hand onto the battlefield. If that creature is legendary, other creatures you control get +X/+X until end of turn, where X is that creature's power.
Krugnar Oathbreaker strode forth. He bellowed a challenge to the cowards hiding behind their gleaming white walls, and his assembled warclan echoed a chorus behind him.

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Dudibus wrote:
On a side note, is there a mechanical difference between "Cast this spell without paying its mana cost" and "You may pay 0 rather than pay this spells mana cast."? Scryfall has a mix of both across all manner of spells.
I think the latter is mostly used for things like archive trap that are meant to fit into broader formatting conventions.

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 06, 2024 7:34 pm 
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gonna start grading now, no more edits please.

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