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PostPosted: Sun Jul 28, 2024 9:42 pm 
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You may have Redemptive Spirit enter the battlefield as a copy of any creature attacking you.
Even as she swung her sword at her mirror, she wept for this glimpse at what might have been, if life were kinder, if she were better.
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I'm too drunk to come up with a better criteria make an instant-speed card (instant or with flash) that punishes attackers.

gonna grade on Friday goooooooooooooooo

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 28, 2024 10:02 pm 
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PostPosted: Sun Jul 28, 2024 10:04 pm 
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Razor! You are a role model- you can't admit to drinking!

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 28, 2024 10:09 pm 
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Razor! You are a role model- you can't admit to drinking!
I'm too sober to admit to anything

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Whenever a creature deals combat damage to a player, return that creature to its owner's hand.
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If two or more creatures with the same name are attacking you, you pay pay :1::w: rather than pay Memory Hole's mana cost. If you do, it must target one of those creatures.
Exile target creature and each other creature with the same name as that creature. Search its controller's hand, library, and graveyard for any number of cards with the same name as the exiled creature and exile them.
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Sacrifice a land: Put Minefield onto the battlefield. Activate this ability only if Minefield is in your hand and only if one or more creatures are attacking you.
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:x:, Sacrifice X lands: Minefield deals X damage to each attacking creature.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 29, 2024 1:51 am 
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Creature - fog (R)
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When this creature enters, attacking creatures get -x/+x until end of turn, where x is their power minus 1.
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No card is better than the original.


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Target attacking creature becomes Ball Lightning until end of turn.
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PostPosted: Mon Jul 29, 2024 8:52 pm 
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neru wrote:
No card is better than the original.

It is pretty good. Folks like you and I will can never aspire to design at that level.

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PostPosted: Mon Jul 29, 2024 9:54 pm 
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Didn't read the criteria

Meh


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Create X 1/1 white soldier creature tokens, when X is the number of creatures attacking you. If X is 4 or greater, sacrifice those tokens at the beginning of the next end step.

Hmmm "minus the number of untapped creatures you control"? Do it after you declare blockers but have the tokens etb blocking an unblocked creature?

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*"To YMTC it up" means to design cards that have value mostly from a design perspective. i.e. you would put them in a case under glass in your living room and visitors could remark upon the wonderful design principles, with nobody ever worring if the cards are annoying/pointless/confusing in actual play

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TP the criteria says instant-speed

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razor what are your opinions on morph flip is that instant speed

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 30, 2024 12:01 am 
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razor what are your opinions on morph flip is that instant speed

interesting edge case, I'll allow it

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Planar Pocket
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When ~ enters, exile target noncreature, nonland permanent until ~ leaves the battlefield.
When ~ is turned face up, exile each creature that was blocking or blocked by ~ until ~ leaves the battlefield.
Morph

im like 60% certain this works

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No card is better than the original.

I know you're poking fun of yourself by being faux-arrogant, but it really is one of the best cards in the history of these boards.

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PostPosted: Tue Jul 30, 2024 9:09 am 
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im like 60% certain this works
not sure which portion you're worried about but as far as I can tell every part of your card works within the rules.

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