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PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2021 6:20 am 
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Shahir is super nice, though I don't think it's a good Saga commander due to how many Sagas have double colored pips in their cost.


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PostPosted: Sat Jun 26, 2021 4:58 pm 
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That is a legit concern. But I feel that if you're playing a 5-color Commander deck, you should probably consider those problems during the deckbuilding stage.

I would honestly prefer to let the player choose what color(s) of mana to add, but I kind of have to use because it's the dumb workaround that lets you play a five-color deck.

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PostPosted: Sun Jun 27, 2021 1:00 am 
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“Add five mana in any combination of :w:, :u:, :b:, :r:, and/or :g:


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PostPosted: Sun Jun 27, 2021 3:33 pm 
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Ah, the Surgeon General Commander approach.

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 29, 2023 1:49 pm 
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Hey, I haven't posted anything here in (checks calendar) two years!

Accursed Tormentor

Creature -- Demon (U)
When Accursed Tormentor enters the battlefield, search your library for a Curse card, put it onto the battlefield attached to you, then shuffle. If you didn't put a Curse onto the battlefield in this way, sacrifice Accursed Tormentor.
"Only an amateur signs a demon's contract before negotiating first."
—Molcrom, Demonologist

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2023 1:16 pm 
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I love those weird Figure of Destiny-type cards we get every once in a while, and I also love zany Simic hybrid monsters.

Experiment Seven

Creature -- Frog (R)
: Experiment Seven becomes a Frog Drake with base power and toughness 2/2 and flying.
: If Experiment Seven is a Drake, it becomes a Frog Drake Turtle with base power and toughness 3/3 and flying and hexproof.
: If Experiment Seven is a Turtle, it becomes a Frog Drake Turtle Leviathan with base power and toughness 6/6 and flying, trample, and hexproof.
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PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2023 2:14 pm 
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Great card, but why is the mana cost and not ?

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2023 3:58 pm 
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To prevent mono-green from getting access to flying, mostly.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 30, 2023 10:13 pm 
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"In your hands you hold the collected findings of my life's wanderings. As the pages that follow contain record of the oddest beasts our creator saw fit to create, I ask that those of fragile sensibilities and shallow imagination read no further."
—Journal of Brushell Wagg, zoologist


I enjoy coming up with little characters to attribute flavor text to and then bringing them back when appropriate. One of my favorites is Brushell Wagg, a somewhat bumbling but well-meaning world traveler and zoologist. He was the first to discover the brushwagg and bestowed the honor of being named after himself upon the humble creature.

Here are some random cards from my file that feature the esteemed Mr. Wagg, though I wouldn't say any of them are super noteworthy as designs:

Ornery Quillbeast

Creature -- Beast (R)
Whenever an opponent attacks, casts a spell, or activates an ability that isn't a mana ability, Ornery Quillbeast deals 1 damage to them.
"I beg the reader to forgive the brevity of my entry on this fascinating creature, but I could get no closer to study it."
—Journal of Brushell Wagg, zoologist

4/4

Wetland Sower

Creature -- Ox (U)
When Wetland Sower enters the battlefield, if you control an Island, search your library for a basic Island card, put it onto the battlefield tapped, then shuffle.
"Its dragging horns carve new paths for the flow of water, ensuring it always has a wetland to call home."
—Journal of Brushell Wagg, zoologist

4/4

Skydive Hunter

Creature -- Griffin (U)
Flying
When Skydive Hunter enters the battlefield, you may tap it and put a stun counter on it. If you do, return target creature to its owner's hand.
"To see one plummet from the heavens, talons primed for its prey... well, let's just say I'm glad I was born a man and not a fish."
—Journal of Brushell Wagg, zoologist

2/3

Greathorn Rager

Creature -- Minotaur Berserker (U)
When Greathorn Rager attacks, double its power until end of combat.
"Despite their reputation, I found the horned folk of the Dumaz to be quite hospitable. In my time of need, they provided me food, water, and a warning to never enter their lands again."
—Journal of Brushell Wagg, zoologist

2/4

Stag Bison

Creature -- Insect Ox (U)
At the beginning of your upkeep, draw a card if Stag Bison's power is greater than the power of each other creature on the battlefield.
"I was delighted to witness the two males engage in a territorial dispute -- until the loser was tossed overhead and nearly on top of me."
—Journal of Brushell Wagg, zoologist

2/2

Ambush Lyex

Creature -- Cat (U)
Flash
When Ambush Lyex enters the battlefield, it gains first strike until end of turn.
"The natives say you do not find a lyex: it finds you. With mixed feelings, I will consider myself fortunate that my journey to Shebreth proved fruitless."
—Journal of Brushell Wagg, zoologist

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 04, 2023 2:38 pm 
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Proposition: we make indestructible tertiary in Red, but only for attacking creatures.

Berserker's Charge

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Target attacking creature gets +3/+0 and gains trample and indestructible until end of turn.
"An axe, skillfully swung, can cleave through a shield. But fury, properly wielded, can cut through an army."
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Cue training montage.

Sparring Drone

Artifact Creature -- Drone (U)
: Sparring Drone fights target creature you control. Put a +1/+1 counter on that creature. Activate only as a sorcery.
"Taking a punch to the face is part of the learning process, but I don't have enough fists for the lot of you."
—Malath, Guard-Captain

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PostPosted: Fri Sep 08, 2023 12:37 pm 
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I posted this a long time ago in one of the game threads. I'm posting it here for posterity because I liked the design. I think this might be the first land card I've ever added to my Hoard; I don't generally like designing lands very much.

Thran Ruins
Land (R)
: Add , then add an additional for each permanent attached to Thran Ruins.
The mechanisms inside lie dormant but ready, awaiting only a power source.

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PostPosted: Tue Sep 12, 2023 10:09 am 
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I need to make more cards with Neon Dynasty flavor.

Saiba Infiltrator

Artifact Creature -- Human Ninja (C)
When Saiba Infiltrator enters the battlefield, create a 0/1 colorless Drone artifact creature token with “This creature must be blocked if able."
When Saiba Infiltrator deals combat damage to a player, draw a card.
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Drone
Token Artifact Creature -- Drone (T)
This creature must be blocked if able.
0/1

I'm envisioning a Limited format with / overlapping with "saboteur" mechanics, with these Drones being a minor theme created by a few different cards.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 14, 2023 1:28 pm 
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I've been interested in the possibilities presented by extra decks recently. Here's a mechanic I've been toying with: quests! Let me show you some cards first, then I'll get into how I imagine the mechanic would work.

Eager Expeditioner

Creature -- Human Warrior (C)
When Eager Expeditioner enters the battlefield, you may accept a quest. (If you do, abandon any other quests you have accepted.)
Whenever you complete a quest, put a +1/+1 counter on Eager Expeditioner.
2/2

Claim the Loot

Sorcery (U)
This spell costs less to cast as long as you've completed a quest.
Draw three cards.
"I say I do what I do for the sense of adventure, or for the good company, but this is what it's really all about."
—Exena, expedition rogue


Expedition Deserter

Creature -- Human Rogue (U)
You may cast this spell for by abandoning a quest you've accepted.
Deathtouch
Loyalty can be rented, but it can't be bought.
3/3

Guildhome Logistician

Creature -- Human Advisor (R)
When Guildhome Logistician enters the battlefield, you may accept a quest.
You may accept quests without abandoning quests you’ve already accepted.
"Work is plentiful; good help is not."
2/2

Adventure's End

Sorcery (C)
Destroy target creature. Its controller abandons a quest they've accepted.
"In my travels, I've seen marvels few others have. But I've also seen men die in ways you couldn't even imagine."
—Jallen Kar, adventurer


Guul Draz Eliminator

Creature -- Vampire Assassin (U)
When Guul Draz Eliminator enters the battlefield, destroy target creature an opponent controls.
Whenever you complete a quest, you may return Guul Draz Eliminator to its owner's hand.
3/2

Jallen Kar, Adventurer

Legendary Creature -- Human Warrior (R)
When Jallen Kar, Adventurer enters the battlefield, you may accept a quest.
When you complete a quest, put a +1/+1 counter on each creature you control, then you may accept another quest.
3/3

This was a mechanic I'd imagined for a revisit to Zendikar set, hence the flavor.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2023 9:24 am 
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Beeeeeeees!

Apiary Druid

Creature -- Human Druid (U)
Whenever Apiary Druid attacks, exile it and create three 1/1 green Insect creature tokens with flying that are tapped and attacking. At the end of combat, exile those tokens. If you exiled at least one token in this way, return Apiary Druid to the battlefield tapped.
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PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2023 11:05 am 
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That's gonna proc 4 triggers in each combat for cards that care about creatures entering the battlefield. Seems a bit crazy.

The design is very cool though. Gives me Skinshifter sort of vibes.

It being a 3/3 at base is a bit weird as well. Considering the various positive interactions this would have - like in addition to ETB stuff, this also sort of enables you to have two creatures for saccing fairly free - I think it could just have like 0/3 stats or something.

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PostPosted: Sun Sep 17, 2023 12:17 pm 
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Good points. It seems like the main concerns are power level-related, which seems easily fixed by adding to the cost. For cards I post here, I tend to push them to the most aggressive cost I can reasonably see.

After thinking about it more, yeah, I'd probably cost this at as 3/3 or at as a 0/3.

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reminds me of fallingman's masterswarm

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PostPosted: Mon Sep 18, 2023 6:48 am 
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It's a relatively minor quibble but I also do find it a bit weird that Apiary Druid would attack as a swarm but when blocking, simply do it as a 3/3 stomper. Seems a bit inconsistent, which is why I prefer 0/3 from that perspective as well.

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@Cato: Never seen that one before, sweet! I loved Fallingman's stuff. Miss him.

@Tahazzar: I agree, but I think it's obvious why it has to be that way. Trying to give it a similar insect ability that triggered on blocking would be make the card a wordy nightmare and it would barely change how it plays out in most situations.

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