WotC should reevaluate the 5/5 split between main and side stories. Ever since the web fiction's return, the main story has been moving at a breakneck pace, glossing over things that would help strengthen these characters. Will and Rowan's story was fine, but Lukka, Kasmina, and Extus (especially Extus) felt really underdeveloped. Liliana's arc is...a thing, I guess.
On the flip side, the side stories have been fairly strong, so I definitely wouldn't want to see the main story eat into their word count.
On a different tangent, what is even the criteria for a "Story Spotlight"? Some SS (that needs a better acronym) cards get glossed over in the fiction (
Struggle for Skemfar comes to mind), while some things given significance don't get the title (e.g.
Test of Talents).
I agree with everything here. For me, the world building side stories have swiftly become the main attraction. The main story lacks character development and gravitas; because there is so little room to let the story breath, the stakes are pretty much non-existent and I have a hard time feeling invested in it. With no less than five planeswalkers to develop in this story (if you could call Lukka's and Kasmina's bits 'development' at all) it's the villain that surfers the worst....you could just call extus Cardboard McVillain and be done with it....
And why in all that is holy is Lukka even in this story to begin with? He does nothing, learns nothing, means nothing for the overal story. It's by far one of the weakest stories for magic thus far i think, which is in no way a fault of the writer, but of the direction she's been given
Story spotlights are all over the place...there were 15 (!) this set, most of which are either glossed over or mentioned quickly in passing.