For me, I think the seeping pain of Kaladesh has been that there was potential for a good story acknowledging the problems of the rebels. In the story as it is, in
"Renegade Prime", a story tied to Kaladesh and not even Aether Revolt, Pia talks to a crowd about the abuses of the Consulate, and she says this...
Pia Nalaar wrote:
"And at the same time, we found ourselves targeted by the very government that has sworn to protect us!" Nodding heads stared back at her from the crowd.
"They've bounded off the skies themselves to prevent you, Nadya and Kari, from gathering our own aether!" The two aerowrights locked eyes with each other and raised their fists together in unison.
"And what about the Maulfists' foundry? The Consulate took their aether and the foundry now lies powerless and vacant!" Three heavily outfitted renegades raised their hammers to Pia
Emphasis Mine. The Maulfists featured on the cards in Kaladesh, specifically two of them:
A gang of protection racket extortionists and
a violent case of at least breaking and entering. They are depicted as violent criminals and menaces to society. What sane, loving, functional government
wouldn't try to shut down their access to more heavy weapons? "Renegade Prime" wants us to feel sympathy for them as though they were mom and pop artificers wrongfully denied their livelihoods.
But, and here's what should have been the case, what if
Pia did but the story didn't? What if, rather than being portrayed as a "reasonable" visonary of peace and freedom, the writing acknowledged that she's a bitter, hate-filled woman who can't let go of the personal wrongs done to her and is willing to use her charisma and technical skill to take disproportionate revenge on the entirety of the government for the crimes of Baral? And what if Chandra had to come to terms with it? Like she still has this
Cathartic Reunion with a mother she loved and thought she'd lost forever, and doesn't want to accept, at first, that her mother really does probably need to be stopped. It would be a great chance for Chandra to show the leadership and reason she's supposed to have gained in order to be Jaya's successor, while also being emotionally effective. I would have eaten up the Kaladesh story if it was about Chandra's struggle between wanting to accept her mother as a person and wanting what's best for her homeworld, running through moments of cognative dissonance, hearing out Pia's rationalizations and watching them fall apart in the face of her actions, before finally moving into a place where Chandra has to choose whether to honor her blood ties or her oath to the principles the Gatewatch (supposedly) stands for, neither way looking to be easy? We could even still oust Tezzeret and Baral (though I'd probably spare Dovin the hell he took), because there are those corrupt elements, an abuser of power with deep personal ties to one of our heroes and an outsider manipulating the situation for a sinister ends... but the "happy ending" would be one in which Pia's revolution was largely foiled. Maybe she's arrested, or maybe she escapes, but either way she tries to cross a line and gets stopped, however much it pains Chandra to have to do so.
It wouldn't have taken much of a rewrite. The sets would still be Kaladesh (Inventor's Fair) and Aether Revolt. And it would have been more emotionally effective for our leads and solved the dissonance problem entirely.