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PostPosted: Wed Feb 26, 2020 10:07 pm 
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Yeah, that was a fun one, Raven! Thanks for sharing!

Thanks, Aaarrrgh! I'm glad you enjoyed it.


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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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I have feelings about that.
Complicated, complicated feelings.

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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Barinellos wrote:
I have feelings about that.
Complicated, complicated feelings.

Are we at "WHY MUST I FEEL?" levels here, or more like "repressed childhood misunderstandings" levels?


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The ambivalence manifest between chuckling and threatening harm of some kind.
Y'know, in a good way.

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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Barinellos wrote:
The ambivalence manifest between chuckling and threatening harm of some kind.
Y'know, in a good way.

Ah, I got it. Like reading the title to, what, about half of my stories?

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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Barinellos wrote:
The ambivalence manifest between chuckling and threatening harm of some kind.
Y'know, in a good way.

Ah, I got it. Like reading the title to, what, about half of my stories?

:D

Probably about a fifth of mine, too, if I'm being honest.

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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I really like this. It's got a nice mix of levity and heart, and a very nicely done gut-punch at the end. It's very nice to see HS Tryst being this supportive for her friend. I was looking at your list from a while back about who Sharaka probably has good relationships with, and Donagut stood out to me. I can't help but picture Donny sneaking in some alcohol to Sharaka during her convalescence...

Thanks for posting, Huey!


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Why would you do that to me?!

No, but seriously, that was really good. I just was NOT prepared for that ending.

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The ending is decidedly poignant and it has a poetry that steps outside the silly setting.

And I'm at least slightly chagrined to say it makes me want to drop the Chessmasters on her like a ton of bricks.
I don't know why my darker impulses rear their heads that way, but it just makes them.

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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It's very nice to see HS Tryst being this supportive for her friend.

In my head they grew very close in middle school, two outcasts against the world all, but even then it's not obvious that they'd be able to connect with each other's pain so strongly, so yeah. Cruel as I can be with my characters, I couldn't leave Sharaka without someone at her side.

I was looking at your list from a while back about who Sharaka probably has good relationships with, and Donagut stood out to me. I can't help but picture Donny sneaking in some alcohol to Sharaka during her convalescence...

Irresponsible as it would be, Sharaka would be very grateful :D Maybe that could be how they became proper friends? Like, they were friends-of-friends before, and Donagut visits her with a flask?

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Why would you do that to me?!

Given how much I feel for my "heroes", I also wonder why I do that to myself :V

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I just was NOT prepared for that ending.

Just so you know, this is the result of me thinking "I should try to write something slice-of-lifey" so it's not like I was intending to do that from the start... which may be part of it? :D

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The ending is decidedly poignant and it has a poetry that steps outside the silly setting.

As the titular quote of a webcomic goes, "life is what happens Between Failures". And it surely feels sometimes that the only victory in your reach is surviving.

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And I'm at least slightly chagrined to say it makes me want to drop the Chessmasters on her like a ton of bricks.

Then I'd be grateful if you kept a respectful distance from my downtrodden scaly girl, thank you :D
(I may be interested in canon Sharaka brushing against them in the future, but that's another matter)

Thank you all for reading and for the kind words!

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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This story came about because of something Orcish said to me in an email regarding the last story. Enjoy!

The Collection


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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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That was a great look into the life of HS Daneera. I wonder where the collection started? It's it a reminder of a time when her parents actually cared, or did someone else give her all of that (and if so, who)?

Great writing as always, thank you for sharing!

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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That was a great look into the life of HS Daneera. I wonder where the collection started? It's it a reminder of a time when her parents actually cared, or did someone else give her all of that (and if so, who)?

Great writing as always, thank you for sharing!

Thanks for reading, Aaarrrgh!

This story started because Orcish made an off-handed comment about "Multimedia." He was talking about how he thought it was perfect that Aloise has a "rumpus room," and said parenthetically that Daneera would have a "Wumpus Room." This made me think that HS Daneera would have an entire menagerie of stuffed animals to parallel canon Daneera's catalog of summoned creatures. The stuffed Wumpus didn't actually make it into this story, for some reason, but I assume it's in there somewhere.

As for where the collection came from, I don't really have an answer just now. The comment about her absent parents probably "getting stoned" was an obscure reference to the fact that canon Daneera came from a "world of stone and streets," as I once described it, referencing Pre-Clade Shambhala, but of course the implications for HS Daneera are very real. As with many collections, I suspect she got them from a variety of sources, but as for where it began, I haven't really decided yet.

If anyone has an idea for that story, feel free!

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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Just a short little HS check-in for the holidays. Enjoy!

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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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Great festive scene! Just seeing the new message notification on this topic raised my spirit, and now I'm a smiling like a dork :D Thank you very much for sharing!

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Great festive scene! Just seeing the new message notification on this topic raised my spirit, and now I'm a smiling like a dork :D Thank you very much for sharing!

Glad you enjoyed it! As has no doubt become painfully obvious, I very much have a soft spot for the antics of the M:EM High School students, and they seemed a perfect setting for a short little holiday special, so to speak.

Thanks for reading!


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 Post subject: Re: M:EM High School
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Ok, I had stopped at the origin of the name :V

Here's my festive contribution to the thread, which probably says how much do I care about Christmas :D

good and naughty

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