I'm almost a bit sad right now that Tey'von has just entered into the realm of Big Plans, because I think both he and Hara would enjoy to sit and have a good long conversation about what she believes and used to believe.
That would definitely be a fascinating encounter. And, who knows? It could still happen. Maybe it's the wrong season for it just now, but seasons change.
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Not quite sure where this one came from, but, here it is.
The War
Layna wasn’t sure when the baby had stopped crying.
Looking down, hardly daring to breathe, Layna struggled with frostbitten fingers to untie the thin shawl which she had wrapped around her sister’s tiny body, in a doomed effort to keep her warm. The baby’s eyes were closed, and her lips were blue. She was not moving.
Layna pressed her fingertips to the baby’s forehead, and she felt only cold.
She pinched the baby’s cheek, hoping to draw a reaction, any reaction. But the child lay still.
So Layna pinched her sister again. Harder, this time – as hard as she dared. She could feel herself holding her breath.
With a thin, rattling cry, the baby started, and began to stir. The child’s eyes did not open, but her lips parted slightly, and she convulsed in Layna’s arms.
Layna closed her eyes, said a silent prayer to the Gods, and allowed herself to exhale. Her breath turned to ice in the freezing air. She wrapped the shawl back around her sister, and she clutched the dying girl as tightly to her chest as she could, desperate to keep her small body warm.
Then Layna put her head down against the chill wind, she put one snow-caked foot in front of the other, and she walked.
She had been walking for three days. She had been walking ever since her mother had roused her from sleep, had dressed her in haste, and had hurried her down to the little wooded lane that ran past their farmhouse.
Although it was the dark of night, the horizon had been lit by the glow of fires and dancing smoke from just beyond the hills to the east.
“Go,” Layna’s mother had told her, as she had pressed her baby daughter into Layna’s shaking hands. “Take your sister, and go. Go west, into the rising sun. Follow the river road, until you reach Kerryclare – you should make the village in two days’ time. Find the man there named Olam, and tell him you are mine. He will look after you.”
In the distance, Layna could hear shouting, and the thunder of hootbeats. Even as tears streaked her own vision, she could see the fear in her mother’s eyes.
“Go!” her mother had said one last time, and had pushed Layna onto the path that led to the river. “Go! And don’t look back. Whatever happens next – whatever you may hear – don’t look back.”
Her mother might have said something else, then, but, if she did, Layna could not hear it over the sound of her own crying.
So Layna had started to walk, and she had not looked back.
That had been three days ago. Layna had stuck to the river road, as instructed, but there was still no village in sight.
Granted, the going had been slow. The road was deeply-rutted, and icy, and, more than once, Layna had tripped over some root or dead branch, half-hidden in the snow. Her knees were swollen and black with bruises, and Layna was afraid that one of her wrists was broken, but, somehow, when she had fallen, she had managed to protect her sister, and to take the brunt of the blow herself.
Getting back up was the hard part. It got harder each and every time.
So Layna walked more carefully now. She moved slowly, taking care to find her footing on the snow-slick ground with each hesitant step. It was manageable, but it was slow.
She hugged the treeline close, in hope that it might protect her from the worst of the winter wind. But it did little good. The breeze that blew in off the frozen, glassy river cut through her like a knife, until she was so cold that her teeth no longer chattered, and her wind-numbed fingertips no longer hurt. All the while she clutched her sister to her chest, tried to keep the baby warm, tried to keep both of them alive.
She knew she did not have much time. She needed to reach Kerryclare soon, or the frost would take them.
No one had come from the same way as they had, and the smell of smoke had faded away the day before.
Layna did not know what that meant. She had not looked back.
They had met almost no one on the road. On the first day, they had passed a cart which lay on its side in a ditch, one wheel turning forlornly in the wind. There was a body next to the cart, half-buried in the snow, and Layna had peeled-back the cloak which covered it, to look at the corpse beneath. But the frost-blackened face which peered back at her belonged to no one she knew, and, after she had lingered for a moment to say a short prayer, Layna had replaced the cloak, and had moved on.
The second day, she had come across a man, still alive, standing stone-still in the center of the road. At first, Layna had hidden among the pines, and had waited in vain for the man to pass by. But the man did not move. He simply stood there, in the center of the road, as though his feet were rooted in place, as he stared, silently, off into the distance.
Eventually, Layna had gathered the courage to approach the man. She had stood right in front of him – had spoken to him, even, had asked his name – but he had not spoken back. He just looked right through Layna, as though she were not there.
His face was a blank, and his eyes were a ghost’s. So Layna had left him there, in the center of the road.
She had kept on walking, and she had not looked back.
It was near dusk now, on her third day of walking. The sun was setting quickly below the treeline, and the sky was growing dark. Layna could hardly feel the cold anymore, which she knew to be bad. In her arms, her sister was stiff, and still.
There was a part of Layna that wanted nothing more than to sleep. To curl up beneath the shelter of one of the snow-laden pines, to dig herself a little hollow in one of the wind-blown drifts, and to sleep. Layna had not slept in days. Her body was tired, as was her spirit.
But there was another part of Layna that knew that she could not rest. Partly because she needed to keep walking, needed to reach the village. But mostly because she knew that, if she lay down now, if she closed her eyes, she would never open them again.
So Layna kept walking, and she was still walking when she saw a flickering light in the distance, and two hooded figures on the road.
Feeling panic rising in her throat, Layna scrambled off the road and into the bushes as she saw the figures approach. She was vaguely aware that she must have left footsteps behind in the snow, which would alert anyone who stopped to look to her presence, but she did not dare to go back to try to wipe her tracks clean. So, instead, she tried to hide herself as best she could among the evergreens, and she silently begged her sister to remain quiet as the strangers drew close.
The two white-hooded figures came to a stop in the road, just where Layna had stood, and Layna felt her heart catch in her throat. They were bathed in the glow from a strange, white light that seemed to hover above one of them, as the other dropped to its knees, and seemed to point a hand at something in the snow.
Layna felt frozen in place, too scared to cry. She knew she should run, but she knew she would not get far.
The kneeling figure stood, and pulled back its hood, and what Layna saw in the flickering fairy light made her start: She saw a black-haired woman, pale and ghostlike, with mismatched eyes – one green, one milky white – and a terrible scar that covered half of her face.
The scarred woman said something to her companion, who then pulled back her own hood, revealing a pink-cheeked face, with bright, blue eyes, and soft golden hair.
“It’s okay,” the golden-haired woman said, with a voice that sounded kind, and made Layna feel warm. “You can come out.”
The woman was facing towards the woods, and Layna felt as though she were looking right at her.
When Layna still didn’t dare to move, the other woman spoke.
“It’s okay,” the scarred woman repeated. “We won’t hurt you. We just want to help.”
Layna could feel the warmth radiating out from the two women and their light. In her arms, she could feel her infant sister stir.
The choice was simple, Layna knew. She could go into the light, and take her chance with the strangers. Or she could remain in the darkness, and freeze.
Slowly, carefully, Layna stood up from her hiding place in the bushes, and she picked her way back to the road.
Looks of concern blossomed on both women’s faces as Layna came into view. The light hovering above the golden-haired woman seemed to grow larger and brighter, until it bathed the snow-covered landscape in a soft, flickering glow. And the woman with the scar walked over to Layna and wrapped the shivering girl in her arms, until Layna found herself surrounded by a comforting warmth, as though she were lying next to the fireplace in her old home.
In her arms, Layna’s sister began to cry. And, as the heat that seemed to radiate out from the scarred woman’s body worked its way into Layna’s tired bones, Layna felt herself begin to cry, too.
“It’s alright,” the golden-haired woman said, as she dried Layna’s tears with the sleeve of her robe, and knelt down, so that her forehead touched Layna’s. “It’s all alright.”
Layna closed her eyes, and she cried.
“It’s all alright,” the woman said again.
And, in that moment, as she found herself surrounded by light and warmth, Layna believed her.
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Ahhh. I was really concerned at first that the baby was dead. Then I remember you were writing this and not me, so I felt a little better.
Anyway, I liked this a lot! I did not expect it to be about Beryl and Aloise at all. That was very well done. If anything, I expected Haru to show up, or I thought there was a slight chance this would wind up as the same plane that "Pariah" is set on, during the same war. But I really liked this! Thanks for sharing it with us!
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Loved how Beryl's warmth is described as nostalgic and vital; despite all the atrocities she must have seen on that plane I think helping others with her magic does a whole lot of good to our Aliavellian planeswalker.
(The beginning of the piece made me think Hara/Hari was about to pop out to help Layna, though the symbology in her last piece talked about the beginning of the spring.)
Nice work, OL, thank you for sharing!
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(The beginning of the piece made me think Hara/Hari was about to pop out to help Layna, though the symbology in her last piece talked about the beginning of the spring.)
Anyway, I liked this a lot! I did not expect it to be about Beryl and Aloise at all. That was very well done. If anything, I expected Haru to show up, or I thought there was a slight chance this would wind up as the same plane that "Pariah" is set on, during the same war.
That's so interesting -- and it must be telling that both your minds went to the same place!
The funny thing is, when this story sort of popped into my head, I wasn't thinking at all about Haru. But, now that you've both mentioned it, I can totally see how this piece has the feel of a Haru story to it. It's completely possible that she sort of subconsciously rubbed-off on this little story, without my really being aware of it. The mind is a funny thing like that.
Anyway, I'm glad that the sort of Beryl and Aloise "reveal" at the end worked okay, even though it wasn't intentionally supposed to be a fake-out, or anything like that. More than anything else, I think that this story was sort of a very loose meditation on the human capacity for both cruelty and kindness, and, whenever I think about the word "kindness," there's a certain blonde mage who sort of enters into my mind's eye. So I'm guessing that's why my imagination cast the characters here the way that it did. And, given that all my recent non-canon Beryl & Aloise shorts have been very narrowly focused on the relationship between the two of them, I think it was sort of nice for a change to pull the camera back a little bit, and to sort of see them interacting with the rest of the multiverse, instead of just with each other.
And I suppose that this could totally be set on the same plane as "Pariah" -- although I'm guessing that, for reasons of timeline, the titular war probably isn't the same one from Raven's wonderful story. This piece didn't really come with a setting attached -- the only details I had in mind are the ones in the piece: that it's winter, and there's some sort of war taking place. Which leaves a pretty wide range of possibilities.
And, of course, this is all non-canon, so that tends to keep things pretty loose, too.
Loved how Beryl's warmth is described as nostalgic and vital; despite all the atrocities she must have seen on that plane I think helping others with her magic does a whole lot of good to our Aliavellian planeswalker.
I think so, too. And I think that, more than anything else, sort of the message that I took away from this little scene is that, for all the capacity that we have to hurt each other, it can also take so, so little to make each other whole again -- just a little light, and a little warmth, as the case may be.
And, in a sense, that's really how I sort of think of Aloise and Beryl -- as light and warmth personified.
So, for Beryl, being reminded that fire can warm as well as it can destroy is always a balm for her soul, I think.
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@OL: I must admit that I almost simultaneously teared up and cheered out loud when I realized who the strangers on the road were. It took me a few moments, and I was a bit worried during those moments, so the realization was an extreme feelgood moment. Thank you, I needed that.
Now that this poll is officially over, it's time to congratulate Aaarrrgh for designing Hill, which has been decided by popular vote to be the Card of the Month for October 2013!
@OL: I must admit that I almost simultaneously teared up and cheered out loud when I realized who the strangers on the road were. It took me a few moments, and I was a bit worried during those moments, so the realization was an extreme feelgood moment. Thank you, I needed that.
Thanks for sharing that, Aaarrrgh -- it gives me a really good feeling to know that you enjoyed this story, and that it gave you a happy moment. I sort of can't think of a better reason to write than that.
Anyway, thanks again for reading -- it is deeply appreciated!
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For me, it was the day the tree stayed down. See, there was a coconut tree out by my uncle's hut, and he used to cut it down every day to get the coconuts. Sometimes we took a couple of leaves, too, when we needed them. But anyway, come morning, that tree would be standing right back up, with four or five new coconuts, as if nothing had happened.
Until one day it wasn't. I was young, perhaps up to Papa's elbow, and woke up to hear my uncle shouting. And sure, it wasn't his fault that there weren't any coconuts that day, but that didn't make Aunt Miresa feel any better about being unable to make her tovippa for dinner. We didn't starve, of course; we still had fish, and taro, and cassava, and papaya...
I miss papaya.
After seven or eight days, the tree was standing again, and my uncle made a ladder to get the coconuts, 'cause he didn't want to get yelled at ever again. But like you said, it just wasn't the same for me. What kind of a world was this that the tree could stay down? If that could happen, what else could? What if the sun didn't turn on one day?
So I guess I shouldn't have been surprised when my older brother went away. One morning, soon after he reached Mama's height, he was just gone. That was the night that Ryande and Petrista showed up, too, and I blamed them for a while, but Mama said that was foolish. People come, people go, she said. You'll see, she said.
I miss Mama.
I guess Ryande didn't want to accept our island as home at first, either. He made a boat one day, different from Papa's, and tried to paddle it back to his own island. Never made it, though; day after day, he ended up back in his hut. At first, it was because he'd gone in a circle and thought we were a different place, but then he figured out something that he said would let him go in a straight line, and paddled until he fell asleep. Woke up in his hut the next morning, though his boat was still gone, and refused to come out all day, until Petrista went in after dinner. I don't know what she said, but it seemed to make him happier, and at least he didn't try to leave again.
So no, I don't expect to get back home ever again. But it's okay; I have my own life here, with two darling children. And bananas. I don't know how I lived without bananas.
But some day, it'll be time for my children to go, and I don't know how to prepare them for that. Having everything you know disappear between one day and the next ... it was worse than the tree.
And you say you've gone through that how many times?
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One day, I was watching the snake who lives in a tank beneath our television, and wondered what it would feel like to be a pet. Granted, humans are more like guinea pigs than like snakes, so there would need to be a family together... and they'd probably be happier not knowing that they were pets...
So this appears to be a world where Djinn keep little human family groups on artificial tropical islands, trading them around as necessary. And to everyone involved, that's just how life works. Until a planeswalker comes bumbling in...
For me, it was the day the tree stayed down. See, there was a coconut tree out by my uncle's hut, and he used to cut it down every day to get the coconuts. Sometimes we took a couple of leaves, too, when we needed them. But anyway, come morning, that tree would be standing right back up, with four or five new coconuts, as if nothing had happened.
Until one day it wasn't. I was young, perhaps up to Papa's elbow, and woke up to hear my uncle shouting. And sure, it wasn't his fault that there weren't any coconuts that day, but that didn't make Aunt Miresa feel any better about being unable to make her tovippa for dinner. We didn't starve, of course; we still had fish, and taro, and cassava, and papaya...
I miss papaya.
After seven or eight days, the tree was standing again, and my uncle made a ladder to get the coconuts, 'cause he didn't want to get yelled at ever again. But like you said, it just wasn't the same for me. What kind of a world was this that the tree could stay down? If that could happen, what else could? What if the sun didn't turn on one day?
So I guess I shouldn't have been surprised when my older brother went away. One morning, soon after he reached Mama's height, he was just gone. That was the night that Ryande and Petrista showed up, too, and I blamed them for a while, but Mama said that was foolish. People come, people go, she said. You'll see, she said.
I miss Mama.
I guess Ryande didn't want to accept our island as home at first, either. He made a boat one day, different from Papa's, and tried to paddle it back to his own island. Never made it, though; day after day, he ended up back in his hut. At first, it was because he'd gone in a circle and thought we were a different place, but then he figured out something that he said would let him go in a straight line, and paddled until he fell asleep. Woke up in his hut the next morning, though his boat was still gone, and refused to come out all day, until Petrista went in after dinner. I don't know what she said, but it seemed to make him happier, and at least he didn't try to leave again.
So no, I don't expect to get back home ever again. But it's okay; I have my own life here, with two darling children. And bananas. I don't know how I lived without bananas.
But some day, it'll be time for my children to go, and I don't know how to prepare them for that. Having everything you know disappear between one day and the next ... it was worse than the tree.
And you say you've gone through that how many times?
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One day, I was watching the snake who lives in a tank beneath our television, and wondered what it would feel like to be a pet. Granted, humans are more like guinea pigs than like snakes, so there would need to be a family together... and they'd probably be happier not knowing that they were pets...
So this appears to be a world where Djinn keep little human family groups on artificial tropical islands, trading them around as necessary. And to everyone involved, that's just how life works. Until a planeswalker comes bumbling in...
I like this! I really dig the repeated "I miss..." theme and the underlying lack of understanding of what was going on. Granted, I didn't get the sense of a mystic terrarium, but I like it. I also really liked the beginning of the piece, with the thing with the tree that wouldn't stay down. That was nicely done.
Granted, I didn't get the sense of a mystic terrarium, but I like it.
Fair enough; part of that could be that I tried not to let the people inside feel too trapped. I tried to throw in a few hints, but for some reason, though that was the inspiration for the piece, I didn't feel like it needed to be the focus. Perhaps another day.
I also really liked the beginning of the piece, with the thing with the tree that wouldn't stay down. That was nicely done.
Based on a true story. Okay, so it was a corn snake pulling down the plastic tree that he'd gotten too big to climb, and it's now more of a ground cover because I long ago stopped bothering to put it back up, but that's as much truth as certain movies have, right?
Generated by boredom and the "What Card Am I Thinking Off" (sic) Thread...
Worry Beads
Her fingers ran over the worry beads. Supposedly, counting them would calm her mind. One, two, three, four... They were lovely, a russet coral color, the long string winding around her throat several times, loops cascading over her body, the lowest hoops flicked back and forth by her tail as she treaded water. One hundred eighty six, one hundred eighty seven, one hundred eighty eight... They had been a gift, and a kind one at that, to salve her worries in this time when they were too many. She should have followed Galina to Etlan Shiis, that would have been safer than staying with her father here in chill Vodalia. One thousand three hundred sixty three, one thousand three hundred sixty four, one thousand three hundred sixty five... Even the advantages worried her – her father had possibly damned them for promotion to kingship, and of what? Once the capital of the empire, a post second only to the Empress herself, but now the city behind her was empty of all but the old, the sick, the desperate, and the mad. Those who could not journey through the portal, or who would not for their pride. Thirteen thousand six hundred forty nine, Thirteen thousand six hundred fifty, Thirteen thousand six hundred fifty one... And now she, a princess of Vodalia however recently granted such rank, had to keep watch from the outer wall for the approach of their enemy. The Homarids would come, whether they were senseless brutes like her father said or beings of terrible alien intelligence as she feared, they would come, swimming on the icy currents, scuttling across the sea floor, a tide of shells and pinchers against which Vodalia had won no lasting victory. And now those who remained were so few that their princess kept watch at the outer wall for the moment she would call on Svyelun's pearl light to shine through the beacon and call her father's warriors and mages to battle. Two hundred sixty four thousand three hundred thirty seven... so many worries! So long this watch! So lonely! One hundred thirty eight bill... Something there! No, her eyes were playing tricks on her. One... One... One? How many? She had lost count. Her fingers ran over the beads again. Such a kind gift from a stranger, and how strange a stranger at that, an air-breather come down to her father's court. One, two, three, four...
About her spread an ancient desolation, many-columned Old Vodalia in fallen blocks along the sea floor behind her gaze, and before it the lonely mud of an abyssal plain unpeopled since unfathomable antiquity. The highest barnacle-crusted rubble was the very tower in which she floated, the steady current of her flicking tail having long worn away the stone behind but left the facade before her view. In that view it was still the eve of apocalypse, but it had come and gone, and others besides – the Homarids, who tore down that city of their rivals however late they came for its true mistress, had let her be, too frightened by her senseless mouthing of the counting of beads. Ice had crusted over the waves above, then after an age of holding land and sea in thrall broken apart and melted into nothing at last. The Phyrexians had not noticed her, floating silent in her place of no strategic import, Karona's coming and going in distant Otaria had not earned her notice even as mana itself reeled from the enormity of events, and even when the time rifts opened before her eyes a second view of the Homarid armies approaching Vodalia long ago, she had not seen them, and for the second time failed to light the alarm.
She did not shake from her nervous, impossible, immortal vigil even when the land-walker who had given her the worry beads returned. He floated before her, swam around her, surveyed the stately wreckage of the surroundings. He watched her fingers play over the beads, locked gaze with her intent yet vacant forward stare, read the words that silently crossed her lips, committed to perfect memory the beauty of her being and especially the tragedy of her failure. As he made ready to leave, Æther trembling around him, she almost saw him. Her eyes focused, just for a second, the agitated movement of her fingers stopped cold, her lips pursed, no longer mouthing a count that had not paused for more than four millennia. He waited, and then the moment passed. She fingered the beads, and began to mouth numbers again, that ageless prayer for some relief from her worries. It seemed she had lost her count, though, and was starting again from 'one'. There it was, that one touch that made it worth his while. For Raiker Venn, the Multiverse's greatest poet, north of four thousand years was not too long to wait for the perfect subject. He planeswalked away, to a drier place where he might compose what he had seen.
Again the cold seas were lonely, flowing by as heedless of her as she was of them. Sixteen, seventeen, eighteen...
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@Worry Beads: That sheds new light onto Erik's potential plight, doesn't it? Considering that it's impossible to count to even one billion within a single mortal lifetime, losing count at over one hundred thirty-eight of them could have been devastating. I suspect that "beings terrible alien intelligence" is missing something, though.
For my part, I swear I'll get to the meat of the story sometime, but for now:
The Where
The senior druid trotted to the front of the herd and raised his arms, looking up toward the dawn. “Reach up to feel the currents of the sky,” he intoned.
Lenara smiled as she matched his motions. She liked this one, especially the part where they all held hands at the end.
“The winds bring rain to water grass and trees,” the druid continued.
Lenara caught her youngest sister mouthing the words as the verse went on. Mayen had grown so big since their father disappeared. Soon enough, she'd stop needing someone to watch her back.
“Reach down to feel the life within the soil.”
As Lenara dug a hoof under the grass, she saw a bug curl up and roll away, as if that would protect it from her full weight. What would that protect it from, anyway? Something its own size, perhaps.
“The trees—”
Lenara's attention snapped back up as the druid froze.
“The trees are concerned,” he said, gazing into the woods beside them.
Mayen looked up at her sister. “That's not how it goes,” she whispered.
“I know,” Lenara replied. “Something's wrong.”
The lead mare walked up to the druid and asked something, in a voice too low to hear over similar mutters among the rest of the herd.
Mayen grabbed Lenara's hand. “What's going on?”
“I don't know, sweetie. We'll have to find out.”
The lead mare raised her hands and waited for the crowd to hush. “Our friends and neighbors help in times of need,” she said, skipping straight to the end. “Someone needs our help. Pack your tents; we're heading south.”
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I commented on this over in the other thread, but I like it! I love the implication that Raiker is willing to spend millennia all to set up a poem about a simple, if tragic, distraction. Good old Raiker!
@The Where
Interesting stuff. We don't get a lot of information here, but I really like the glimpse at the druids' communal ritual here. It will be interesting to see how this fits into the larger storyline that we have, so far, only seen glimpses of.
I'm thinking of putting Worry Beads up for a vote, Raven would you be OK with that?
Also, the "one hundred thirty eight billion" number wasn't totally random! It's in the ballpark for the number of seconds from the fall of Old Vodalia to 100 years post-Mending (the assumed 'present' of core canon)
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I'm thinking of putting Worry Beads up for a vote, Raven would you be OK with that?
Also, the "one hundred thirty eight billion" number wasn't totally random! It's in the ballpark for the number of seconds from the fall of Old Vodalia to 100 years post-Mending (the assumed 'present' of core canon)
I have no problem with the story going up for vote, though it might be a good idea to slow down with the stuff you're putting up in general. Due to grading and various other issues, I haven't even had a chance to read your two latest stories yet, and probably won't for another week. I need a root canal tomorrow, and will likely be out of it for the next few days, so there's virtually no way I'll be able to get to "Where Angels Fear to Tread" before the deadline, and you already have four other pieces waiting for votes as it is.
So I have no problem with the story going up, I would just hold off a week or two.
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Heh, I was wondering if I was flooding things problematically.
Good luck with the root canal. ouch.
I don't think it's been problematic on your end, just thata lot of us have had stuff on our plates. I should apologize too since I've not gotten around to it either.
and likewise, good luck Raven. Here's hoping they give you the stuff that'll really zonk you out.
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At twilight's end, the shadow's crossed / a new world birthed, the elder lost. Yet on the morn we wake to find / that mem'ry left so far behind. To deafened ears we ask, unseen / "Which is life and which the dream?"
I need a root canal tomorrow, and will likely be out of it for the next few days, so there's virtually no way I'll be able to get to "Where Angels Fear to Tread" before the deadline, and you already have four other pieces waiting for votes as it is.
I don't think it's been problematic on your end, just thata lot of us have had stuff on our plates.I should apologize too since I've not gotten around to it either.
I have been similarly delinquent -- I am so far behind on recent M:EM stuff at the moment.
The last new piece I read was Raven's last Denner story, and the most I managed in the form of a comment was basically: "Yup, it's great!"
Which is not exactly a thorough reaction...
Tevish, I'm super sorry -- I haven't made it through any of your recent work. It's on my list of Things That Must Be Done And Will Be Done, so it will be done. It has just been on said list for much longer than I would have liked, and I feel pretty rotten about that.
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Thanks, everyone. I appreciate the thoughts, but it's ultimately not that big of a deal. Sadly, both of my parents have always had bad teeth, and I very much inherited them. Let's just say that this isn't the first time I've sat in that chair and gone under the drill. All things considered, while it's not what I would like to be doing tomorrow, there are far worse things that could be happening.
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