It is currently Thu Nov 28, 2024 7:41 am

All times are UTC - 6 hours [ DST ]




Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 3 posts ] 

Fade?
Poll ended at Mon Mar 21, 2016 2:31 am
Yea: 75%  75%  [ 3 ]
Nay: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Not As Is: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Abstain: 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 4
Total voters : 4
Author Message
 Post subject: [Vote] [Microfic] Fade
PostPosted: Sat Mar 12, 2016 2:31 am 
Offline
Member
User avatar

Joined: Sep 22, 2013
Posts: 11080
Title: Fade
Author: RavenoftheBlack
Status: Public

This is for the voting week of March 13-19.

Fade


Like this post
Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 9:32 pm 
Offline
Member
User avatar

Joined: Nov 04, 2013
Posts: 5157
I recall very much liking this back when you posted it, Raven! And, unsurprisingly, I still very much like it now!

"Yea" from me.

_________________
"And remember, I'm pullin' for ya, 'cause we're all in this together." - Red Green


Like this post
Top
 Profile  
 
PostPosted: Sun Mar 20, 2016 5:10 pm 
Offline
Member

Joined: Aug 04, 2014
Posts: 1452
Identity: human
Preferred Pronoun Set: he
Are nit-picks ever a good thing?

The opening paragraph is very good.



"... on the small plate below it, a relic of...

I guess I would use a "." and then start with " Relics..."

This is a poignant piece.

Very touching!

Yea, from me.


Like this post
Top
 Profile  
 
Display posts from previous:  Sort by  
Post new topic Reply to topic  [ 3 posts ] 

All times are UTC - 6 hours [ DST ]


You cannot post new topics in this forum
You cannot reply to topics in this forum
You cannot edit your posts in this forum
You cannot delete your posts in this forum
You cannot post attachments in this forum

Jump to:  
Powered by phpBB® Forum Software © phpBB Group