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Shall the Horizon Drake fly?
Poll ended at Mon Nov 23, 2015 9:27 pm
Yea: 75%  75%  [ 3 ]
Nay: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Not As Is: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Abstain: 25%  25%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 4
Total voters : 4
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PostPosted: Sat Nov 14, 2015 9:27 pm 
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Title: Horizon Drake
Poet: RavenoftheBlack
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Word Count: 165

Horizon Drake


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PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2015 8:57 pm 
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Very very good. Quite an inspiring piece. Great imagery.

I don't like the "mother Cubs" line because it slows the flow of the read.

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PostPosted: Sun Nov 15, 2015 8:58 pm 
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PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 11:07 pm 
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And this one, I think, was from when you were randomly rolling Gatherer to find cards to write poems about?

(God, I hope I'm not fabricating all these memories...)

"Yea" from me!

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PostPosted: Wed Nov 18, 2015 11:12 pm 
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And this one, I think, was from when you were randomly rolling Gatherer to find cards to write poems about?

(God, I hope I'm not fabricating all these memories...)

"Yea" from me!

Yes, this was a random Gatherer card poem. Many of mine are, to be honest.

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I am always in favor of more poetry in the archive, and this piece is solid, evocative, and in line with the canon flavor of the card. Clear yea.

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