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Purified Loxodon Creature — Elephant Soldier [R] ~ has trample and lifelink as long as it is 4/4. "Set aside your cold steel; I do not require armaments. I rely on my faith and my faith alone, and it will carry me through any trials and tribulations I face." 4/4
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Purified Loxodon Creature — Elephant Soldier [R] Trample, lifelink Protection from spells and abilities "Set aside your cold steel; I do not require armaments. I rely on my faith and my faith alone, and it will carry me through any trials and tribulations I face." 4/4
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Gehennah, true kings of poseur-slaying wrote:
Suddenly she stood there close to me, a woman too grotesque to even be I felt quite dim but I was still aware, that I was too drunk to see or care I said "Baby, metal is what I need; not some bloody ***** to feed" She looked at me with stupid eyes, then I gave her my advice
"Piss off, I'm drinking! Piss off, or die! Piss off, I'm drinking! Piss off, or die!"
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Perfect originality is overrated and often ugly. The best and most beautiful cards I've ever seen were clearly inspired by something else. Cards are not entirely unlike living organisms in this regard. All the good ones are a result of long evolution; the 'original' ones are either mono-cellular or mutant aberrations.
Cato
A true warrior seeks out the greatest foe. Their heart cries out for glorious battle, heedless even to its own end.
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I think you're right, ****. Changed.
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Gehennah, true kings of poseur-slaying wrote:
Suddenly she stood there close to me, a woman too grotesque to even be I felt quite dim but I was still aware, that I was too drunk to see or care I said "Baby, metal is what I need; not some bloody ***** to feed" She looked at me with stupid eyes, then I gave her my advice
"Piss off, I'm drinking! Piss off, or die! Piss off, I'm drinking! Piss off, or die!"
Grades: PeregrineV Elegance: 25/25 There is an interesting tension between sunburst and domain, in that sunburst is easier to obtain through artificial means, but domain requires the natural rainbow. Balance: 4/5 I'm pretty sure a 10/10 on turn 5 is insane, but to cast such a creature, the mana mix is rather hard to obtain. Nevertheless, I'm pretty sure it's possible with green land fetching, and perhaps earlier than turn 5 at that. Ice-cream-hat-on-a-pug-ness: 4/5 see below Follows criteria: 1/5 It's almost the same ability, so the synergy is almost non-existent. like "Scry 2, then look at the top two cards of your libary." Flavor: 2/5 Not much there, other than a reference to the Etched Oracle Total: 36/45
Thanks for the grade.
I did see synergy, and that synergy allows a possible 10/10 on turn 5, esp. if you were to build it with that specific purpose in mind. And it's not too bad considering you can get that on turn 3 currently using only one color.
Okay, I see that the criterion wasn't clear. I mean, make a creature whose mechanics depend on it being a certain power and toughness. For instance the mechanics don't work together if it is a 3/3 instead of a 2/2. Due to the confusion over what I was asking for, this round will end on 10/31/13
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I changed my card yet again to reflect the clarification in the criteria.
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Gehennah, true kings of poseur-slaying wrote:
Suddenly she stood there close to me, a woman too grotesque to even be I felt quite dim but I was still aware, that I was too drunk to see or care I said "Baby, metal is what I need; not some bloody ***** to feed" She looked at me with stupid eyes, then I gave her my advice
"Piss off, I'm drinking! Piss off, or die! Piss off, I'm drinking! Piss off, or die!"
Genetic Schism Creature - Ooze Genetic Schism ignores power and toughness modifiers. (For itself and other cards.) Occasionally nature nods to perfection. 5/5
Perfect originality is overrated and often ugly. The best and most beautiful cards I've ever seen were clearly inspired by something else. Cards are not entirely unlike living organisms in this regard. All the good ones are a result of long evolution; the 'original' ones are either mono-cellular or mutant aberrations.
Cato
A true warrior seeks out the greatest foe. Their heart cries out for glorious battle, heedless even to its own end.
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Perfect originality is overrated and often ugly. The best and most beautiful cards I've ever seen were clearly inspired by something else. Cards are not entirely unlike living organisms in this regard. All the good ones are a result of long evolution; the 'original' ones are either mono-cellular or mutant aberrations.
Cato
A true warrior seeks out the greatest foe. Their heart cries out for glorious battle, heedless even to its own end.
Tevish Szat Elegance: 25/25 Balance: 5/5 Ice-cream-hat-on-a-pug-ness: 5/5 Follows criteria: 3/5 While it does comply with one interpretation of the rules, it still doesn't mechanically depend on being a 1/1 Flavor: 5/5 Pretty solid. Total: 43/45
PlaneShaper Elegance: 25/25 Balance: 5/5 A little on the edge, but wotc seems to like that nowadays. Ice-cream-hat-on-a-pug-ness: 5/5 Follows criteria: 3/5 I realise it was unclear, but I did clarify a little later. Flavor: 4/5 Punks. Total: 42/45
dtolle Elegance: 25/25 Balance: 5/5 Ice-cream-hat-on-a-pug-ness: 5/5 Follows criteria: 5/5 YES. Flavor: 4/5 If you could put some flavor text on, or maybe have the name indicate how it needs to transform to blow up, that'd be good. Total: 44/45
Imidazoline Elegance: 25/25 Balance: 2/5 This is could be fun in a deck that wipes the board regularly, but otherwise really terrible. Ice-cream-hat-on-a-pug-ness: 5/5 Follows criteria: 2/5 I don't think I was that unclear... Flavor: 3/5 the flavor text describes the opposite of what is going on. Total: 40/45
PeregrineV Elegance: 25/25 Balance: 5/5 It's interesting; you don't want multiples of this guy out. kinda unusual for lord effects, but good. Ice-cream-hat-on-a-pug-ness: 5/5 Follows criteria: 5/5 Flavor: 5/5 Total: 45/45
Dudibus Elegance: 25/25 Balance: 5/5 Ice-cream-hat-on-a-pug-ness: 5/5 This is really cool. Really really cool. Follows criteria: 3/5 Does not follow the criteria all that well. Flavor: 5/5 Total: 43/45
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