I'm still hoping you might answer the questions I posed (which was: My first question would be what was the removal? Then I'm curious about how often you were able to develop a creature and what P/T they were at when removed? I'm just guessing in some cases Ordeal may have helped?)
Let me know how it goes, elk, but I think there are too many targetting effects and not enough things to target. I think if you want to play Ordeal that Coordinated Assault has to go and I personally like assault way better. Here is where I will be testing from:
In the grand scheme of things, this is only a suggestion of 2 cards different from your original version. -2 Mentor, +2 Asha's Favor.In the version I'm suggesting, there are 18 valid targets normally and 2 more if you're desperate.
Coordinated Assault and Gods Willing are typically response based (or at least have multiple functions) so should be used and viewed differently than the auras. Meaning you have 9 auras (6 of which get your dudes into the air) and 7 tricks (4 of which save these investments).
Granted if you can get to a game where Mentor is online and you still have Brimaz or Rabblemaster on board, then you should already be winning. You've got several aggressive T1,T2 and T3 creature plays with options for auras and triggered affects that should be played first before this card draw set up anyway (which is why I keep considering Mentor a later play). If we're talking T3 Rabble or Brimaz followed by T4 Mentor to start your draw, then the opponent didn't have answers in hand and most likely is already losing before you started this (and I go back to you playing more aggressively to pressure out the game).
Again, I'll say in my testing of this deck; it plays 1 to 3 creatures, suits them up and beats down. If the opponent can address your creatures right away, than it's typically too late to turn it around (and you're probably up against midrange or control style decks that will have better late games than you anyway). If they can't, you win.
Having said that, I'll continue to test the change and let ya know.
elk