Decided to start writing again. Most of my writing is about music but I suppose I'll start doing it about Magic again soon.

Here is my most recent post: http://etiologyofennui.tumblr.com/post/ ... ick-lamaar

It's about the current state of Rap music, I guess.

Not so much about the state of current rap/hip-hop as it is about Kendrick Lamaar and Logic and what they are doing. You focus only on those two,while giving the rest of the genre a slight nod to it's existence. What I walk with from your blog is that you like Kendrick Lamaar.

Well, only thing I can think of is you missing the point.

You dismiss the top 40 rap and top 40 hip hop by calling them and i quote "a hollow shell" and focus on only two artist. So basically your opinion which i didn't miss the point of boils to down "it currently sucks but this person is doing this stuff" you sparkle your blog with your opinion, which could have been covered in the first paragraph, and then the rest of the article could have been done in a style of "But on the bright side blah blah"

The majority of your blog is indeed about what Kendrick Lamaar and Logic are doing. so i stand by my statement

It's cool that you think you know what I think but really don't feel like talking to you about this. I don't respect your opinions about anything to be honest so I don't feel that it's worth discussing with you.

I wrote something about magical cards: http://etiologyofennui.tumblr.com/post/ ... rospective

I don't know if that belongs in the creative corner unless you're looking for a critique of your writing style. It would feel more at home in the magic general or constructed forums.

Critique of writing style. I think my content and ideas is fine but my writing is unrefined and needs a lot of work.

Really?

I mean, commenting on grammatical errors doesn't refute my thoughts and opinions so, sure homeslice.

It was a good-natured rib, I thought the smiley gave that away. I like homeslice, though.

i made the post when i was going to sleep and i just got up

content and ideas ARE fine

It's okay, I went to college. I got this, guys.

You shore?

new post: http://etiologyofennui.tumblr.com/post/ ... uis-nobody

my respect for user: Shadowchu has gone up quite a lot after reading that last entry

The **** that's going on for you is heartbreaking. Hang in there, man.

Got a new post I just wrote: http://etiologyofennui.tumblr.com/post/ ... ood-racism

okay!

Your writing's gotten much more polished in a very short time.