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PostPosted: Tue Sep 16, 2014 11:18 pm 
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Having already done a couple of Jakkard-related microfics, I'm finding myself tempted by the notion of doing a few more in order to bring the total up to six, and them grouping them together as a six-shooter. (Hat tip to Raven, whose idea I may or may not be blatantly stealing lovingly appropriating.)

Which leads me to ask -- are there any characters or scenarios which people would like to see in a Jakkard microfic? I don't have anything specifically in mind at the moment, so any and all ideas are welcome.

I'd like to see something from that Nog what drove the train. (Sorry, I've been watching a TON of Monty Python the last few days.) But seriously, a slice-of-life moment from that guy would be pretty neat. Or how about that first guy who signed his rail property over to Jackie? What's he been up to? Or, of course, anything with Trotter trying to get Jackie to dance again... :D


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PostPosted: Tue Sep 16, 2014 11:38 pm 
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Which leads me to ask -- are there any characters or scenarios which people would like to see in a Jakkard microfic? I don't have anything specifically in mind at the moment, so any and all ideas are welcome.

I have had an idea sort of floating around for a while. I've half started it a number of times, but never quite gotten to the point of bothering to follow through.
It plays on the idea of the specter in magic, and more specifically The Ghost Riders (of the "in the sky" fame).
I even managed to come up with a really good set piece for the drama to play out on, but I could never bother to climb into the nameless extra's head.

I have one or two others that I've sort of been toying with, but they haven't been as strong.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 11:00 am 
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So... this was not the story I set out to write.

But it came into my mind, and then I felt like I had to get it written down, so that I could get it out of there.

Trigger warning for child abuse.

The Cure

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 11:39 am 
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Yikes. That wasn't a pleasant read. Well done, though, and I think it's a good expansion of what we know of Jakkard's religious customs from other stuff. And... yeah, wow, this sure does provide some context for the final story in the series eh?


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 11:43 am 
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Yeah... I won't say "I'm glad you enjoyed it," or anything like that, because I sure as heck didn't enjoy it. I'm not sure "enjoy" is on the menu. But thanks for reading.

And, yeah, just another little peak behind that particular closed door. Did not make me a happy camper to see what was back there.

* * *

EDIT: Heard Jackie's voice in my head a moment ago, and it cheered me back up.

"Living well is the best revenge," she told me. "But blowing that damnable place up was a close second."

Then she cracked me a smile and winked.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 6:02 pm 
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Since all the ones I've done so far have been downers (not intentional, but oh well...), here's something a little bit different.

Hat tip to Raven.

The Switch

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 8:09 pm 
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I like Shakes :D That was a fun read.

I also like how these short stories keep getting progressively longer :P

Ah, we've got such an interesting stable of characters and it's so cool to see them explored through these little moments...


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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 9:06 pm 
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I like Shakes :D That was a fun read.

I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Keeper! I like Shakes, too. Honestly, one of my favorites lines in all the Jackie stories is when Shakes introduces himself by saying: "My friends call me Shakes, on account of the shaking." It's a silly little line, but it's honest, and it makes me smile.

I also like how these short stories keep getting progressively longer :P

Look over there!

*points one way, runs the other*

I'm keeping the next one under 500 words, I swear on a stack.

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PostPosted: Wed Sep 17, 2014 11:14 pm 
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Ah, we've got such an interesting stable of characters and it's so cool to see them explored through these little moments...

I just wish we had more notable planar natives, but that plane that is nipping at Phostus's heels should fill that in, hopefully. I have a very clear idea for a character that is a planar native.

And she's a black aligned protagonist!

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 11:12 am 
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Okay, so, maybe not under 500 words. But under 700!

The Admission


EDIT: Belated hat tip to Ruwin, for putting this image in my mind some time ago.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 2:30 pm 
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And here's the sixth and final bullet.

The Point


* * *

I'll group all the stories down here. I'm actually pretty excited by how these turned out. Not sure how well they cohere together as a group, but individually I like the variety.

A Jakkard Six-Shooter

The Vow


The Drop


The Cure


The Switch


The Admission


The Point

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 2:50 pm 
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@The Admission: So THAT'S where she got that gun... I always wondered, even as I made her blow a hole in those buildings...

@The Point: >:]

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 2:52 pm 
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@The Admission: So THAT'S where she got that gun... I always wondered, even as I made her blow a hole in those buildings...

Was hoping you might like that. :)

* * *

Also, just because:

The Dazie Cutter
Legendary Artifact - Equipment [M]


~ enters play with 10 charge counters on it.
Creatures with power of 4 or less cannot equip ~.

Equip
Equipped creature gets ", remove a charge counter from ~: ~ deals 4 damage to target creature."

Short on subtlety. Long on stopping power.

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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 8:34 pm 
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I like this little grouping. It does a lot to flesh out the minor characters, and I love anything we see of Jackie's gang basically. I could read about them all day.


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PostPosted: Thu Sep 18, 2014 9:44 pm 
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I like this little grouping. It does a lot to flesh out the minor characters, and I love anything we see of Jackie's gang basically. I could read about them all day.

Thanks, Keeper. Hearing that puts a big, goofy smile on my face.

(Really, all of my smiles are goofy, I guess. Some of them are just bigger and/or goofier than others.)

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The rewrite of The King's Gambit is coming... Eventually. Last night, I was playing around with the generator and got a prompt about Vasilias drunkenly planeswalking to Cyrea. I laughed, amused, and then clicked to generate another prompt. A couple minutes later, I realized that that could actually work. And then this happened:

Mortality


And now I see that I have a lot to catch up on here.

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So, I've been grading papers all day, and decided to take a quick, 20 minute break to write something. This is what happened as a direct result:

Writer’s Block


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PostPosted: Sun Sep 21, 2014 1:31 pm 
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@ Mortality


@ Writer's Block

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@The Switch
I liked this one. It is nice to see one that ends on a good note, given how many downers there are. I'm also a little curious whether he became a driver for real later on or if this was the day he encountered Jackie.

@The Admission
Cool. With all these microfics with Jackie's gang, I'm really starting to believe they could hold their own full stories, even without Jackie there.

@The Point
SHE KNOWS! I guess Red's school for the next generation of criminals isn't going to last very long.

@Writer's Block
I had to read this twice to get what was happening. A third time to get the pun at the end. Well done. :)

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I'm glad you enjoyed the stories, Moonbeam!

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I liked this one. It is nice to see one that ends on a good note, given how many downers there are. I'm also a little curious whether he became a driver for real later on or if this was the day he encountered Jackie.

Yeah, this was a fun one to do. Shakes does in fact get himself promoted to engineer after this; roughly speaking, this story takes place about six years before he meets Jackie, since he tells her that's how long he has been driving trains for Brax when she offers him a change of employment. So, a glimpse of the younger Shakes, if you will.


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Cool. With all these microfics with Jackie's gang, I'm really starting to believe they could hold their own full stories, even without Jackie there.

That was a big part of the fun for me in doing these micro stories. Up until now, the only member of Jackie's gang who we've ever had a POV experience with was Mister Sharps. So it was an interesting experience to slip into the shoes of some of the other troublemakers for a while, and see what the world looked like from their perspectives. In this case, it was very strange to see Dazie have something resembling a tender moment, but it turned out to nice to see her and Presto bury the hatchet -- at least for now.

I hope that we've seen just enough from these characters now that people could revisit them if they wanted to, and have at least some information to go off of, but that there's enough blank canvas left for us to still discover new things about them.


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SHE KNOWS! I guess Red's school for the next generation of criminals isn't going to last very long.

She does know.

I think it was inevitable. There are too many moving pieces -- to many human pieces -- involved in Red's operation for it to remain secret forever. And we know that Lucy is very talented at finding things out when she wants to.

That being said, I'm not sure I'd jump to the same conclusion. This is certainly an ominous development, if you care about Jackie's peaceful retirement. But I do think there is a reason that Lucy doesn't just hop on the next train east, and it's not just a question of letting the sword hang for a little while. I think that attacking Jackie DeCoeur on her home turf is something that I, for one, would be very, very reticent to do. Jackie is a planner, and she's smart. She knows that there are people out there who want to hurt her, and she'll have taken steps to protect herself. For starters, I would assume that Hush-Hush have done some extensive work on and around the ranch, and the husher twins are very good at what they do. I'm not sure what protections or traps they would have laid down, and I would not want to find out by springing one.

We've seen what Lucy can do when she sets her mind to hurting or killing someone, and she frightens the bejeezus out of me. But Jackie can be very lethal, too. Especially when the people she cares about are being threatened. And I can get a glimpse in my mind of what Jackie would be like if Lucy or anyone else was threatening to hurt Trotter or any of the kids on that ranch, and the flashes I see of Jackie frighten the bejeezus out of me, too. I see red eyes moving through the shadows, I see a muzzle flash coming from where you least expect it, and I see someone getting very, very dead.

I don't claim to know who that someone would be. As Jackie herself would say, once the bullets start flying, anything can happen. But I think that very ambiguity would make even a black-eyed demon bent on revenge think a second thought.

Anyway, I myself don't have any plan to ever fire this particular Chekhov's gun. But I get a little tingle of excitement just knowing that it's up there on the mantle.

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