This was an idea that I had, and I would like to apologize to Barinellos in advance, and ask him not to smite me.
The King's Gambit
Vasilias stood in the doorway, a wooden scepter in his right hand, waiting anxiously for the woman opposite him to make some move to acknowledge his presence. Instead, she simply continued to stare blankly out the window. Annoyed, he lifted his scepter off the floor, and slammed it back down again, creating an audible thud.
And she continued staring.
She knew he was here, and she knew who he was. He had no doubt about that. And yet, she continued to ignore him as if he was nothing more than an insect. The audacity. Had she been anyone else in the whole damned multiverse, Vasilias would have struck her down in an instant for such a blatant insult against him. Even now, he could feel his rage building up inside him with each breath that he took, fierce, consuming and uncontrollable, like the blizzards that ravage the lands of Aralheim.
He had to keep it in check.
The Duchess wasn’t just anyone else, he reminded himself. She was a being of immense power and might, possibly existing since the ages of Flayer and the boat. If this meeting turned into a physical confrontation, he wasn’t sure that he would be able to come out on top.
“Paziru.” Vasilias stated at last, his powerful voice shattering the silence about them.
“Ah.” The Duchess said, turning to look the King of Countless Worlds directly in the eyes, an action that somehow managed to send a shiver down his spine. “That.” The Duchess stepped towards him, with a calculated grace.
“I assure you, I was equally displeased by the developments on that plane as yourself.” The Duchess offered what was likely intended to be a reassuring smile, but even as her lips curled, her eyes remained static, as if moving in concert with the rest of her face was something they simply could not be bothered to do.
“Developments!” Vasilias growled, his fist clenching tightly around his scepter. “Is that what you call half a plane lying in ruins?” He snapped, no longer making any effort to disguise his outrage. “Hundreds of thousands of innocents are lying dead in the streets due to your machinations!”
“Something which you surely are aware that I had nothing to do with.” She paused. “You are aware of who was responsible, are you not?”
“Do not think me oblivious to your games, Duchess. I am fully aware.” Vasilias glared at the woman. “You manipulated the situation on Peziru so that the only way your playmate could stop your plans was to destroy the entire plane, then you made sure that there was a clear trail of evidence leading back to him. Not so much that it looked planted, of course. Then you expected me to kill him for you.” Her expression remained unchanged.
“You certainly have a wild imagination, your highness.” The Duchess said, taking another step towards him with that mechanical grace of hers. A lesser man than he would have been intimidated. “It is something I would implore you to get a handle over.”
“I think my imagination is just fine.” The king’s smile was wicked and predatory. “You, on the other hand, made the mistake of taking me for a pawn in your games. You figured me too ignorant to figure out your plan and too weak to pose a threat to you. You underestimated me on both fronts.”
Vasilias held out his left hand, and opened it to reveal a small artifact. Above the device, it projected the image of a metallic sphere, slightly larger than a human head, with several small holes around the surface that appeared impossibly black. For just an instant, a fraction of a second before she was able to regain her composure, Vasilias seen the woman’s expression change. Not just the forced, mechanical expressions she normally showed, but something real. Whether concern, outright fear, or something entirely different, he couldn’t be sure, but he knew it was there. And he wasn’t going to waste his new-found momentum.
“You know what this is, don’t you?” Her expression revealed nothing, turned back to the mask it had been, but he had already gotten his answer. “Then you also know its power. With only one of these, I can unravel the fabric of an entire plane.” Vasilias moved to the Duchess, until they were practically nose to nose. “I have six in my possession. And I’m willing to bet that I can use them to create more if the need arises.”
“Get to your point, Vasilias.” The Duchess said coldly.
“The point, is that I know the games you play, and the planes you play them on. If I ever have even the slightest reason to believe that either you or your playmate are operating anywhere in my empire, then I will obliterate every single world that either of you have ever set foot on. And then, when all of your mana bonds have been shattered, and the two of you are left weak and powerless…” The king’s magic flowed into his scepter, turning it to solid gold. Then, he squeezed it in his fist. The golden rod snapped in half, each of the two pieces hitting the floor with a metallic clang. The fact that the Duchess didn’t wince, flinch, or otherwise acknowledge the gesture only served to infuriate Vasilias further.
“And how, might I ask, am I to be expected to account for his actions?” The Duchess inquired with only the slightest bit of annoyance, as if the king’s threats were nothing more than a minor inconvenience.
“Convince him.”
She considered.
“If I were to accept, would I be correct in presuming that you would also not interfere with any of the planes in which we are conducting operations?” The Duchess asked.
“Of course.” Vasilias managed through clenched teeth, his failure to get under her skin beginning to get under his own. The concession itself was a small one, and one that he had expected to make.
“It is an acceptable offer.” The Duchess nodded after another moment’s consideration. “Very well.”
Well, it's written well enough, but I don't see her reaction going quite that way. She's more likely to match a threat for a threat. (which after all is said and done, might amuse me if she pulled the strings in Dellity after all was said and done.) ((as a further aside, I can't help but think she'd take a pot shot at him for relying on toys either))
And since this is obviously set in a time before the mending, the walkers wouldn't be dependent on mana bonds, so some of that threat wouldn't be as scary.
But all that being said, as I mentioned, it bears no fault as to your actual writing.
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Well, it's written well enough, but I don't see her reaction going quite that way. She's more likely to match a threat for a threat. (which after all is said and done, might amuse me if she pulled the strings in Dellity after all was said and done.) ((as a further aside, I can't help but think she'd take a pot shot at him for relying on toys either))
Thanks. I might be able to do a revision tomorrow with these in mind. Trying to get The Duchess's mannerisms right in this conversation was difficult, in no small part because we haven't really seen her interacting with anyone that's on (or close to) her "level", aside from Shifter.
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And since this is obviously set in a time before the mending, the walkers wouldn't be dependent on mana bonds, so some of that threat wouldn't be as scary.
Really? I didn't realize this. I had assumed that either some of their power was simply from being Planeswalkers, and that the majority of their magic came from mana bonds, or that their Planeswalker-ness amplified the mana they summoned through the bonds.
Thanks. I might be able to do a revision tomorrow with these in mind. Trying to get The Duchess's mannerisms right in this conversation was difficult, in no small part because we haven't really seen her interacting with anyone that's on (or close to) her "level", aside from Shifter.
Well I'd be happy to help if you'd like! I have this one little exchange really vividly in mind.
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Really? I didn't realize this. I had assumed that either some of their power was simply from being Planeswalkers, and that the majority of their magic came from mana bonds, or that their Planeswalker-ness amplified the mana they summoned through the bonds.
No, as weird as it is, their mana bonds mostly didn't actually come from the planes, but from the Eternities themselves. I don't think the Eternities actually provided colored mana, but for raw colorless mana, they had as much as they could sling around.
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Well I'd be happy to help if you'd like! I have this one little exchange really vividly in mind.
Sure!
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No, as weird as it is, their mana bonds mostly didn't actually come from the planes, but from the Eternities themselves. I don't think the Eternities actually provided colored mana, but for raw colorless mana, they had as much as they could sling around.
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So... The lands that we use in the game weren't actually used by real Planeswalkers, who the players are supposed to be... But they were still used by non-Planeswalker mages? Ugh... Wizards... This also means that it might take more than a day to figure out how to rewrite this exchange.
Well I'd be happy to help if you'd like! I have this one little exchange really vividly in mind.
Sure!
Just fire a message off whenever you like, I'll be floating around doing this and that until then.
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So... The lands that we use in the game weren't actually used by real Planeswalkers, who the players are supposed to be... But they were still used by non-Planeswalker mages? Ugh... Wizards... This also means that it might take more than a day to figure out how to rewrite this exchange.
In fairness, modern planeswalkers use it like that now, but... yeah, there wasn't much land bonding going on with oldwalkers. Pre-revision had an even more scattershot use of the mana bond. Arena, for example, actually had the mages summoning the land itself into the arena.
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I have fallen woefully behind on these, but I'm going to catch up tomorrow, and I can't wait!
If it makes you feel any better, you aren't the only one sooooo...
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In fairness? The idea of the spark being a source of infinite mana is a totally canon-breaking retcon and I totally refuse to accept it. (Alsoooooooooo I'm pretty sure the lands didn't need to be summoned in Arena for the mana to be drawn upon, although there is other weirdness with respect to how stuff worked in that book.)
I like the story a lot! I'm a big fan of these bits of history getting filled in slowly via the microfic, though one of these days one of us should really write a longer Young Vasilias piece. One thing worth noting: it's been suggested before that Vasilias was driven off the plane of Ordrum/Tyrranix due to the Shifter opposing him. It's not definitive canon, but it's a suggestion that's been floating around for a long time and there might be a way to make that work with this... particularly with the concession Vasilias gives to the Duchess at the end.
In fairness? The idea of the spark being a source of infinite mana is a totally canon-breaking retcon and I totally refuse to accept it. (Alsoooooooooo I'm pretty sure the lands didn't need to be summoned in Arena for the mana to be drawn upon, although there is other weirdness with respect to how stuff worked in that book.)
All I remember is that Garth summoned an actual forest to the ring. I didn't say it was necessary, but it did happen. The weird thing about the mana that I remember is that if I remember correctly, it actually came from the spells, which... were like trinkets or charms that people kept in bags. Arena was a little weird.
And yes, the infinite mana thing wasn't what Richard intended in any fashion before the revision, but let's face it, Urza and his ilk were slinging a lot of sourceless mana around and... never really did seem to bond to anything.
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Yeah no so I actually basically took the trinkets thing and made it a major part of Kirsh's spellcasting because I loved it so much in Arena! That was a deliberate shoutout to that book. I think it's a great spellcasting device actually because it really represents the randomness of spellcasting well--you're just groping for the nearest item that you've used as a mnemonic emblem basically, and whatever one you touch on is your draw for that turn, essentially. It's so great. The Keys of the King sort of play with the idea too.
The mana in Arena--and it's never been 100% clear whether the mana was CONTAINED or simply REPRESENTED this way--was depicted as being held in bags of the earth of the lands that the mana was drawn from. This is admittedly very very strange, but I think Szat or maybe Ashtok (man remember Ashtok? Sigh.) suggested at one point that maybe the bags, like the trinkets, served as a device for helping mages to visualize the land to make connections to it. Tenuous but nevertheless potentially a way of making things compatible. Alternately, maybe bags of dirt = weak mana rocks?
I ascribe the lack of mana bonding to the same reason we almost never show a character forging a mana bond: it doesn't occur to us to disrupt the narrative that way. I think it's just an indication of breezing past the mechanics rather than an indication of some fundamental difference in the way 'walkers worked back then.
I thiiiink I do remember some of the 'walkers in Invasion drawing on lands specifically but I am in Canada and my copy of Invasion is not.
Alternately, maybe bags of dirt = weak mana rocks?
better mana rock. Might be a little hard to carry around. (incidentally, I love the implication that space is all colors)
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I ascribe the lack of mana bonding to the same reason we almost never show a character forging a mana bond: it doesn't occur to us to disrupt the narrative that way. I think it's just an indication of breezing past the mechanics rather than an indication of some fundamental difference in the way 'walkers worked back then.
I dunno about that. Agents of Artifice, Purifying Fire, and Alara Unbroken took moments to touch on establishing mana bonds, but there's something else that we have to take into consideration. That being that for all the travel there is, most of the time, we find our characters at a place they've had time to bond with already. We don't usually have much in the way of crash landings followed by getting their power bearings.
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The baubles didn't contain mana, they were simply a mnemonic to remember specific spells. Allow me to quote from Shattered Chains:
Shattered Chains, page 126 wrote:
"My grimoire. My book of magic. Every wizard needs one in the beginning, Chaney says. Remember Towser carried a little book chained to his belt? And Dacian, the brown wizard, had a bag at her shoulder? Well, these help me recall my catalogue of beasts and spells. See, this is a mushroom for the fungasaur. And this pin-"
Also, Shattered Chains tells of mana use:
Shattered Chains, page 93 wrote:
"Tapping, on the other hand, is gathering mana to you from surrounding lands. You can tap the mana of the land and air and water, or you can tap reserves inside yourself. But not too deeply, lest you be left a nut with no meat. You might die. Or worse..."
And, since Arena was mentioned, her's an abridged excerpt:
Arena, page 6-7 wrote:
"Garth lowered his head, extending his arms, gathering in his thoughts, calming them, focusing, remembering and not remembering, clearing away all. He reached outward, probing, looking toward the other's heart, sensing and knowing until all things dropped away and the land and waters within him were as clear as crystalline snow. The mana, the source of all power of spells, was ready. ... He could feel the tension, the strength drawing out of the Orange fighter, focusing on the power he was drawing upon from distant lands and places-the mana which he controlled-bringing that power into the circle to serve his will."
So I think we can see that in the early days, mana did, as the game mechanics suggest, come from the land. It should of course be noted that both of these novels are pre-revisionist.
So I think we can see that in the early days, mana did, as the game mechanics suggest, come from the land. It should of course be noted that both of these novels are pre-revisionist.
It should also be noted as well, that mana bonds were something that people could seemingly trade between themselves since it was a rather large part of becoming a planeswalker, accumulating those bonds, and the walker villain of Arena demanded mana tithes so that he could maintain his place in the multiverse.
As with all pre-rev sources, it is a situation where there was very little lore to inform the authors of the supposed rules, so it was very much whatever they could glean from the card game's mechanics.
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So I think we can see that in the early days, mana did, as the game mechanics suggest, come from the land. It should of course be noted that both of these novels are pre-revisionist.
It should also be noted as well, that mana bonds were something that people could seemingly trade between themselves since it was a rather large part of becoming a planeswalker, accumulating those bonds, and the walker villain of Arena demanded mana tithes so that he could maintain his place in the multiverse.
As with all pre-rev sources, it is a situation where there was very little lore to inform the authors of the supposed rules, so it was very much whatever they could glean from the card game's mechanics.
Yeah, very true. These were the days when mages could just become planeswalkers, after all, which we saw with BOTH Garth One-Eye and Greensleeves, and was later hinted at with Hazezon Tamar (one of my all-time favorite MTG characters, by the way).
So yeah, the "rules" of the multiverse in pre-Rev days are sort of nebulous at best.
Hazezon Tamar (one of my all-time favorite MTG characters, by the way).
I am legitimately kind of bummed that the spirit token from Tarkir wasn't also typed as "sand"....
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There's been some attempts to square that old stuff with post-rev stuff by saying that the mana was basically a way of kickstarting Garth's already extant spark. I think it's poooossible.
But yeah, thanks for the passages Raven, that's how I thought I remembered it working in those stories. Still totally enamoured of that structure, not gonna lie It's a great fantasy device.
Also, I think maybe we could compare 'walker mana bonding to mana burn or, hell, even the mechanics of summoning: it occasionally gets mentioned but on the whole, for as important as it is, not all that much.
Bloody hell it's annoying that I can't just look this stuff up in my books though. For some of this stuff I'm going off 6+ year old memories.
I (belatedly) read the latest batch of these, and I was once again reminded how glad I am that microfics have taken off of late. There's just so, so much good stuff which had accumulated!
@ Memory
This is fan-tastic. I think that one of the real deficiencies of the 'walker slate -- not just ours, mind you, but the canon roster as well -- is that they tend to skew young, just because younger characters may have more appeal to the target demographic, and also because "must stay young!" seems to be such a preoccupation for so many of the 'walkers. So it's really refreshing to encounter characters who are grappling with the realities of aging, like in this story. There's such an evocative contrast between the powers Sri can wield and the basic physical indignities of growing older. Thanks so, so much for posting this one!
@ Shuffle
This is the Alessa I love most. Every once in a while, beneath that cynical exterior, and that impish charm, a little flash of sentimentality sneaks through. I love Alessa the rogue, and I love Alessa the scoundrel, and I know why she doesn't care at times, and why she pretends not to at others. But, at the end of the day, I'm of the same mindset as Beryl: I suspect that Alessa cares more than she feels comfortable admitting. I like getting a glimpse of that here.
@ Predator
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The image of the entire blighted and damned forest flooding thick with tar and waters soothed her nerves and she turned back to the matter at claw.
Drop the mic, sir, and just walk away.
@ The King's Gambit
I'll defer to the good Barin's expertise when it comes to the characterizations here, but I just want to say that I really enjoyed the use of language in this piece. For two people who tend to speak in a rigid manner, the dialog still has a good flow to it, which is a very tricky thing to pull off. Thanks a ton for posting this, Moonbeam! Even if you revise it for character reasons, it's easy to enjoy what you have now.
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This is fan-tastic. I think that one of the real deficiencies of the 'walker slate -- not just ours, mind you, but the canon roster as well -- is that they tend to skew young, just because younger characters may have more appeal to the target demographic, and also because "must stay young!" seems to be such a preoccupation for so many of the 'walkers. So it's really refreshing to encounter characters who are grappling with the realities of aging, like in this story. There's such an evocative contrast between the powers Sri can wield and the basic physical indignities of growing older. Thanks so, so much for posting this one!
Sri is one my oldest characters, no pun intended, and even though he's been around for so long, he hasn't had a chance to really get out and mingle. I think, in particular, that he is a very strong counterpoint to Zhiran, both grappling with the issues of growing old, but Sri has a level of acceptance that the archmage doesn't, and it makes for some potent story material.
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@ Shuffle
This is the Alessa I love most. Every once in a while, beneath that cynical exterior, and that impish charm, a little flash of sentimentality sneaks through. I love Alessa the rogue, and I love Alessa the scoundrel, and I know why she doesn't care at times, and why she pretends not to at others. But, at the end of the day, I'm of the same mindset as Beryl: I suspect that Alessa cares more than she feels comfortable admitting. I like getting a glimpse of that here.
Yeah, the original Alessa piece just... never really did much for me, but it was easy to crank out. Getting the tepid response to it pretty much convinced me she needed another piece, and so Shuffle!
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The image of the entire blighted and damned forest flooding thick with tar and waters soothed her nerves and she turned back to the matter at claw.
Drop the mic, sir, and just walk away.
Quite honestly, that bit I had no choice but to include. It's like when MLP mentions the word "hand" and I think "they don't know what that is...."
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Having already done a couple of Jakkard-related microfics, I'm finding myself tempted by the notion of doing a few more in order to bring the total up to six, and them grouping them together as a six-shooter. (Hat tip to Raven, whose idea I may or may not be blatantly stealing lovingly appropriating.)
Which leads me to ask -- are there any characters or scenarios which people would like to see in a Jakkard microfic? I don't have anything specifically in mind at the moment, so any and all ideas are welcome.
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