Thank you for taking the time to comment, Raven. I really appreciate it.
And while there are facets of this plane I have not yet fully embraced, there are several elements that are already tripping ideas in my mind for possible stories.
Mission accomplished!
I'm pretty interested in your characterizing of magic in the world. I find it odd that the sulfur, mercury and natron are the Major elements, while our four sacred elements are the minor. That's an interesting inversion. I also found it odd that you have earths and airs, but you went with fluids instead of waters. Just out of curiosity, was there a reason for that decision?
Everything in Solphosian alchemy is inspired by real-life alchemy. The European alchemists really believed that sulfur, mercury and salt (which I called natron) were the three most basic elements that defined chemical reactions.
For the "earths, fluids and airs" thing, I must have missed it. A consequence of writing story snippets and flavor text in bits and pieces... but that can be spun into a story too. Maybe it's careful scientific terminology because not all fluids contain elemental water. Maybe it's grandfathered terminology that some upstart academics are petitioning to change. Who knows?
I did notice that nearly all of your history of the planes is less than five years old. Not that we need a ton of ancient stuff, of course, but I found it a little odd that it was skimmed over so much.
Most of the history is in the last five years because that's the timeframe that
Solphos block is set in, and so that's the timeframe that I've given the most thought to. If I tried to chronicle the entire millennia-long history of the plane it would never be finished.
Well, that's what I've got for now. If I think of anything else, I'll let you know, but overall, I think this is some really good work. Oh, and I would be remise if I didn't mention the cool "Solphos" title you made. Good stuff.
Thank you!