After an unfortunate incident, Denner Fabellian is suffering from a polymorphist's twisted sense of humor and is now a frog. Now, he has to travel to Arbagoth in search of Aamir in the desperate hope that he can help.
Apparently, Denner is having a very bad day.
Just had to comment before drifting off to sleep: isn't it ironic that the frog is looking for a prince in this case?
After an unfortunate incident, Denner Fabellian is suffering from a polymorphist's twisted sense of humor and is now a frog. Now, he has to travel to Arbagoth in search of Aamir in the desperate hope that he can help.
Apparently, Denner is having a very bad day.
Just had to comment before drifting off to sleep: isn't it ironic that the frog is looking for a prince in this case?
... Well played Luna.
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Raiker Venn begins traveling with Asher. Together, they travel to Fabacin, home to the Grove of the Dreampods.
I'm not sure the Dreampods are the best thing for Asher...
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Raleris, the Lorekeeper begins traveling with Ellia the Endbringer. Together, they is deceived by Aloise Hartley.
I can't help but feel at least one of these names is in the wrong place.
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The paths of fate have converged and Maral, Celestial Wright briefly encounters Kirsh of the Flats because Kirsh of the Flats is searching for The Archangel's Horns.
Huh. A prompt that makes perfect sense...
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Raleris, the Lorekeeper begins searching for the Amulet of the Planeswalkers. But things are rarely simple and matters take a serious turn when The Eye of Foresight appears too. Now Raleris, the Lorekeeper has a difficult choice to make.
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Testing for errors I think I understand two more:
Blank character error: I'm pretty sure this is caused by the way the $encounter list is written. One of the options calls #plane. If no #plane has been defined earlier in the prompt, that results in a blank nobody (this is the same type of error that causes the blank nobody in the tavern prompt, thus my correction to it above).
I've currently got http://orteil.dashnet.org/randomgen/?gen=UrYRFuaD written to generate this particular error almost constantly, so you can see. (It also tends to stack "seemingly"s and "apparently"s on each other, but that's just a side effect you can ignore.)
Here I added punctuation to some prompts to prevent dropped end-punctuation typos:
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It's a high stakes game of cards on [planeswalks] between [planeswalker,#protagonist] [||, [encounter]], [planeswalker,#antagonist], and [encounter].[ | But it is the last hand between [#protagonist] and [#antagonist], and there might be more on the line than anyone suspects!| The game takes a sudden turn when one of them antes [artifact]. Now it's a game with deadly consequences if it falls into the wrong hands.| However, the game grinds to a halt when [#protagonist] [interaction] [#antagonist].| ] {50%}
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[planeswalker,#protagonist] begins traveling with [planeswalker,#antagonist].[ | Together, they travel to [planeswalks].| Together, they [interaction] [planeswalker].| But when [#antagonist] [interaction] [planeswalker], [#protagonist] is forced to planeswalk to [planeswalks].| Can they stick together despite their differences?| But they soon come to blows! Who will survive?]
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Illarion Vale [walk type] [planeswalks]. There, he [interaction] [#plane,as native,or a planar native] and later offers to take his companion to see the multiverse. {20%}
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In the dark of the night, [planeswalker,#protagonist] is woken by a [race,#sidekick]! The [#sidekick] explains that [#protagonist,as gender] has been chosen to become the last defender of [planes] and using the magic of [artifact,#trinket], [#protagonist,as gender] can become the hero known as Magical Girl [#protagonist]! [|| Now the pair must keep Evil Sovereign [planeswalker] from getting their hands on [artifact] and enacting their dastardly plan!| But there's no time to learn the ropes as [encounter] is raising an entire army of [creature]s!| However, the challenges facing the new hero may prove more than [#protagonist,as gender] can handle, and [#protagonist] must go find allies such as [encounter] [||and [encounter]] [!|!|!|!|and [encounter]!] But will the power of [#trinket] be strong enough to give them all powers?| [#protagonist] begins to suspect that there's more going on than their sidekick is telling them, and [#trinket] might be more dangerous than [#protagonist,as gender]'d been told!| Everything starts to fall apart though when a rival appears with [artifact] and becomes Dark Magical Girl [planeswalker].| But when [#protagonist] [interaction] [encounter], will their secret identity be at risk?!] {20%}
Also:
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A Timmerian fiend joins forces with a newly ascended Planeswalker: a Gigantic Intelligent Dryad Rigger!
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The only thing I can think of to get rid of the blank character error is:
1. Create an $encounterclean list that it just calls "a planar native" instead of a specific plane's natives. 2. Define #plane wherever possible. 3. In every prompt and interaction that calls $encounter but doesn't always define #plane, call $encounterclean instead.
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Unless I'm trying to be sarcastic or humorous, most of my posts are extremely literal. Please don't "read between the lines" because there's nothing in there. If something isn't extremely explicit and blatant then I wasn't thinking it. I'm incapable of sublety and don't know how to imply things. I never knowingly "imply" anything, ever.
Aria wakes up to find themselves on Helkavin. she last remembers being on Xerex, home of the Stairs to Infinity and has no memory of how she got here! Will Aria be able to regain their memory before [enouncter] takes advantage of the situation?
This seems an odd issue.
Also, I suggest restructuring the first part to "[Planeswalker. #protagonist] wakes up to find [#protagonist,as gender] is on [planes]" Should work for all the given pronouns except Raiker's special. Could also contract it to [#protagonist,as gender]'s
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Ellia the Endbringer begins traveling with The Shifter. Together, they travel to The Wheel
Trouble brews.
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Clade planeswalks to The Wheel. There, he tears down civilization, leaving only a Unicorn Serf alive.
This was literally the next prompt result. The Wheel's entire existence is suffering.
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Raef wakes up to find he's on on Aliavelli. he last remembers being on Siraus and has no memory of how he got here! Will Raef be able to regain those lost memories before a Interplanar Tunnel makes escape impossible?
Here's my rewrite of that prompt
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Raleris, the Lorekeeper attempts to explain economics to Morgan of Voor, but Morgan of Voor would rather talk about the value of The Last of All.
This... really makes a lot of sense. Economics kind of broke down in the Age of Darkness and the Lorekeepers were never subject to it, while he'd be HUGELY interested in The Last of All.
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Maral, Celestial Wright attempts to win the heart of Ygraine of Segovia.
I really, really want to see these two in a narrative together.
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The Golgothan Sylex has resurfaced from the depths of history, and now Ellia the Endbringer planeswalks to Aralheim in search of it.
This... cannot possibly end well. Also, really surprised that the Sylex came up so soon, it's at a pretty low %.
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The Eightfold Lotus flees to Aralheim, where he becomes insanely jealous of Kimberley Talon. Kimberley Talon tries to calm The Eightfold Lotus down, which proves difficult as Kimberley Talon gets entangled in a hilarious romantic folly with Clade .
Huh.
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It's happy hour at the most popular tavern on the vast forest plane Pyrulea, and Sri Haraand Renn Winmoore are carousing. Suddenly Raleris, the Lorekeeper arrives in search of heroes to search for the artifact known as The Golgothan Sylex. Who will rise to the challenge? And can Raleris, the Lorekeeper be trusted?
Seriously, it's 10%, same as "the legendary mox diamond". Maybe I should drop it to 5% cheeseburger level?
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Alessa Rehn attempts to explain the "Theran Twister" position to A Timmerian fiend, but A Timmerian fiend would rather talk about the Blind Eternities.
huh (again)
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Chardis of the Dual-Walkers chases Illarion Vale to Iun Ilana. Upon landing on Iun Ilana, he is coerced by the other 'Walker
Advantage
Chardis appeared on the new world in a flash of flame. Around him, the nearest trees disintegrated into motes of ash, along with the grass and about half of a deer. The Aether trail had been fresh, so his quarry was near. Chardis could have destroyed him a few times before, but the chase was half the fun. If he had simply wanted to kill the 'tourist' that would have been easy, but he wanted that man to understand that death was coming first.
Chardis paced forward slowly, leaving bromstone footsteps. He did not have to go far before he found him -- Illarion Vale. The other planeswalker turned slowly. looking away from... a faintly glowing meepling? Seriously?
Chardis laughed. "Confessing to animals in the face of the end?" he asked, "I'll admit, you never cease to surprise me."
Illarion shrugged, "I think this is the part where you kill me?"
Chardis sighed and rolled his eyes. "You just had to suck the fun out of it at the end, didn't you?"
Fire flew from his hands, countless incendiary strands. His entire field of vision became orange-yellow, and he felt the satisfaction of removing another opponent, no matter how pathetic.
Yet, when the smoke cleared, there was Illarion Vale, his glowing meepling, and the stump it sat on, completely unharmed by Chardis' torrent of fire.
"What?" Chardis demanded, "How did you survive?"
"You don't know where we are, do you?" Illarion asked
"What does that matter?" Chardis demanded He raised his hand, fire in his fist, ready to strike again.
"One of the advantages of being a tourist," Illarion said, picking up the meepling and petting it gently, "Is that you end up knowing quite a lot of places very well. This is Iun Ilana, the plane that lives. And sees. And thinks. And... moves."
At that. the land around Chardis buckled. From his wake of cinders, the aura of distruction he had poured out upon Illarion Vale, there arose rank after rank of elementals -- no, not elementals, the energy in them was wrong. They were just earth and stone. Standing, staring at him and ready to fight.
"And I think she likes me better than she likes you."
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I'm a (self) published author now! You can find my books on Amazon in Paperback or ebook! The Accursed, a standalone young adult fantasy adventure. Witch Hunters, book one of a young adult Scifi-fantasy trilogy.
Chardis appeared on the new world in a flash of flame. Around him, the nearest trees disintegrated into motes of ash, along with the grass and about half of a deer. The Aether trail had been fresh, so his quarry was near. Chardis could have destroyed him a few times before, but the chase was half the fun. If he had simply wanted to kill the 'tourist' that would have been easy, but he wanted that man to understand that death was coming first.
Chardis paced forward slowly, leaving bromstone footsteps. He did not have to go far before he found him -- Illarion Vale. The other planeswalker turned slowly. looking away from... a faintly glowing meepling? Seriously?
Chardis laughed. "Confessing to animals in the face of the end?" he asked, "I'll admit, you never cease to surprise me."
Illarion shrugged, "I think this is the part where you kill me?"
Chardis sighed and rolled his eyes. "You just had to suck the fun out of it at the end, didn't you?"
Fire flew from his hands, countless incendiary strands. His entire field of vision became orange-yellow, and he felt the satisfaction of removing another opponent, no matter how pathetic.
Yet, when the smoke cleared, there was Illarion Vale, his glowing meepling, and the stump it sat on, completely unharmed by Chardis' torrent of fire.
"What?" Chardis demanded, "How did you survive?"
"You don't know where we are, do you?" Illarion asked
"What does that matter?" Chardis demanded He raised his hand, fire in his fist, ready to strike again.
"One of the advantages of being a tourist," Illarion said, picking up the meepling and petting it gently, "Is that you end up knowing quite a lot of places very well. This is Iun Ilana, the plane that lives. And sees. And thinks. And... moves."
At that. the land around Chardis buckled. From his wake of cinders, the aura of distruction he had poured out upon Illarion Vale, there arose rank after rank of elementals -- no, not elementals, the energy in them was wrong. They were just earth and stone. Standing, staring at him and ready to fight.
"And I think she likes me better than she likes you."
Also, I suggest restructuring the first part to "[Planeswalker. #protagonist] wakes up to find [#protagonist,as gender] is on [planes]" Should work for all the given pronouns except Raiker's special. Could also contract it to [#protagonist,as gender]'s
I already posted corrections for these and a large number of other errors and typos. A page and a half ago. And have been ignored. I can see my posts haven't been deleted
Seriously guys, I tested and posted fixes like 3 days ago. It's like nothing I write is good enough to even be looked at except to tell me how much it sucks. That's especially jarring when nobody else's typos or errors merit any mention or attempt to correct them at all, not even that ridiculous error that causes the $encounter list to produce a blank space.
If my ideas were so bad why was any part of them included at all? I am still learning that script language but if my testing and bugfixes are not good enough at least you could give me constructive criticism on them, instead of pretending I didn't even try and harping about how bad my writing is for having typos.
This does not encourage me to bother to contribute anymore to community projects.
Edit: I am sorry if this comes across as whiny.
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I think bug fixes in general get noted in "Somebody else's problem" a lot of the time. There are a number of us toying with the generator and so bystander effect starts to kick in. I'm pretty guilty of it -- I was fixing the number agreement issues on the "Wakes up with no memory" prompt because it had annoyed me and I had an idea, but I had to test that out before I remembered "Oh, right, there's that misspelled [encounter] call too, isn't there?"
In the same blasted prompt I was working on
When I myself had just pointed it out on the thread
And yet still I considered not going back in there to fix it.
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"Enjoy your screams, Sarpadia - they will soon be muffled beneath snow and ice."
I'm a (self) published author now! You can find my books on Amazon in Paperback or ebook! The Accursed, a standalone young adult fantasy adventure. Witch Hunters, book one of a young adult Scifi-fantasy trilogy.
I'm a (self) published author now! You can find my books on Amazon in Paperback or ebook! The Accursed, a standalone young adult fantasy adventure. Witch Hunters, book one of a young adult Scifi-fantasy trilogy.
I already posted corrections for these and a large number of other errors and typos. A page and a half ago. And have been ignored. I can see my posts haven't been deleted
Seriously guys, I tested and posted fixes like 3 days ago. It's like nothing I write is good enough to even be looked at except to tell me how much it sucks. That's especially jarring when nobody else's typos or errors merit any mention or attempt to correct them at all, not even that ridiculous error that causes the $encounter list to produce a blank space.
This does not encourage me to bother to contribute anymore to community projects.
Sorry, Arcades. We're not perfect, and sometimes we do miss things. Nobody, to the best of my knowledge, is actively ignoring you. Speaking personally, I don't actually edit the generator much. I think I've done it twice. Maybe three times. And because I'm not so good with coding, even simple stuff like this, I always test anything I post a lot before I put it up. So I usually don't put other stuff up. Still, though, sorry.
Helkavin is under attack! Illarion Vale must gather allies such as Kimberley Talon before it's too late, but he is hampered when he apparently acquires the artifact known as The Inferno Amulet from Sri Hara but is secretly being manipulated by A Timmerian fiend .
Really? I guess the Timmerian fiend took the real one, and for some reason decided to leave a forgery... with Sri Hara... It could happen.
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Kahr-ret-Taris planeswalks to The Wheel. There, he briefly encounters Lia Xin and agents of the Rulus.
Huh. I had literally no idea that Lia Xin was involved in the War of the Wheel.
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The paths of fate have converged and Cara Holis joins forces with Illarion Vale because of the machinations of Huinn, Last of the Darkwings .
I could see this.
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Clade hides out on Zhiran's Academy. There, he tears down civilization, leaving only a Anteater alive.
The Archmage will not be pleased. But at least his collection of giant, man-eating Anteaters wasn't COMPLETELY destroyed.
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Gruff explores Xerex, home of the Stairs to Infinity. There he gets in an epic duel with Raef . After the experience, he is left suffering from an erratic mutation!
Ah-Ha! So Raef's angel is a symbiotic entity that can leap from one host to another! I hope the Multiverse is ready for Gruffiel!
Clade hides out on Zhiran's Academy. There, he tears down civilization, leaving only a Anteater alive.
The Archmage will not be pleased. But at least his collection of giant, man-eating Anteaters wasn't COMPLETELY destroyed.
He'll be teaching it how to eat Troll after this.
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At twilight's end, the shadow's crossed / a new world birthed, the elder lost. Yet on the morn we wake to find / that mem'ry left so far behind. To deafened ears we ask, unseen / "Which is life and which the dream?"
Syl of the Dual-Walkers chases Illarion Vale to Iun Ilana and Aralheim. Upon landing on Aralheim, she comes into conflict with the other 'Walker.
Mercy
Illarion Vale took a deep breath of the cold autumn air, and gazed out upon the familiar sights of home. While wandering the multiverse had not reduced his desire to go out and tour it, it had given him an ever-growing appreciation of that singular vista that existed nowhere else in the Multiverse.
Slowly, he walked down the wide lane, pausing to watch the children playing, for Old Man Withers to yell at him to get off his lawn, and finally walked up the creaking steps to what had at one time been his family house. Carefully, he knocked on the door.
There was no answer
"Marina?" Illarion called. He knocked again, then tried the handle. The door was unlocked, and opened freely.
Inside, the house was very dark. All the shutters were closed, drapes drawn. Strange, Illarion thought.
Then, a sibilant, female voice spoke from the darkness.
"You know," she said, "You made a mistake when you sent my brother fleeing from Iun Ilana with his tail between his legs."
"What..." Illarion muttered, "Show yourself!"
"You'd like that, wouldn't you?" the woman -- Syl of the Dual-Walkers -- replied, "Your mistake was that you should have killed him. Oh, I would have come after you one day or another, once I worked out what happened, but it might have forestalled my revenge, and when I took it I'd do things my way, rather than his."
An eerie glow -- a glow that presented no earthly color at all -- began to seep from the beams of the house, faintly illuminating the world around, casting shifting shadows all about. The big chair was turned away from the door and Illarion, and Syl's voice echoed from it.
"I never was one for theatrics." Syl said, "But my dear brother insisted that a subtle poison or a knife in the night would be far too easy. No, you let him live, so you had to live."
Illarion approached the chair. He set one hand upon its high back.
"Go ahead." Syl said. Her voice was coming from the other side, near and very real, yet somehow the unknown filled Illarion with trepidation.
He stepped about in front of the chair, intending to face Syl of the Dual walkers and whatever fate awaited him.
He faced the price of his victory, and the fate that had already been decided -- A grey, mangled mass of flesh that might once have been human, that couldn't be human. Illarion fell to his knees, and Syl's laughter echoed from the rafters rather than that malformed abomination. Whatever magic had killed that person was...
The mass moved, shifted. A gap opened and a gasp of foetor escaped it.
No... it wasn't dead.
Compared to such a fate, death would be a mercy, and as the reeking, rattling gasp rose to a faint, inarticulate wail, Illarion wished for all Dominia that Chardis had killed him, instead of this.
"Brother will be pleased." Syl said, and from her unseen position planeswalked away to share the news.
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"Enjoy your screams, Sarpadia - they will soon be muffled beneath snow and ice."
I'm a (self) published author now! You can find my books on Amazon in Paperback or ebook! The Accursed, a standalone young adult fantasy adventure. Witch Hunters, book one of a young adult Scifi-fantasy trilogy.
Syl of the Dual-Walkers chases Illarion Vale to Iun Ilana and Aralheim. Upon landing on Aralheim, she comes into conflict with the other 'Walker.
Mercy
Illarion Vale took a deep breath of the cold autumn air, and gazed out upon the familiar sights of home. While wandering the multiverse had not reduced his desire to go out and tour it, it had given him an ever-growing appreciation of that singular vista that existed nowhere else in the Multiverse.
Slowly, he walked down the wide lane, pausing to watch the children playing, for Old Man Withers to yell at him to get off his lawn, and finally walked up the creaking steps to what had at one time been his family house. Carefully, he knocked on the door.
There was no answer
"Marina?" Illarion called. He knocked again, then tried the handle. The door was unlocked, and opened freely.
Inside, the house was very dark. All the shutters were closed, drapes drawn. Strange, Illarion thought.
Then, a sibilant, female voice spoke from the darkness.
"You know," she said, "You made a mistake when you sent my brother fleeing from Iun Ilana with his tail between his legs."
"What..." Illarion muttered, "Show yourself!"
"You'd like that, wouldn't you?" the woman -- Syl of the Dual-Walkers -- replied, "Your mistake was that you should have killed him. Oh, I would have come after you one day or another, once I worked out what happened, but it might have forestalled my revenge, and when I took it I'd do things my way, rather than his."
An eerie glow -- a glow that presented no earthly color at all -- began to seep from the beams of the house, faintly illuminating the world around, casting shifting shadows all about. The big chair was turned away from the door and Illarion, and Syl's voice echoed from it.
"I never was one for theatrics." Syl said, "But my dear brother insisted that a subtle poison or a knife in the night would be far too easy. No, you let him live, so you had to live."
Illarion approached the chair. He set one hand upon its high back.
"Go ahead." Syl said. Her voice was coming from the other side, near and very real, yet somehow the unknown filled Illarion with trepidation.
He stepped about in front of the chair, intending to face Syl of the Dual walkers and whatever fate awaited him.
He faced the price of his victory, and the fate that had already been decided -- A grey, mangled mass of flesh that might once have been human, that couldn't be human. Illarion fell to his knees, and Syl's laughter echoed from the rafters rather than that malformed abomination. Whatever magic had killed that person was...
The mass moved, shifted. A gap opened and a gasp of foetor escaped it.
No... it wasn't dead.
Compared to such a fate, death would be a mercy, and as the reeking, rattling gasp rose to a faint, inarticulate wail, Illarion wished for all Dominia that Chardis had killed him, instead of this.
"Brother will be pleased." Syl said, and from her unseen position planeswalked away to share the news.
Wow. Poor Illarion. You've got quite the head-canon feud going on here!
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