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PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2014 1:26 am 
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Okay!
So, as most of you will recall, we had a contest to design around the pale world. Well, there were two walkers (besides Aloise) which always stuck with me from those contests, so I commissioned an expedition to the ruins of the old places to retrieve these two walkers.
I now leave these here so that they can be considered for future generations:

Elanda Rines by Aaarrrgh


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Nala Vedris by Szat

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2014 9:45 am 
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I just want to point out that I never put an "s" at the end of Elanda's last name. But everyone else always does, so maybe I should just accept that and change it...

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2014 11:34 pm 
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Honestly? I'd been thinking about salvaging Nala on my own, but she's so closely tied into the Pale World project that I didn't think I could until it came around. (Also, while Elanda seems to constantly gain letters, Nala lost them in my design phases: she started as "Naliah Verdris" before slowly dropping the h and i in her proper name and extra r in her surname. That's why her 'walker card is a bit off.).

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PostPosted: Tue Aug 19, 2014 11:45 pm 
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It kind of goes without saying, since I went out of my way to inconvenience someone to go and dredge these two up, but naturally I really liked both of them enough that I'd like to see them in circulation.

Even though Nala is tied to the Pale World, that doesn't mean she couldn't be used in other projects. I mean, given, her origin is a pet project of mine, but she's a compelling character in her own right.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2014 12:29 am 
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I googled "pale world planeswalker contest"

The thread was like, the third result, so it wasn't much of an inconvenience. ;)

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2014 11:25 am 
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Wait, what were the first two results?

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2014 11:27 am 
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Two other threads on the old forum about making a walker card for Elanda.

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2014 11:31 am 
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Right. It's funny, creating the character was quite easy once inspiration struck, but I have no idea of what to do with her....

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PostPosted: Wed Aug 20, 2014 8:28 pm 
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Elanda is interesting, but she kind of overlaps a bit at the moment with both Alessa and Lourima. In fact, she's almost like a DBZ fusion of the two characters. The least interesting part of her is actually her involvement with The Pale World I'd say. There's something very interesting here but I think she needs something to distinguish her from these two other very similar characters.

Nala is fun because she's kind of Red!Aloise, and it'd be fun to have Red!Aloise. Like with Elanda, though, I think maybe there could be a bit more of a hook here to distinguish Nala, and maybe that would come from pairing her with someone other than Elanda, who, again, I feel isn't all that interesting linked to the Pale World actually.

Basically, I like what's here, I just think these characters could use a little spice. I've been spoiled maybe by all the weird crap people have been posting lately :P


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I think something that can be done with Elanda is the fact that she really wants to be a mastermind, and take control of every situation she's in, which would make it really interesting if she happened to set a goal that interfered with one of our actual, ancient masterminds. Because even though she's good, she's nut nearly as good as the Duchess or Ellia. But she's conceited enough to try to outwit them. That could make for an interesting interaction. Of course, it would also probably be the last thing she ever did, so I don't think it's the first thing I'd do with her...

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