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PostPosted: Sun Aug 03, 2014 12:55 am 
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This is the second story of my Nanowrimo series. Right now, I'm getting this set up as we near the close of my first story.
Without spoiling anything, here is the front cover (I know, even the back cover spoils some things) and obviously the title.
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Back Cover:

What I can tell you, This takes place four years after the first book. This book goes deeper into the cultures of the land (you start to understand what the covers mean), it is supposed to explore feelings of depression and insanity. Oh, and it has dragons; one of my favorite parts.

Aside from the cast of main characters changing slightly, the characters themselves begin to show changes as they adapt to the new world. And I finally give you a simple bit of the next story.

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One last bit of spoiler for you guys to get you excited for this to start, here...
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I made a language specifically to represent the ancient civilization in this world, and I love it. It's very awkward, but it makes a strange sort of sense when you get to its translated parts.

This should be something those of you who read the first one are all familiar with. Here
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PostPosted: Fri Aug 08, 2014 10:38 am 
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Prologue:
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Part 4:
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PostPosted: Sun Aug 17, 2014 7:49 pm 
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Part 6:


Chapter 2
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Part 3:
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Part 6:
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Starting Chapter Three!
I'm posting slightly more than normal, 1) because I'm a day later than I wanted to be; 2) because of the kinda awkward separation of parts. It was either shorter than usual or more than usual, and I went for more given reason 1. Enjoy! We're about to meet another of my favorite characters!
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Part 3:
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Roughly a day early, but you get less so there!

Part 6:
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I took a break from my current challenge to update this...
And to get some fact checking done :p

Nevertheless, we start chapter 4!

Part 1:
Part 2:
Part 3:

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I didn't realize it had been so long. Let's finish chapter four to make it easier to format for me. You guys get a little extra today!

Part 4:
Part 5:
Part 7:

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While I apologize for necroing this thread... I did want to finish the story.
NOTE: These next few posts will have many more errors than the last ones because I'm just adding them in instead of editing them. There are minor edits, but not as extensively as before.

Also these are the entire chapters; FYI.

Chapter 5:

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And at last... the epilogue...

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The sixteenth of Hexanth - 516

It has been almost a year of darkness. The sky is black, and the sun is blue. We all struggle to survive. This unnatural darkness is forcing everyone indoors. It is difficult to stay warm. Many people have fled to the castle to find a warmth in numbers. I think that causes more trouble than good. People seem to panic easily these days.
I keep thinking about the last thing that Quincy said to me. He said that the sun was an egg? I don't know what I'm supposed to believe. I don't really believe it's an egg, but I don't know what it is these days. It's blue. And it refuses to give us its heat or light. What is happening?
We haven't heard from the Ten-fingered tribe in long time as well. Rumor has it that they made their way over to Androm, across the Chalmov pass. Other people think that dragons are migrating, but I think they are simply spreading their prophecies some more. Again, I don't know what to believe.
The sun -or egg- has been acting strangely lately. It seems to pulse every once and a while. When it pulses, the sky lightens for about half a day. I don't know how many others have noticed, but the pulses don't seem to hold to any pattern. Maybe it's slowly getting bigger? I can't tell because I haven't been observing it since the beginning.
I started observing its size since I first noticed it pulsing. The pulses have started to increase in number and intensity. It's hard to ignore them now that I notice them. I can't exactly point them out, because they happen too quickly. Maybe people are choosing to ignore it? Maybe they hope that it will go away? Maybe they are right?
I doubt it. If you believe that the sun is an egg, the pulses could be a sign that whatever is inside is getting ready to hatch. I don't know what could grow in an egg like that. Dragons use fire to heat their eggs, but the sun is constantly immolated. Whatever tries to grow in there should be burned to oblivion.
But then there was that fire that Phillip showed me before his soul left his body. I wasn't hurt by the fire, but Fletcher said that it was too hot for him. Maybe whatever is growing in the sun is immune to the fire like I was? He said that the fire didn't burn me, because I was chosen. Was there a mistake? Was another being the chosen hero of legend? Was I just as misinformed as everyone else?
I don't know. I hope that these days end shortly. I don't know how much more these people can withstand. I don't know how much I can withstand. I am afraid.
-Altimis Malder-


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