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PostPosted: Sun Jan 05, 2014 12:44 am 
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Alright, so we all should know if there is one thing I do, it's to generate this immense, intricate, and in-depth worlds.
My problem is that I, quite frankly, suck at finishing them because I generate so much content that I manage to overwhelm myself and organization just completely **** breaks down.
And then you end up combining that with my inability to resist tapping into the constantly renewing creative dynamo and... well, you get a whole buttload of unfinished worlds. However, that doesn't mean I've given up on said worlds, just that I have to put them on the backburner.

So, with that in mind, I'm going to dump all of the world info from the defunct boards into this thread so that it doesn't get lost. I'll be updating this post with each new post as I place everything in here. For now, this is more a preservation project, but who knows, maybe one day I'll pick everything back up.

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 Post subject: Ellysium
PostPosted: Mon Feb 03, 2014 4:51 am 
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The entire premise here was to manipulate the iconography and imagery found in religious texts, mostly shying away from the more generic pop culture interpretations of what an angel is and in general play around with a concept: Mono-colored Five color angels.

Just to give an idea about the aesthetics that went into this world, a combination of Celtic and Roman, instead of the more classical middle centuries anglo-saxon imagery. Technologically they are about at a Renaissance level, but they've been in a Medieval Stasis for a long long time now. They plateaued.

Without further ado I present Ellysium:
The Tree of Life

Ellysium


Additionally, if there is any aspect of a civilization you'd like expanded or would like to expand, go right ahead.

The Veldt Principalities

The Green

The Sheo Lowlands

The Ishim Ranges

The Archipelago Republic


Notable Seraphim

The Exiled Cherub

Metaknowledge:
Spoiler

The Rapture’s Anchor: The Sephirot

Background:
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Event:
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 Post subject: Mirror World
PostPosted: Mon Feb 03, 2014 5:18 am 
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This would be the project I have dwelling in my headspace right now. I'm going to just dump everything oozing in my brain right now in a freeform information feed.

History

but...
Spoiler

Dawn Faction

Dusk Faction


All of this is just very basic worldbuilding, and dear god it is in its most basic form, so don't jump down my throat over not making it as unique as possible so far.

The Conflict

Mechanics


So, those are the bones of the world. The muses accosted me in an alley and started working me over, I had to work with it.

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 03, 2014 5:21 am 
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The World
Janhapurh has four continents. Two of them are arctic and mostly uninhabitable. The other two support life and one is significantly larger than the other. At the south edge of the largest continent an archipelago of islands can be found. Plains are located to the west and north-central areas with heavy forestation dominating the southern coast and mid-eastern portions. Mountains crown the continent and top of the western coast. Most of the east is lowlands, glades, and deltas.

The other continent is heavily forested and largely unexplored.

The views about the mana of this world are very very distinctive, with the belief that a being possesses mana vortices contained within themselves, which influence their spiritual growth and destiny. It is thought that magic can be blocked by emotional instability, the flow of the mana within being impeded by a clouded mind. Many also believe that a being can become more powerful if they are capable of joining their mana with that of the universe, the energy that flows through the land all around them. Harnessing that flow offers not only greater strength, but a possibility to alter one’s existing fate.

The Lotus is the most prolific symbol of these beliefs. While the common lotus is widespread, the potency of the greater Lotus’s power is legendary, and wars have been fought over the beauty and power of such flowers. The Lotus is so influential that it is central to nearly every culture in one way or another.
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 Post subject: Ahden
PostPosted: Mon Feb 03, 2014 5:27 am 
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I've made mentions of this plane before, and Troll's involvement in helping me, but with troll's disappearance, I've let this stand in limbo for ages. On the one hand, I think it's helped me decide what's extraneous and on the other it's let me give more thought to what to do with it.

For now, here is the work I have on Ahden.
"History"

"Geography"

"Underdeveloped Races"

"Developed Races"

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 03, 2014 5:31 am 
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I still have the Pale World and Szinada, but both of them have major formatting issues that hate the forum over here for some reason. It'll be a while before I have the energy to redo those.

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 12, 2014 7:38 pm 
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Barinellos wrote:
I still have the Pale World and Szinada, but both of them have major formatting issues that hate the forum over here for some reason. It'll be a while before I have the energy to redo those.

Toss 'me my way if you have formatting issues. I assume they're in a raw .txt or .doc format, so I can definitely work with that. Ideally, I'd rather just have a link to the original pages on the mothership, though; I would hunt them down anyway to cross-reference my formatting before sending them back to you.

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The pale world was interesting! I'd like to see that again.

Also holy thread necromancy, Batman!


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Also holy thread necromancy, Batman!

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I'm just reaching the point where I'm thinking "screw it, I'll read what I wanna read instead of trying to categorically play by date", and one of the things I want to do is see what I never visited even when I did have the time.

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That's not a bad idea actually. We've certainly amassed quite a bit of content, much of which has probably drifted downward...


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Just to let you know, I still have all the messages pertaining to [spoilers] and dreams of compiling them, cross-referencing what was bandied about and what was decided on, into the "PWG so far"

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PostPosted: Fri Jun 13, 2014 12:47 am 
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Barinellos wrote:
I still have the Pale World and Szinada, but both of them have major formatting issues that hate the forum over here for some reason. It'll be a while before I have the energy to redo those.

Toss 'me my way if you have formatting issues. I assume they're in a raw .txt or .doc format, so I can definitely work with that. Ideally, I'd rather just have a link to the original pages on the mothership, though; I would hunt them down anyway to cross-reference my formatting before sending them back to you.

The problem all arises from the break that happens with subject and non-subject spoiler lines. Now that I know what the issue is, I can take care of it. Eventually.

The pale world was interesting! I'd like to see that again.

I've been sitting thinking to myself "I think there is enough to work with here without having to kill myself to do more."

Just to let you know, I still have all the messages pertaining to [spoilers] and dreams of compiling them, cross-referencing what was bandied about and what was decided on, into the "PWG so far"
It's very much an "if it happens" at this point.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 18, 2014 3:45 pm 
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This place seems fun. I wonder if this will ever be Barinellos's Finished Atlas?

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 18, 2014 3:55 pm 
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Fakeartist wrote:
This place seems fun. I wonder if this will ever be Barinellos's Finished Atlas?

Well, in fairness, it's several places.

And I would pretty much love to declare this finished, but there's so much information that I'd need help compiling everything and that is, in itself a bit of a hefty task.

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 18, 2014 4:10 pm 
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Is there anything I can do?

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PostPosted: Wed Jun 18, 2014 4:20 pm 
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Fakeartist wrote:
Is there anything I can do?

Possibly. I'll have to go through and review what notes I still have on one or two of the worlds and see how much more needs to be parsed. Some of the info is on data, but some is still just in my head.

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PostPosted: Sun Jul 20, 2014 10:45 pm 
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So, just as a status update, I've just overhauled Sri Hara's Homeworld in a massive update that I actually had sitting around a while ago. I didn't realize I'd never changed what was here. It's still not complete, but... I feel like it's in a much more interesting and holistic place now.

If there's still an offer out there somewhere, I still have two worlds, at least, that need to be formatted so that they actually work. I do know what the issue is now though, it's those damned spoiler tags split between titled sblocks and untitled sblocks.

In other news, as I've been working with Empyrean, I've... sort of fallen out of love with the concept of the moonfolk on Elysium. I'm sort of hazy on a resolution to change the moonfolk to vedalken.

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PostPosted: Thu Jul 31, 2014 4:09 pm 
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Just for the sake of index and quick travel:
Ice World
Eldrahai: Commander World

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I love your plane's lore. It has a ragged, worn feel to it. Like the setting from an old pulp. Really, it reminds me of some of the older Magic novels and comics that predated the Weatherlight story. Have you written any stories set on Ellysium?

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Cateran wrote:
I love your plane's lore. It has a ragged, worn feel to it. Like the setting from an old pulp. Really, it reminds me of some of the older Magic novels and comics that predated the Weatherlight story. Have you written any stories set on Ellysium?

Totally appreciative of all those compliments.

As to Ellysium... The answer is more or less yes.
Two of the walkers I've made are natives to Ellysium, and Raef's story does feature Ellysium.
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Specifically part 2, but it isn't comprehensive.

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