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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2014 7:17 pm 
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Well, that seems like the best fit for what you're describing at least.


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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
PostPosted: Thu Jun 19, 2014 7:21 pm 
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Well, that seems like the best fit for what you're describing at least.

I'll trust your judgement in that.

Going back a bit to the Coin, I really was aiming to have a very evocative feel of it being a fairy tale, so I'm glad that you hit upon that. I do wonder how many tropes I used in it though.

An aside too, it's something that I wouldn't mind seeing someone else explore.

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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
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I don't know that I could call the tropes out by name, it just felt like a very traditional sounding story.

I mean the most obvious parallel would be Pinocchio, of course.


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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
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I don't know that I could call the tropes out by name, it just felt like a very traditional sounding story.

I mean the most obvious parallel would be Pinocchio, of course.

Something of a dieselpunk pinocchio was more or less what I was aiming for with it. It does make me sort of pseudo brainstorm what kind of world the Coin came from. Which is kind of an interesting thought exercise.

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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
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The darkmantle is certainly Moar Metal than your average article of clothing. Fortunately, I think I'm safe from its lure, since it doesn't sound like it would go with my Hawaiian shirts.

Love the little note at the end about the blood.

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Oh yeah! I forgot to comment on that! The non-scholarly side of Maral. That was a great little touch there, and would be an interesting tale in its own right.


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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
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The darkmantle is certainly Moar Metal than your average article of clothing. Fortunately, I think I'm safe from its lure, since it doesn't sound like it would go with my Hawaiian shirts.

Love the little note at the end about the blood.

I dunno, I think the lovely gems made out of EYES would fetchingly set off whatever floral print you're wearing this summer.
... it would, admittedly, probably be hot as balls, what with it being leather and all black and everything. Let's see what other artifacts we have in your size...

Oh yeah! I forgot to comment on that! The non-scholarly side of Maral. That was a great little touch there, and would be an interesting tale in its own right.

Yeah, that ties in a lot with how I felt it was important to distinguish between the two voices. You guys mentioned it back on the Hands, and I said that it was just a case of changing gears, but I'm glad that you feel that they stand out from each other now.

And I tooooooootally have a plan for all about how she got the darkmantle off its last host. Clearly! I am not completely making this up at all, everything has a plan!... :paranoid:

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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
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I like the horns. I really enjoy these sorts of severe take on angels (even though I'm not overly fond of MTG angels in general) and this sort of back story reveal is pretty appealing to me. The connection Maral makes between the object and the history of her home plane is pretty interesting, too.

And, of course, because it's just what I do, I have to note how interesting it is that Maral seems to be withholding information from Raleris. :-P

Although, in this case, I don't think that's what going on. She just has newer info than his original version did. I just sort of like the implied, emerging working relationship between the two.


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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
PostPosted: Sat Jun 21, 2014 9:04 am 
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So you've got your Angelic artifact and your Demonic artifact. Nice.

I wonder if the Cataclysm ages ago might have been part of our Year Zero incident...


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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
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So you've got your Angelic artifact and your Demonic artifact. Nice.
I would be remiss if I didn't have a dragon artifact as well.
Though you'll have to wait a bit longer for that one. It's further down the line.
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I wonder if the Cataclysm ages ago might have been part of our Year Zero incident...

Totally okay with that if you want to put it in.

... phrasing?

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The Nocturne Wheel


So I thought to myself, "I'll have to invent something new in the next ten minutes. Perhaps some sort of death clock. mmYes..."

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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
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Thiiiis has some intriguing possibilities... I wonder what effect it would have on, say, an immortal, trapped, lich lord Planeswalker... or someone else whose lifespan had been magically made effectively infinite.


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Thiiiis has some intriguing possibilities... I wonder what effect it would have on, say, an immortal, trapped, lich lord Planeswalker... or someone else whose lifespan had been magically made effectively infinite.

The lich would effectively have to feed people to it since... well, it runs on life and Liches aren't well known for having LIFE just laying around.
In fairness, that was one thing I did consider while writing it.

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What about, say, someone cursed in another way that rendered them functionally immortal?


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What about, say, someone cursed in another way that rendered them functionally immortal?

In theory they could turn back time like a Cher concert.
What side effect it might have once they get done using it, I couldn't say, but...

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Given past examples, probably unpleasant and ill advised.


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 Post subject: Re: From the Vault
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Barinellos wrote:
What about, say, someone cursed in another way that rendered them functionally immortal?

In theory they could turn back time like a Cher concert.


If the next artifact turns out to be "The Temporal Fishnets," we'll know where the idea came from.

EDIT - On the recent artifacts themselves, the horns are interesting, in part because I've always been a big fan of angels, for whatever reason. And I can think of a certain M:EM planeswalker who might possibly be very curious about an artifact that can turn you into an angel.

I assume that the Wheel's nasty properties are due to all the Globetrotter math used in its design and construction. Too much razzle-dazzle!

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EDIT - On the recent artifacts themselves, the horns are interesting, in part because I've always been a big fan of angels, for whatever reason. And I can think of a certain M:EM planeswalker who might possibly be very curious about an artifact that can turn you into an angel.

If you're referencing Raef, it's the exact opposite that he's interested in.
Plus Maral and he share a homeworld, so...

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I assume that the Wheel's nasty properties are due to all the Globetrotter math used in its design and construction. Too much razzle-dazzle!

Globetrotter math indeed.
Though in fairness, anything you describe as "Hellish geometry" is probably not the best thing to toy with.

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EDIT - On the recent artifacts themselves, the horns are interesting, in part because I've always been a big fan of angels, for whatever reason. And I can think of a certain M:EM planeswalker who might possibly be very curious about an artifact that can turn you into an angel.

If you're referencing Raef, it's the exact opposite that he's interested in.


Oh, I get that. But I would think that he'd be interested in the mechanics purely out of the hope that he might figure out a way to reverse the process.

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