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Dudibus [ Thu Sep 05, 2024 7:29 am ]

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Dudibus Designs ─ Star Wars [Red]

Red Commons

Bantha

Creature ─ Beast (C)
Heroic — Create a 2/2 red tusken raider creature token.
5/4

Blaster Fire

Instant (C)
Blaster Fire deals 2 damage to any target. It deals 3 damage instead if it targets a wanted creature.

Bossk

Legendary Creature ─ Bounty Hunter (C)
Bounty Hunter (When this enters, target creature becomes wanted. Wanted creatures have “When this creature dies, each of your opponents creates a treasure.”)
Bossk gets +1/+1 for each wanted creature.
2/1

Force Lightning

Sorcery (C)
Use the Force — Each

you spend on casting

pays for

.
Force Lightning deals X damage to target creature or planeswalker.

Force Speed

Instant (C)
Target creature gets +2/+0 and gains first strike until end of turn. If it entered this turn, it gains haste until end of turn. Otherwise, untap it.

Gangster's Den

Enchantment ─ Aura (C)
Enchant land
When Gangster’s Den enters, create a 1/1 red outlaw creature token.
Enchanted land gains “Whenever this land becomes tapped, add R.”

Give into your Anger

Enchantment ─ Aura (C)
Enchant creature
Enchanted creature gets +2/+0 and gains trample.
Destiny

(, tap an unenchanted creature you control: Return Give into your Anger from your graveyard to the battlefield attached to that creature. Activate this ability as a sorcery.)

Han Shot First

Instant (C)
You may cast Han Short First any time you could cast an instant if a creature entered under an opponent's control this turn.
Choose target creature you control. This deals damage equal to its power to target creature you don't control.

Infamous Outlaw

Creature ─ Outlaw Warrior (C)
Wanted creatures you control get +1/+1.
3/2

Jawa Ambushers

Creature ─ Jawa Warrior (C)
Heroic — Put a +1/+1 counter on Jawa Ambushers and create a 1/1 red jawa warrior creature token.
1/1

Jawa Junker

Creature ─ Jawa Artificer (C)

, Exile an artifact card from your graveyard: Create a treasure token.
1/2
Credit: Rush_Clasic

Murderous Rager

Creature ─ Sith Warrior (C)
Sith Warrior (This creature enters with a haste or first strike counter.)
Use the Force —

: Murderous Rager gets +X/+0 until end of turn. Each

you spend on

activating this ability pays for

.
1/1

Never Tell Me the Odds

Sorcery (C)
Exile the top 3 cards of your library. You may play those cards this turn.
Add R for each land exiled in this way.

Professional Hunter

Creature ─ Bounty Hunter (C)
Bounty Hunter, reach
When Professional Hunter enters, Bounty Hunters you control get +2/+0 until end of turn.
2/3

Restraining Bolt

Enchantment ─ Aura (C)
Enchant artifact
Enchanted artifact can’t attack or block.

Rough Mercs

Creature ─ Bounty Hunter (C)
Haste, bounty hunter
Sacrifice a treasure: Rough Mercs can’t attack until end of turn. Any player may activate this ability.
4/2

Scruffy Lookin' Nerf Header

Creature ─ Bounty Hunter (C)
Haste, bounty hunter
1/1

Sith Betrayer

Creature ─ Sith Warrior (C)
Sith Warrior (This creature enters with a haste or first strike counter.)
When Sith Betrayer enters, destroy target tapped nonbasic land.
3/2

Tusken Raider

Creature ─ Sand Person Warrior (C)
First strike
Whenever Tusken Raider attacks, you may tap another untapped creature you control. If you do, Tusken Raider gets +2/+0 until end of turn.
1/1
Credit: Rush_Clasic

Tusken Shaman

Creature ─ Sand Person Warrior (C)
When Tusken Shaman enters, return target instant or sorcery from your graveyard to your hand.
2/3

Red Uncommons

Admiral Ozzel

Legendary Creature ─ Imperial Soldier (U)
Red creature spells you cast cost you

less to cast.
Other red creatures you control get +1/+1.
2/2

Anakin, Child of the Force

Legendary Creature ─ Human Pilot (U)

: Add one mana of any color. Spend this mana only to pay for X costs.
Use the Force —

: Target Vehicle you control with crew cost X or less becomes an artifact creature until end of turn. Each

you spend on

activating this ability pays for

. Activate this ability only once a turn.
1/2
Credit: Rush_Clasic

Bounties

Sorcery (U)
X target creatures become wanted.
Draw a card.

Bullseye Wamprats

Sorcery (U)
Destroy target land.
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Back Home

Sorcery (U)
Gain control of target land.

Consumed by Hate

Instant (U)
Use the Force — Each

you spend on casting

pays for

.
Target creature gets +X/+0 until end of turn. If Consumed by Hate was cast from exile, put it into your hand as it resolves.

Fire Fight

Sorcery (U)
Choose one —
• Fire Fight deals 2 damage to each creature.
• Fire Fight deals 3 damage divided as you choose among one, two, or three targets.

Rogue Sith

Creature ─ Sith Outlaw (U)
Sith Warrior (This creature enters with a haste or first strike counter.)
Bounty hunter (When this enters, target creature becomes wanted. Wanted creatures have “When this creature dies, each of your opponents creates a treasure.”)
5/2

Torturous Revelation

Sorcery (U)
Torturous Revelation deals 3 damage to target player.
That player can’t draw cards on their next turn.
"NO! That's impossible!"

Tusken Sniper

Creature ─ Sand Person Warrior (U)
First strike
When Tusken Sniper enters it deals 1 damage to any target.

: Tusken Sniper deals 1 damage to any target.
3/2

Tusken War Party

Creature ─ Sand Person Warrior (U)
Trample
Heroic — Create a token copy of Tusken War Party.
6/1

Red Rares

I Don't Remember

Sorcery (R)
Each player discards two cards, then draws a card for each card they discarded.
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Owning a Droid

Sorcery (R)
Each player returns an artifact card from their graveyard to the battlefield.

Force Sensitive

Enchantment ─ Aura (R)
Enchant creature you control
If an ability of enchanted creature would trigger, instead it triggers twice.
Destiny

(, Tap an untapped and unenchanted creature you control: Return this from your graveyard to the battlefield attached to that creature. Activate this ability only as a sorcery.)

Kylo Ren

Legendary Creature ─ Sith Warrior (R)
Haste, first strike
Heroic — Exile the top three cards of your library, then you may discard your hand. If you do, put the exiled cards into your hand.
5/3

Mad Warrior

Creature ─ Sith Warrior (R)
Sith Warrior (This creature enters with a haste or first strike counter.)
Heroic — Trigger target creatures enter the battlefield trigger as if Mad Warrior had entered the battlefield with that ability.
2/2

Pod Racing

Sorcery (R)
Untap all vehicles that attacked this turn. After this main phase, there is an additional combat phase followed by an additional main phase.

Assemble the Fleet

Sorcery (R)
Use the Force — Each

you spend on casting

pays for

.
You may put a Vehicle card from your hand onto the battlefield. Until end of turn, each vehicle you control becomes an artifact creature, gains haste, and gets +X/+0.
Credit: Rush_Clasic

Starcharts

Enchantment (R)
Each player may play an additional land on their as long as it's a nonbasic land.

Red Mythics

Asteroid Field

Sorcery (M)
Create five asteroid tokens. (They are artifacts with “, sacrifice this: Asteroid deals 2 damage to target creature.”)

Krayt Dragon

Creature ─ Beast (M)
Trample, haste

: Krayt Dragon gets +1/+0 until end of turn.
Whenever you tap a Mountain for mana, add

.
7/7

Author:	Rush_Clasic [ Thu Sep 19, 2024 11:09 am ]
Post subject:	Re: Dudibus Designs ─ Star Wars [Red]
Are you still missing a red rare? Or was that leftover from the previous post asking to fill holes in the set?

Author:	Dudibus [ Thu Sep 19, 2024 9:09 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Dudibus Designs ─ Star Wars [Red]
Nope, still missing. I would love to see what you come up with.

Author:	Rush_Clasic [ Fri Sep 20, 2024 10:25 am ]
Post subject:	Re: Dudibus Designs ─ Star Wars [Red]
Don't have any large red beasties in the file, so why not the Krayt Dragon from Mandalorian? Krayt Dragon Creature - Dragon Wurm (R) Trample When you cast Krayt Dragon and whenever it attacks, each player sacrifices a land. Krayt Dragon's power and toughness are each equal to the number of land cards in all graveyards. /

Author:	Dudibus [ Sun Sep 22, 2024 11:34 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: Dudibus Designs ─ Star Wars [Red]
I had him in the mythics .

Author:	Rush_Clasic [ Tue Sep 24, 2024 10:13 am ]
Post subject:	Re: Dudibus Designs ─ Star Wars [Red]
Missed that! Okay, I've been meaning to review these threads, so let's start with this one and maybe that will answer the question of what's needed. Han Shot First - Most commons these days that require you to jump through hoops to cast them offer options so they aren't useless in limited. I'd change this to "As an additional cost to cast Han Shot First, tap a wanted creature you control or pay ." Or... I'd consider changing this to support heroic; you don't have enough spells that trigger it. Maybe: Han Shot First Sorcery (C) You may cast Han Short First any time you could cast an instant if a creature entered under an opponent's control this turn. Choose target creature you control. This deals damage equal to its power to target creature you don't control. Infamous Outlaw - Did you want this pumping opposing creatures? Most lords these days are one-sided for gameplay reasons, but I can understand if you wanted it to be global for the flavor. Jawa Ambusher - A 3-mana 1/1 that doesn't do anything without the support of other spells feels a little too boom-or-bust. Looking at everything again, you have 5 red cards with heroic in the file but only 3 red cards that trigger heroic positively (Bounties does as well, but that's not strictly positive.) Not sure exactly how I'd change this one. Might depend on what support heroic gets. Bullseye Wamprats - Should be "Womp Rats". Doesn't really convey "destroy land". They were pesky creatures. Consumed by Hate - I don't get the exile clause. Is there a subtheme I missed? I Don't Remember//Owning a Droid - The two halves can't return a discarded artifact because the artifact can't be targeted until after casting the spell. I'd consider making this a slightly cheaper combo-oriented global version of the card: I Don't Remember Sorcery (R) Each player discards two cards, then draws a card for each card they discarded. ~~FUSE~~ Owning A Droid Sorcery (R) Each player returns an artifact card from their graveyard to the battlefield. Assemble the Fleet - I think the crew part of this card might be too weak. Maybe the X should be the team boost instead. Also wondering if it should return the vehicle back to your hand, but for now, I don't think so: Assemble the Fleet Sorcery (R) Use the Force — Each you spend on casting this pays for . You may put a Vehicle card from your hand onto the battlefield. Until end of turn, each vehicle you control becomes an artifact creature, gains haste, and gets +X/+0. Starcharts -Despite it being uglier, I think this should read "Each player may play an additional land on their as long as it's a nonbasic land." Otherwise, I wonder if there's confusion about both lands needing to be nonbasic. ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ With that review, I think a flashy heroic support spell might be what's wanted at rare. Force Sensitive Enchantment - Aura (R) Enchant creature you control If an ability of enchanted creature would trigger, instead it triggers twice. Destiny (, Tap an untapped and unenchanted creature you control: Return this from your graveyard to the battlefield attached to that creature. Activate this ability only as a sorcery.)

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Author:	Dudibus [ Wed Sep 25, 2024 8:48 am ]
Post subject:	Re: Dudibus Designs ─ Star Wars [Red]
Thank you very much for the feedback. You are right about there not being enough to trigger heroic at common. I tried to cover that, but I might have "designed myself out of it" as I was going along. I am good with the changes to Han Shot First. I will update Infamous Outlaw to be your creatures. That was an oversight. I am ok with a redesign on the Jawa. I was "hole filling" at the time. Not sure off hand. I am a little embarassed at mispelling Womprats. This might be better as a targeting removal spell instead? Consumed by Hate was a way for me to jazz up a standard Howl from Beyond in red by giving it rules that red would actually use. Thematically, it encourages attack, and if it comes back to your hand, repeated attack. I am good with the changes to I Don't Remember Owning a Droid. I am good with the changes to Assemble the Fleet (love that card actually, it was exactly what I was looking for). Starcharts - I'll use the updated wording. Force Sensitive is great. Adding now. I had a card called Force Senstive for a bit in multicolored , but I think I cut it to make room for other things. Post updated with the changes. Still noodling Womprats and Jawa Ambusher. Also, there is something weird going on with posting and "\\". It keeps doubling the number in the post whenever I edit. Proposed changes: Bullseye Womprats Sorcery (U) As an additional cost to cast Bullseye Womprats, exhaust a Vehicle you control. Bullseye Womprats deals 5 damage to target creature. ~ FUSE ~ Back Home Sorcery (U) Until end of turn, Vehicles you control have ": Untap target nonbasic land". Jawa Ambusher Creature ─ Jawa Warrior (C) If an opponent controls an artifact, you may cast Jawa Ambusher as if it had flash. 3/1

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