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So What About Riddles and Rime?
Cool story, bro (Yea) 86%  86%  [ 6 ]
You've got a snowball's chance in Hell (Nay) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
A snowball's chance in Hel? That's probably ok... (NAI) 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
You know what killed the Dinosaurs? THE ICE AGE! (Abstain) 14%  14%  [ 1 ]
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PostPosted: Sat Jun 27, 2015 1:39 am 
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Interesting installment... Way to be contemporary!

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Assuming the typos Luna pointed out are fixed, I'm voting "Yea." I really liked this one.


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Very well-written, eerie tone, nice character interactions, cool hints at the future of Aralheim... All around, I really enjoyed this.

One minor spelling mistake I noticed:

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