We need more timey-wimey stuff, so this gets a yea from me on that arbitrary premise.
That, and you know, it's a good story and Alessa is a compelling character. But that's whatever, I guess.
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| Author: | Barinellos [ Sat May 24, 2014 3:28 pm ] |
| Post subject: | [Vote][Story]Live for the moment |
viewtopic.php?f=19&t=2664 To go ahead and get Alessa into the archives. I would put Untitled up for vote too but... I mislike not having a title. Of the two though, I feel like Untitled is the stronger piece, but this was her debut, so it gets first shot. |
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| Author: | KeeperofManyNames [ Sun May 25, 2014 12:37 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: [Vote][Story]Live for the moment |
I liked this when you posted it and I still do. It serves as an effective character introduction, and your action scenes are a blast to read and fascinating mechanically. This gets a solid yea from me. |
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| Author: | RuwinReborn [ Sun May 25, 2014 12:45 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: [Vote][Story]Live for the moment |
We need more timey-wimey stuff, so this gets a yea from me on that arbitrary premise. That, and you know, it's a good story and Alessa is a compelling character. But that's whatever, I guess.
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| Author: | OrcishLibrarian [ Mon May 26, 2014 5:15 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: [Vote][Story]Live for the moment |
I'll just refer to my comments on the original thread, and summarize here with a "yea." |
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| Author: | RavenoftheBlack [ Fri May 30, 2014 2:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: [Vote][Story]Live for the moment |
I, as well, have said what I have to say on this piece. It belongs in the archives, all things considered. |
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| Author: | Lord LunaEquie is me [ Sat May 31, 2014 9:56 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: [Vote][Story]Live for the moment |
I just injected my reactions into the original thread just to make sure you got them and I thought it was more fitting to put it there. |
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