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Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Tue Apr 29, 2014 6:30 am ]
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Red Eyes :diamond:
by OrcishLibrarian

Red Eyes

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Tue Apr 29, 2014 12:34 pm ]
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I'm not sure I have anything more to say about this piece than I've already said. Good story, good characters, good work, goodbye.

Author:  RuwinReborn [ Tue Apr 29, 2014 1:35 pm ]
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I'm not sure I have anything more to say about this piece than I've already said. Good story, good characters, good work, goodbye.


Zing!

Yea from me.

Author:  Lord LunaEquie is me [ Wed Apr 30, 2014 2:05 pm ]
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Unequivocal yea from I.

I've got no real time at the moment to leave my impressions, so I'll drop them in the original thread sometime later.

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Wed Apr 30, 2014 4:51 pm ]
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I've got no real time at the moment to leave my impressions, so I'll drop them in the original thread sometime later.


I very much look forward to them, whenever you have the time.

Thanks, Luna!

Author:  Aaarrrgh [ Thu May 01, 2014 3:49 am ]
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I voted, but didn't get around to saying anything before.

It is hard to make a dialogue driven piece to flow properly, but you walked that line nicely. I figured out some of the twists, but not all of them, which is exactly how I want twists to be. And I liked that the ending doesn't actually state exactly what happened. Did Tishia kill herself? Or did she try to kill Jackie, and failed? Very good execution (no pun intended).

Clear Yea from me!

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Thu May 01, 2014 6:00 am ]
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Aaarrrgh wrote:
Did Tishia kill herself? Or did she try to kill Jackie, and failed? Very good execution (no pun intended).


Oh, snap! You slay me, sir.

So glad you enjoyed it, Aaarrrgh!

Author:  Lord LunaEquie is me [ Thu May 08, 2014 12:42 am ]
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Oops, I was supposed to add this to the Archives yesterday. Sorry, it's kind of crunch time now in the week before finals and to top it off, a meatspace friend is visiting during his week off between semesters, so I've been busy. I'll try to get it up sometime this week.

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Thu May 08, 2014 8:37 am ]
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Oops, I was supposed to add this to the Archives yesterday. Sorry, it's kind of crunch time now in the week before finals and to top it off, a meatspace friend is visiting during his week off between semesters, so I've been busy. I'll try to get it up sometime this week.


No worries, Luna. The story isn't going anywhere.

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