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PostPosted: Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:02 pm 
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Since Aaarrrgh seemed to be on board and nobody expressly said anything against the idea, I think it's worth it to hold a re-vote for two stories that did not get outright rejected or accepted from the Anthology back on the mothership.

They are:

Unnamed poem for Tibalt (by cogminded)


Getting Ahead (by Skibo)



Now the original votes were 3NAI for the poem and 1Y/1N for Skibo's story; but for the sake of not having to trudge through the mothership again, and to allow those who may have voted the first time to either reaffirm their choice or change their mind, I'll start it fresh.

Aaarrrgh already threw in his two cents, so I'll start the tally with his post:
Aaarrrgh wrote:
Well, I'll just throw my voice in right here, if that's okay.

I felt the Tibalt poem didn't flow properly, and I agree with Barinellos' canon concerns, so I'd vote Nay on that.
[Poem for Tibalt] (Cogminded)
Y
N 1
NAI

I liked all of the others, so I'll give my official vote for Getting Ahead:

Getting ahead (Skibo)
Y 1
N
NAI

I find it interesting that the alchemist said that the arrangement was for the payment to be split in two, as though they hadn't expected all three of the graverobbers to make it back...


As a final note, I apologize if doing this was either unnecessary or unwanted, but I find that -at least around here- I need to power on ahead to get anything done.

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PostPosted: Sun Oct 20, 2013 5:29 pm 
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I have no problem with re-voting. It doesn't hurt anything, and it gives me a reason to look at some of these I have more or less forgotten about. After re-reading these, my original opinion remains the same. Neither one blew me away by any stretch. The poem's irregular meter and generally weak rhymes make it hard for me to really get into, but if the meter were tightened up (if Cogminded is still around anywhere) I'd say yes, but for me it's "Not As Is." As for Getting Ahead, it's fine, just nothing special, to me. But because I can't think of a good reason to say no, I'll say yes.

Unnamed Poem for Tibalt (by Cogminded)
Yea:
Nay: 1
NAI: 1

Getting Ahead (by Skibo)
Yea: 2
Nay:
NAI:


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I'm voting on just the poem for the moment; I'll come back and read the story some time during the week.

Honestly, I don't think it's all that bad. There's nothing that stands out either, though. To me it's... I want to say mediocre, but not meaning so in a negative way -- just that it's middle-of-the-ground kind of quality. I may be a little cynical, but I think that we should be aiming for higher quality. I'm going to say Nay.

Unnamed Poem for Tibalt (by Cogminded)
Yea:
Nay: 2
NAI: 1

Getting Ahead (by Skibo)
Yea: 2
Nay:
NAI:

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I don't think it is in our best interest to use the poem based entirely on the fact that it plays with canon material.

Unnamed Poem for Tibalt (by Cogminded)
Yea:
Nay: 3
NAI: 1

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Poem for Tibalt
Yea:
Nay: 4
NAI: 1

Getting Ahead
Yea: 3
Nay:
NAI:

Fancy shuffling!

As a reminder, this was Seasons of Dusk as we last saw it...

Θ Harvest Moon Θ
1) Childhood's End [D]
2) *Untitled (Skibo Poem) [H]
3) Bell, Book, and Candle [u]
4) Hinterland Within [W]
5) The Cellar Door [S]
6) *Nephalia Rains [N][G]
7) To Purge the Wicked [W][G]
8) Blessed Be My Guilt [G]
9) Creatures of the Night [V]
10) Dear and Decorations [u]
11) Through Darkness [G][D]
12) *Blasphemous Act [D]
13) Requiem For An Angel [N]

∩ Hunter's Moon ∩
1) Butcher's Cleaver [H]
2) Fury Without [W]
3) Danse Macabre [u][S]
4) *Thirteen [N?]
5) Crucible [H]
6) Allo's Fortnight [W][H]
7) Ill Met By Moonlight [D]
8) Hollow [G]
9) Night Watch [u]
10) *The Maid and the Gentelman [V]
11) Consummare [D]
12) Dear Namior [W]
13) Through the Eyes of the Specter of Might-Have-Been [H][u]

☼ New Moon ☼
1) Therapy [W][S]
2) *Cathar's Prayer [N]
3) Occurance at a Moorland Manor [G][D]
4) The Unlife and Times of Gorin Halvarsson [u]
5) (Untitled) by Fakeartist [V]
6) Justice [W]
7) *Rising Moon [N]
8) Un Bon Vein Rouge [V]
9) (Something untitled) by Shamsiel [G]
10) Falkenrath's Seat [V]
11)The Banker and the Geist [G]
12) *Parabel of the Stars [N]
13) The Fateful Hour [H][u][S]

But Un Bon Vein Rouge is out. It looks like Getting Ahead will probably pass and enter the Anthology, but it can't just take the place of Un Bon Vein. I suggest the following Alterations

Un Bon Vein Rouge is out.
Justice switches into its vacated spot at New Moon 8
Blessed Be My Guilt moves into New Moon 6
Getting Ahead moves into the vacated position at Harvest Moon 8

We also need to get someone to ghost edit Hinterland Within. I think it's worth saving, but no one's got a handle on Tequila to revise it.

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I thank you for that, Tevish, but I meant to make a thread concerning the ordering/current status of the Anthology today. I'm running through what we've got, but I need to double-check how many we have that were all in. Thread up.

Okay, I kind of liked Getting Ahead. *groan* and I just realized what a bad joke the title is.

Anyway, some typos:
Him and his partner > ? Grammatical?
Nephlia > Nephalia
Keens eyes > keen eyes
Fanya, > subtract the comma
Fanya locked her target onto the other wolf > ? Grammatical?
God forsake place > god forsaken OR Avacyn forsaken
I take great joy in know that > I take great joy in knowing that

So, I say Yea, although I it feels like a small part of a series of interlinked stories that I know won't be done.

Poem for Tibalt
Yea:
Nay: 4
NAI: 1

Getting Ahead
Yea: 4
Nay:
NAI:

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PostPosted: Sat Oct 26, 2013 8:07 pm 
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Yeah coming late to these e left me with new insight.

Poem:
Yay
Nay:4
NAI: 2

Story:
Yay: 5
Nay
NAI


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Ah! No! Yes! These are done.

cogminded's poem for Tibalt has been REJECTED.

Getting Ahead has been ACCEPTED.


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