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Vote in "The Collector?"
Poll ended at Mon Nov 27, 2017 11:01 am
Yea: 83%  83%  [ 5 ]
Nay: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Not As Is: 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Abstain: 17%  17%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 6
Total voters : 6
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PostPosted: Sat Oct 28, 2017 11:01 am 
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Title: The Collector
Poet: RavenoftheBlack
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This is part of my informal "set" of three poems that I collectively consider my "Collector Series." This one features a variety of life-gaining artifacts.

The Collector


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PostPosted: Sat Nov 04, 2017 10:52 pm 
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Roses are red
Violets are blue
I love all these poems
And I voted "yea," too!

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PostPosted: Mon Nov 06, 2017 1:03 pm 
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I'll be honest, the "get a life" joke made me groan hard, but other than that this is fairly good, for what little I can offer an opinon on poetry.

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This one is hard for me to judge. I don't dislike it, and with a poem I feel like I should default to yea if I don't have a good objection. But this doesn't resonate as well as the others.

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