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[Vote][Story] A Tale for Every Occassion
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Author:  Tevish Szat [ Sun Oct 09, 2016 5:25 pm ]
Post subject:  [Vote][Story] A Tale for Every Occassion

Work Status if Accepted: Public

A Tale for Every Occassion

Author:  Lord LunaEquie is me [ Wed Oct 12, 2016 3:18 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Story] A Tale for Every Occassion

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But... not for tonight It's late, isn't it?

Missing period.

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I'll be honest, I both took far too much notice of Kylee's accent and could not actually hear the accent in my head. I don't know if it actually adds anything here.

On top of that, I'm not sure how much I actually like this from a point of view more removed. It seems too easy to poke holes in what happens in this story just the same as a stupid blockbuster movie. If Mishra was working on the machine, did Kylee not hear any of it? Why was he passing in front of her, to get tools or something? Wouldn't he capture her attention as he walked around? I just find it difficult to believe Kylee could be completely oblivious the entire time.

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Sat Oct 15, 2016 12:44 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Story] A Tale for Every Occassion

As I mentioned in the original thread, there are things about this piece that do not fit my personal tastes, but it does illustrate Oisin's unique abilities, and highlight an important component of his personality, so I'll vote Yea on it.

Author:  Huey Nomure [ Wed Nov 02, 2016 11:32 am ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Story] A Tale for Every Occassion

There IS a little problem in the position of the actors in this piece, as Luna points out; it may be easily explained, but I'd like to have that point clarified before I feel like giving my vote.

Author:  Lord LunaEquie is me [ Fri Nov 04, 2016 11:11 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Story] A Tale for Every Occassion

Well, considering I do have qualms with the story, have actually read it, and haven't actually voted on it yet, I'm going to put a big ol' Peter New NOPE on it.

Author:  Barinellos [ Sat Nov 05, 2016 10:42 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Story] A Tale for Every Occassion

I'm going for NaI... at least partly to have 1 vote in each category, but also because I think there's something about this that I'm just not able to put my finger on right now. I'm not staunchly opposed to the story, but I'm going to have to suss out exactly what's putting my off my biscuits about it, and until then, it wouldn't hurt to send it back to the drawing board.

Author:  M:EM Archivist [ Sun Nov 06, 2016 10:16 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Story] A Tale for Every Occassion

I'm going to call this Not Accepted for now. It's already been up for several weeks in a row and it does have 2-to-1 against, so it will be easier to say it was Not Accepted.

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