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Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Sat Oct 01, 2016 12:04 pm ]
Post subject:  [Vote][Thorneau][Elise] Little White Lies

Title: Little White Lies
Author: RavenoftheBlack
Status: Public
Word Count: 2697

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Little White Lies

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Tue Oct 04, 2016 9:38 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Thorneau][Elise] Little White Lies

YEEEEEEEESSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSS!

Err... I mean, "yea?"

:D

Author:  Lord LunaEquie is me [ Wed Oct 05, 2016 11:46 am ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Thorneau][Elise] Little White Lies

There was only one possible typo I noticed, though I can't say for sure whether it wasn't just a stylistic choice.

>“What shall we do, Papa,” Elise asked.
Possibly missing question mark.

Other than that, my reaction to this can best be summed up by referencing Sanford and Son.

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Wed Oct 05, 2016 12:50 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Thorneau][Elise] Little White Lies

Other than that, my reaction to this can best be summed up by referencing Sanford and Son.

"You big dummy!"?

Well, now, that just hurts my feelings...

:(

:D

Author:  Lord LunaEquie is me [ Wed Oct 05, 2016 2:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Thorneau][Elise] Little White Lies

Other than that, my reaction to this can best be summed up by referencing Sanford and Son.

"You big dummy!"?

Well, now, that just hurts my feelings...

:(

:D

No, no, the other one.

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Wed Oct 05, 2016 3:09 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Vote][Thorneau][Elise] Little White Lies

Other than that, my reaction to this can best be summed up by referencing Sanford and Son.

"You big dummy!"?

Well, now, that just hurts my feelings...

:(

:D

No, no, the other one.

Oh. Well, tell Elizabeth hello, I guess.

:D

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