This vote is for Seek and You Shall Find, wherein Tey'von meets a whom he hopes to be a kindred spirit.

Collaboratively written by myself and the esteemed Aaarrrgh. I was supposed to post this last week, but - in typical Ruwin fashion - I forgot completely. So here it is now!

To be voted on for the week of 4/17/16-4/23/16

Seek and You Shall Find

I'm going to vote "Not as is" for right now, and request that a line be added that in some way makes it clear that the Wanderer is using shapeshifting magic, as opposed to shapeshifting being an innate characteristic. Something like gathering mana, or concentrating, or him actually explaining it, anything like that would suffice, but that issue is a sticking point for me.

Voting Not As Is for the reasons I stated in the other thread. I feel it needs to be expanded a bit.

I am of course abstaining. Currently posting from phone, so cannot give the responses your concerns deserve at the moment. Will get back to you when I'm at a computer.

Quick, two people vote nay so we can have four 2's!

I'm mainly going to defer to my comments on the original thread, but the short version is that I'm a fan of this story, and it gets a "yea" from me!

I will say that while this squeaks by on majority vote, and just barely, I am still planning on enacting the changes Raven has suggested and maybe sprucing up the story in general. If it pleases the general "you", we can keep this out of the archive until it is edited, or I can edit it after it has been put in. Whatever is most convenient.

I'm with Ruwin on this. I want to turn at least one of the NAI's into a Yea before this gets in.