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Angelsong

Against the beasts which stalk the ground,
Or soldiers’ steel made razor sharp
And strong,
The sweetest respite can be found,
Amidst the dulcet angel’s harp,
And song.

A troubled mind and fiery heart,
Which burn in time to warfare’s cry
Of strife,
Can play a calmer, peaceful part,
And give a warm, contented sigh,
For life.

Those souls so wracked with doubt and fright,
Whose harsh assaults upon their mind
Won’t cease,
Can be, with mercy, bathed in light,
The Angelsong can help them find
Some peace.

The Angelsong’s a living thing,
A constant swirling thought that’s lent
A form.
Those few who hear the Angels sing
Are blessed to feel their heart content
And warm.

More holy than the staunchest priest,
The angels’ gift extends to all
That’s there.
The clash of sword and cry of beast,
Fall mute when angels sound the call
To prayer.

Author:	RavenoftheBlack [ Sat Nov 14, 2015 9:22 pm ]
Post subject:	[Voting][Poem]Angelsong
Title: Angelsong Poet: RavenoftheBlack Status: Public Word Count: 149 Angelsong Angelsong Against the beasts which stalk the ground, Or soldiers’ steel made razor sharp And strong, The sweetest respite can be found, Amidst the dulcet angel’s harp, And song. A troubled mind and fiery heart, Which burn in time to warfare’s cry Of strife, Can play a calmer, peaceful part, And give a warm, contented sigh, For life. Those souls so wracked with doubt and fright, Whose harsh assaults upon their mind Won’t cease, Can be, with mercy, bathed in light, The Angelsong can help them find Some peace. The Angelsong’s a living thing, A constant swirling thought that’s lent A form. Those few who hear the Angels sing Are blessed to feel their heart content And warm. More holy than the staunchest priest, The angels’ gift extends to all That’s there. The clash of sword and cry of beast, Fall mute when angels sound the call To prayer.

Author:	chinkeeyong [ Sat Nov 14, 2015 11:33 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: [Voting][Poem]Angelsong
The Archdemon Malvoch dislikes this poem.

Author:	Lunar Mystic [ Sun Nov 15, 2015 9:03 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: [Voting][Poem]Angelsong
I like it. I wasn't sure about the way you rhymed at first, but it grew on me. Nice rhymes! Yea

Author:	OrcishLibrarian [ Wed Nov 18, 2015 11:05 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: [Voting][Poem]Angelsong
Raven, do I remember correctly that this poem was basically commissioned, based on the art? Or am I mixing this up with something else? Anyway, I love the sort of cycling effect that the poem has. Very neat. "Yea" from me!

Author:	RavenoftheBlack [ Wed Nov 18, 2015 11:11 pm ]
Post subject:	Re: [Voting][Poem]Angelsong
OrcishLibrarian wrote: Raven, do I remember correctly that this poem was basically commissioned, based on the art? Or am I mixing this up with something else? Anyway, I love the sort of cycling effect that the poem has. Very neat. "Yea" from me! It wasn't commissioned, so much as requested by Barinellos, based off the card.

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