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| Author: | Tevish Szat [ Sat Jun 27, 2015 1:39 am ] |
| Post subject: | [Vote][Story][Aralheim] Riddles and Rime |
Found Here If accepted, this story will be public |
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| Author: | Lunar Mystic [ Wed Jul 01, 2015 2:32 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: [Vote][Story][Aralheim] Riddles and Rime |
Interesting installment... Way to be contemporary! Yea |
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| Author: | RavenoftheBlack [ Sun Jul 05, 2015 12:10 am ] |
| Post subject: | Re: [Vote][Story][Aralheim] Riddles and Rime |
Assuming the typos Luna pointed out are fixed, I'm voting "Yea." I really liked this one. |
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| Author: | Moonbeam [ Sun Jul 05, 2015 8:46 pm ] |
| Post subject: | Re: [Vote][Story][Aralheim] Riddles and Rime |
Very well-written, eerie tone, nice character interactions, cool hints at the future of Aralheim... All around, I really enjoyed this. One minor spelling mistake I noticed:
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