Title: Invocation of St. Micha Poet: RavenoftheBlack Status: Public Word Count: 156
This poem is up for vote for the voting "week" of November, 2019.
This poem is written in the form of a prayer on Dammerdall, to one of the Seventy-Seven Saints of the Church of the Holy Catharsis. If voted in, I would further ask that this poem be included in Dammerdall's dossier.
Invocation of St. Micha
Invocation of St. Micha
We pray to Micha, Saint of those who die, We ask she spark her holy lantern’s flame, To light our way into that Palace High.
In sapling youth, we fear to say goodbye, So as we grow into a stronger frame, We pray to Micha, Saint of those who die.
Adulthood’s bark, like armor worn, whereby We all defend our faith and speak her name, To light our way into that Palace High.
As elder oaks, no longer young or spry, Who glimpse a future, otherworldly aim, We pray to Micha, Saint of those who die.
The withered pine, who reaches to the sky, Reflects in pools and sheds its life’s acclaim, To light our way into that Palace High.
And when the ashes spread, we all know why: The fires purify our mortal shame. We pray to Micha, Saint of those who die, To light our way into that Palace High.
I like formulaic poetry, so this sits well with me. There's a lot of intriguing imagery which helps to mark that this is not set in our world. Voted Yea.
Now that this poll is officially over, it's time to congratulate Aaarrrgh for designing Hill, which has been decided by popular vote to be the Card of the Month for October 2013!
I like formulaic poetry, so this sits well with me. There's a lot of intriguing imagery which helps to mark that this is not set in our world. Voted Yea.
Thanks! I'm really fond of villanelles, though with the repetition, they are a bit hard to do well.
And hey, if you like form poetry, feel free to check out Raven's Rhymes! There are probably a few in there you will like!
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