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The sun rises...
We charge! 83%  83%  [ 5 ]
Hold back 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Challenge the command 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
I don't have a joke for abstaining 17%  17%  [ 1 ]
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PostPosted: Sun Mar 13, 2016 4:22 am 
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One Cold Morning
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Status: Private (until Ossia is complete)

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word count: 1250-ish?

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PostPosted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 3:22 pm 
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I enjoyed this one, although my natural paranoia and expectation of twists makes me sort of wish Mil'Tar is being played for a fool by the Council here.

Anyway, "Yea" from me.


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PostPosted: Sat Mar 19, 2016 9:48 pm 
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Man, I must have missed this, somehow, the first time around. But I'm glad that I read it now, because I really enjoyed it. Thanks for sharing, Razor.

As ever, with your Ossia stories, I can tell that I'm missing some of the context, since I haven't read the dossier yet. But, as ever, that doesn't actually matter, since the story stands just fine on its own.

One quick typo that I wanted to flag: "Together, the Council had examined every path, every possible means of reigning in the djinn, bringing the wilding bands under control." Think you want "reining," there, rather than "reigning."

Anyway, gets a big "yea" from me!

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This gets a yea from me, and since everybody's avatars are switched up you won't realize that I'm just Raven breaking the rules to vote twice!

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One quick typo that I wanted to flag: "Together, the Council had examined every path, every possible means of reigning in the djinn, bringing the wilding bands under control." Think you want "reining," there, rather than "reigning."

you are correct!

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PostPosted: Wed Mar 23, 2016 10:39 pm 
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It's nicely written-

yea from me-


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