Originally posted here:
viewtopic.php?f=19&t=12116

While I'd considered the notes offered from others about the scale of what Zhiran did, as I reflected on it, I came to the conclusion that explaining the magic in the story lessened the weight of it. In terms of tone, it felt inappropriate to try to find a place for it either.

So I'm putting this up for vote as it was posted (minus any typos that might have been made)

I remember this piece (see what I did there?) and I still like it a lot! I'm a big fan of the Cabal (in a twisted sort of way) and I like the interactions here. But as I said in the original thread, what really stands out here, despite all the power that's on display between the Cabal and what Zhiran does to Ashkanar, is Zhiran's search for his memory of his son, for his humanity. Very well done. Easy "Yea" from me.

Also, nice job with the card selection in the vote. They fit very well. Almost too well.

As I said back on the original thread, this is really good, really powerful stuff. Easy "yea" from me!

Delicious fromthe start! I love how you describe things.

yea