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Poll ended at Sun Jun 15, 2014 11:27 pm
Yea 83%  83%  [ 5 ]
Nay 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Not As Is 0%  0%  [ 0 ]
Abstain 17%  17%  [ 1 ]
Total votes : 6
Total voters : 6
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PostPosted: Sun Jun 01, 2014 11:27 pm 
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2014 5:23 pm 
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I've had to move voting weeks to Sundays, so I missed this getting put up; I'm going to count this toward next voting week, then (I'll extend the poll to run that long).


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PostPosted: Mon Jun 02, 2014 8:51 pm 
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I've had to move voting weeks to Sundays, so I missed this getting put up; I'm going to count this toward next voting week, then (I'll extend the poll to run that long).


Works for me - thanks!

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 03, 2014 6:11 pm 
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Typo?
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She hated having to courtesy to the House Dentevi matriarch

I believe you mean "curtsey", though I'm not entirely sure, as I rarely come across the word.

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I used to lie awake nights, thinking about what I could do to you – what I would do to you – to get you to make me whole again

I feel could use some emphasis on the "would", probably make it italicized.

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Okay, I remember raising concerns over Beryl going specifically to Aloise after all this went down, but I think I understand now what you were going for. There's been something that happened off-screen which I'm interested in seeing, definitely, and it all makes more sense than when I read this originally. I imagine this is where Friends and Killers takes place, but I'll have to read it myself to find out. Either way, like Keeper I've been almost carrying on as if this was already in the Archives.

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PostPosted: Tue Jun 03, 2014 10:19 pm 
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Re: "curtsey," super bad typo, thanks much for the catch. Edited that above.

Re: Beryl and Aloise, I do think that "Friends and Killers" will answer some of those questions. But, if not, please, please raise them again.

Thanks, Luna!

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PostPosted: Thu Jun 05, 2014 9:37 pm 
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Voted yea. This has been in the archives, basically, anyway, so...

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PostPosted: Sat Jun 07, 2014 7:12 pm 
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So yeah, still a good piece and another link in the chain of a good, arching story. Yea from me.


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