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Hey guys! It's November, the best month of the year! And as we know that means it's NaNoWriMo!!!
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Woo...

For this I decided to open a thread, but have it be slightly different than my last version.
What I'll do is just post what I write, when I write it, upto the daily goal of 1666 words. no editing, no corrections, just pure oomph.

Also feel free to leave comments, ask for help if you guys are doing it, or just in general chat it up. 50k here we come!

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Oh, I also forgot to say, it's only 1666 even if you're ahead or behind. If I write more, you only get the 1666 mid-sentence... doesn't matter. I also continue the next day, from whenever I start to the first 1666. So there will most certainly be gaps every so often. But you should be able to still follow along. Again this is more a game than a story here. This just makes it more fun and manageable on my end, given my time crunch.

The background of the story...
The concept of this story came about from me wanting to write a "not-child-themed" (dare I say adult?) story of the Pokemon world. Something that older people would be able to appreciate better than the anime. How it fits into my series, I cannot say (you'll find out bits and pieces later), but it isn't pokemon, though there will obviously be similarities.

i'm going to try and write this so that earth-animals are to this, as zombies are to walking dead. In that, I'm not going to reference earth animals if at all possible. So if something looks like a large spider, I'll describe it rather tahn refer to it as a large spider. These people have never seen a spider before (like how int he walking dead they never use the word zombie).

The first 1.6 k...
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 Post subject: Re: Nanowrimo!!!
PostPosted: Sat Nov 01, 2014 6:05 pm 
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No time for NaNoWriMo this year, but I'll be keeping tabs on this thread.

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Up to 4.5 k.

this is roughly the last 1600, but not completely.
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There is a very slight gap between the ending of last post, and the beginning of this post. You can probably imagine what it is, but I'm still not going to tell you (rules and all that). Here's the nect batch of word count for the day!

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Woo! Already made today's goal! Slowly but surely, I'm working some plot into this...

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 Post subject: Re: Nanowrimo!!!
PostPosted: Tue Nov 04, 2014 8:00 pm 
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It's difficult to believe these characters are all eighteen and above. Have they gone to school? If not, shouldn't they have some apprenticeship or work experience?

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Today's batch... tomorrow there will be a big jump in the story (I'm going to be doing a few word wars today), but for now you have a few sentences gap between last part and this part.

To answer your question CKY...
This isn't set on modern earth so things work a bit differently. I haven't revealed where this happens yet.

Schooling happens later. Sen is 18 but only in his second year (we don't know if this is of all school, or just something akin to high school/college: I mean one of the test questions was about physiolectronics. That sounds like pretty serious stuff :p )
Lucas is apprenticed to his father (their father gets fleshed out a little better in this bit), Sen wanted to be, but his father wanted him to finish school first.

They are supposed to be intelligent and childish (per se). Not young at heart, but easily excitable. They aren't the most social people, and for good reason. Somethings will be revealed now that I hope will clarify some of that. That is the general characteristics I'm going for. I also wanted to make sure that they had some sort of connection. the best way I could is through games/competition. I wanted the brotherly love vibe, and that's the first thing that came to mind.

One major thing I'm currently worreid about is whether or not Sen sounds insane. I like that he talks to himself, but I wonder if it's too eccentric.

All that said, your comment is noted, and is something I will look to work on. I do need to age the characters a bit. I guess I over-compensated the entire peaceful vs dangerous time frames.

I reveal two new characters. One by name, and one via sinister messaging. It's an upgrade to text messaging, for bad people :p

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 Post subject: Re: Nanowrimo!!!
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I wish Emily was a less passive character. "Damsel in distress" might not be what you're going for, but that's how it comes off to me.

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I wish Emily was a less passive character. "Damsel in distress" might not be what you're going for, but that's how it comes off to me.

That changes later. For certain. She's just in an awkward situation because she wants to do the right thing, but isn't necessarily involved. I would like to think that this event is a major turning point for her considering her background. She was robbed before, and she has another run in with a different criminal organization and she won't let it happen again. Later on she does become a proactive character.

Right now all the characters are supposed to be in a fairly helpless state, and here's why:

One of my complaints about the Pokemon games in general is the leveling system. I like that it exists, but the gym leaders start as early as the teens and range up to the 40+'s. The same with teh bad guy teams. That I dislike. The chracters, at least teh bad guys' teams, should be very high level. Not elite four good, but enough to defeat a string of casual trainers.

In my story, I set each person (not wild encounters, but each character) at a base of really tough unless there is a specific reason too (spoilers: a war is starting :p ). For example one character is being mentored. Some of his team is his and lower leveled, but some of his team is lent to him and powerful; he uses a mix of the two as necessary. Right now the main protagonists essentially are starting fresh with a low level team, and need to be helped along by other characters. This also sets up plot for later yaddayadda, I hope that will clear some things up during the course of the story.

That said, there will be a reason for the (what equate to gym leaders) to have a lower-leveled team, and that will be explained in the story. As such, you'll notice that they are refered to as pets and nobody has mentioned any such recreational use of this technology. Right now it's used by the military and criminals, if not for the use of families as pets. That's important to the story as well.

Next batch coming up...

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So there's a big gap this time between last bit and this bit... Sorry but that's how this thread works :p
At first I was worried because most of that was the action bits, but you get the tail end of that in this part, as it starts to wind down.

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There is a few sentences gap between last bit and this bit...

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A slight gap, but nothign major. you could probably figure out what is missing...

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I'll cheat a bit: these papers change the course of the story. So, you might think, what happened between now and then, just know that whatever 'did' happen, is because of them.
I really thought that I was going to squeeze those last few sentences in, but nope. This is 1666 words...

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I didn't get a chance to do a word war with my friend this weekend, so I'm not as far ahead as I had anticipated, but there's still a decent gap between last part and this part...

But you get Gremlin's first real battle!


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here is my concept art of Primis!

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This would've been up sooner, but with about 500 words to go, I kept dozing off, and that's not a way to write properly.

There is a major gap between these two parts due my friends and I catching up in our word wars... But fortunately, it should be fairly easy to fill in the blanks in this instance.

I'm at 23407 so far. :)

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Phew the next batch....

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Yep. I took a break yesterday. That doesn't mean I won't do doubl today, it just means I took a day off. A big and important scene is here. One of the big things in this story, is the popular theory of the Pokemon War speculated about in the games.
I'm under the impression that having a war where guns and tanks aren't used, but creatures instead, would be amazing. If you can't figure that part out by now, spoilers, there's going to be a war.
I'm doing little things here and there to try and figure out hwo to best describe the battles, but without spoiling the best stuff.

In the last battle, you see two people commanding their teams in a low-risk battle. In this scene you see how some out-of-the-norm tactics can be utilized with creatures in war. I hope you like it.
Part two is iincoming and will be a direct continuation from this.

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Annnnnnd part two...

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So I didn't get any writing done at work, and took anotehr day off knowing that I had all Saturday to do whatever. So expect another double portion later today.

Also, I apologize in advance, though I finished the scene in 5k words, it was the last thousand words where I explained why Lucas was staying away from Sen. So ... that information isn't available to you unless I restate it somewhere... Oops :p

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