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Author: | JV [ Thu Jul 07, 2016 8:27 pm ] |
Post subject: | Be Kind to Yourselves and Others |
Spoiler
put me in that car or another like it; my inherited Volkswagen breaks its share of the laws of the road, and were my skin thirty shades darker the police would know it by sight. my labor is removed from a child's mirth by many layers of abstraction. put me in that driver's seat, i too have committed no true crime but my recent good deeds are spare, i am no father to children, no role model to the young, i take more compassion than i dole out. his blood more precious than mine! and you spilled it, we all saw, "tectonic" the force between his world and your own, i cannot forgive you as in the way i cannot forgive the earth for quaking, your fault the maw the fault-line and i know you will never sleep well again yet i cannot help but think to offer my- self all the same |
Author: | Lunar Mystic [ Fri Jul 08, 2016 12:10 am ] |
Post subject: | Re: Be Kind to Yourselves and Others |
Hmmmmm.... I'm gonna need to reflect on that... then read the spoiuler ' doof'! Now, I'm really gonna need to reflect on that. How do you say that 'out loud'? What does it sound like? What happened to you? My life is rough too. are you a hard worker? no-one speaks everyone listens- to themselves No more computers for me. I actually liked your poem , Johnny.... just wondering about it. It's very filled with powewrful words. |
Author: | Fuelheart [ Sat Nov 12, 2016 6:47 pm ] |
Post subject: | Re: Be Kind to Yourselves and Others |
Compelling use of imagery. Also, cheer up. As long as you've got a heartbeat, you're no less a part of what we're all a part of. Despair is for chumps! Grow your dreams from the soil of hardship and then make a stirfry out of 'em! |
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