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[Plane] Thorneau
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Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Tue Sep 02, 2014 7:56 pm ]
Post subject:  [Plane] Thorneau

Okay, so anyone who knows me knows that Worldbuilding really isn't my thing. But, in my recent story, The Magician's Crossroads, I featured a new world that I really enjoyed working with, and I thought I should develop it a little further, and this is what resulted. So, hopefully you enjoy this strange new world of mine!

Thorneau

Author:  chinkeeyong [ Wed Sep 03, 2014 4:02 am ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

Too French; didn't read.

In all seriousness, this is a pretty cool setting. I like the Tarot analogue and the relatively low-key conflicts that define the plane, rather than the usual world-spanning epics that WOTC pushes out.

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Wed Sep 03, 2014 2:40 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

Too French; didn't read.

In all seriousness, this is a pretty cool setting. I like the Tarot analogue and the relatively low-key conflicts that define the plane, rather than the usual world-spanning epics that WOTC pushes out.

Thanks, CKY! Glad you liked it.

Now that you mention it, this is sort of French, isn't it? Well, Tevish's map had an opening there, I think...

Author:  chinkeeyong [ Thu Sep 04, 2014 7:22 am ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

"Sort of" French!?

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Thu Sep 04, 2014 10:15 am ]
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"Sort of" French!?

:paranoid:

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Fri Sep 05, 2014 3:46 pm ]
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Because I know that everyone has been waiting with bated breath for the answer to this one question, and you all know what it is, I have decided to answer it for you.

Here you go.

Spoiler


You're welcome!

Author:  KeeperofManyNames [ Mon Sep 15, 2014 9:47 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

I kind of love this plane a lot.

One bone of contention though is the framing of this as a plane rocked by remarkably frequent revolutions. Considering that ages seem to last 1000+ years, I'd characterize this as a plane rocked by centuries of remarkable lack of revolution :P

That aside, this is a well sketched out plane with definite room for expansion.

Still really want to see the cards :P

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Tue Sep 16, 2014 8:53 am ]
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Because I know that everyone has been waiting with bated breath for the answer to this one question, and you all know what it is, I have decided to answer it for you.

Here you go.

Spoiler


You're welcome!

Leela: Look at all these guys. Do you have any idea what the average length of their reigns was?
Fry: Uhh...... 80,000 years?
Leela: No, one week!
Fry: Damn! I knew you wouldn't have asked unless it was really high or really low.

I generally hold my tongue when it comes to world-building, because frankly it isn't where my talents lie, and -- thanks to my triple-threat of shaky knowledge of Magic lore, difficulty in visualizing worlds on a large scale, and general lack of helpful insight -- I don't usually have much to contribute. But I just want to say that I really like this setting. It's a different take on things, and it just strikes me as a place where interesting stories might happen -- and that's usually my one reliable metric for thinking about worlds.

Author:  KeeperofManyNames [ Tue Sep 16, 2014 10:03 am ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

It's nice that it has a lengthy history too because it means we can potentially use it as a location for stories back in the time of Vasilias and some of the other old walkers.

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Tue Sep 16, 2014 10:34 am ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

I kind of love this plane a lot.

One bone of contention though is the framing of this as a plane rocked by remarkably frequent revolutions. Considering that ages seem to last 1000+ years, I'd characterize this as a plane rocked by centuries of remarkable lack of revolution :P

That aside, this is a well sketched out plane with definite room for expansion.

Still really want to see the cards :P

Glad you like it! And yeah, I should probably set about rewriting history...

Or, you know, that first line...

Because I know that everyone has been waiting with bated breath for the answer to this one question, and you all know what it is, I have decided to answer it for you.

Here you go.

Spoiler


You're welcome!

Leela: Look at all these guys. Do you have any idea what the average length of their reigns was?
Fry: Uhh...... 80,000 years?
Leela: No, one week!
Fry: Damn! I knew you wouldn't have asked unless it was really high or really low.

I generally hold my tongue when it comes to world-building, because frankly it isn't where my talents lie, and -- thanks to my triple-threat of shaky knowledge of Magic lore, difficulty in visualizing worlds on a large scale, and general lack of helpful insight -- I don't usually have much to contribute. But I just want to say that I really like this setting. It's a different take on things, and it just strikes me as a place where interesting stories might happen -- and that's usually my one reliable metric for thinking about worlds.


That episode contains one of my very favorite Futurama moments. Let's see if I can do it from memory:

Fry wrote:
"It's just like the story of the Grasshopper and the Octopus. All summer long, the Grasshopper kept burying acorns for winter, while the Octopus mooched off his girlfriend and watched TV. Then winter came, and the Grasshopper died, and the Octopus ate all his acorns, and also he got a racecar! Is any of this getting through to you?"


Best. Fable. Ever.

It's nice that it has a lengthy history too because it means we can potentially use it as a location for stories back in the time of Vasilias and some of the other old walkers.

Yeah, that is the main reason I went with such a long time span. Also, dinosaurs. :paranoid:

Author:  KeeperofManyNames [ Tue Sep 16, 2014 2:05 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

Medieval Fairytale France Plus Dinosaurs should probably be the elevator pitch for this plane because it is a hell of an elevator pitch.

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Tue Sep 16, 2014 2:12 pm ]
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Medieval Fairytale France Plus Dinosaurs should probably be the elevator pitch for this plane because it is a hell of an elevator pitch.

I believe that was the exact original pitch for Casablanca...

A lot got changed during editing...

:paranoid:

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Thu Sep 18, 2014 10:35 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

I suddenly have the notion that there should be a harbor town in Foraine ironically named Port Manteau.

That is all.

Author:  KeeperofManyNames [ Thu Sep 18, 2014 11:32 pm ]
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Do it.

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Thu Sep 18, 2014 11:35 pm ]
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Do it.

It's the city that tore itself apart to bring people together.

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Wed Jan 07, 2015 7:20 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

Hello, again, all. I'm bumping this because I added a brief section on the city of Port Manteau and the Revelrevolt, fixed a couple of typos, and also because I'm thinking about putting this plane up for vote pretty soon, so I wanted people to see it, and remember it exists.

Any comments are welcome!

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Thu Jan 08, 2015 10:55 pm ]
Post subject:  Re: [Plane] Thorneau

I continue to love the carnival culture aspect of this world. As someone else pointed out (Ruwin? Yourself?), it has a very tactile, industrial-era kind of vibe to it, which I always like.

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