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The Myths of Siraus
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Author:  Barinellos [ Mon Sep 30, 2013 4:18 pm ]
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Dropping the works that have already been constructed here, in part for hopes that someone will finally volunteer for the final bit of it and we can at last close this project out.

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Author:  Barinellos [ Mon Sep 30, 2013 4:22 pm ]
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In need of editing.

Author:  Barinellos [ Mon Sep 30, 2013 4:24 pm ]
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Author:  Barinellos [ Mon Sep 30, 2013 4:26 pm ]
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And the last one we need is for the Throneforged, which is ironically the FIRST story in this collection...

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Thu Jan 16, 2014 9:40 am ]
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Aaaaaaaand, here comes myth number five:

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Author:  RuwinReborn [ Thu Jan 16, 2014 11:09 am ]
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I remember vaguely that we discussed what needed to be edited about Pulse - but I can't remember what it was for the life of me.

In fact, I only just now remembered that I wrote this at all. Oh lord. If I remember correctly, I was too tired to drive on my way home from Utah one night, but then when I pulled over, I couldn't sleep and ended up writing this on my phone.

Random trivia aside, I appear to have located the original document as well. Let me know what you'd like me to fix about it and I'll dig in.

Author:  Lord LunaEquie is me [ Thu Jan 16, 2014 12:05 pm ]
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Okay, I did not know these existed. I'll... add them to my to-do list. -_-

Author:  Barinellos [ Thu Jan 16, 2014 3:41 pm ]
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Okay, I did not know these existed. I'll... add them to my to-do list. -_-

I'm sneaky like that.

I remember vaguely that we discussed what needed to be edited about Pulse - but I can't remember what it was for the life of me.
I'd have to completely rereview it.

Author:  RuwinReborn [ Thu Jan 16, 2014 9:35 pm ]
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Righto. Shouldn't take me super long to spruce it up, depending on the depth of whatever problem pops up, so let me know and I'll get it done.

Author:  Barinellos [ Thu Jan 16, 2014 9:40 pm ]
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Righto. Shouldn't take me super long to spruce it up, depending on the depth of whatever problem pops up, so let me know and I'll get it done.

Honestly, if you want to take a stab at improving it before I review, that'd probably help us both. I know that I can hardly stand to leave an older piece alone and it might solve the problem we had earlier at the same time.

Author:  RuwinReborn [ Thu Jan 16, 2014 10:58 pm ]
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Alright, I can do that as well. Honestly, my current projects are starting to burn holes in my eyes, I've been staring at them so long, so it will be nice to have something new to look at.

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Thu Jan 16, 2014 11:42 pm ]
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Alright, I can do that as well. Honestly, my current projects are starting to burn holes in my eyes, I've been staring at them so long, so it will be nice to have something new to look at.


"My eyes! The goggles do nothing!"

Author:  RavenoftheBlack [ Fri Jan 17, 2014 12:01 am ]
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"Up and At Them!"

Author:  OrcishLibrarian [ Fri Jan 17, 2014 12:57 am ]
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"Better."

Author:  Barinellos [ Tue Feb 04, 2014 8:14 pm ]
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Hey Ruwin, any progress at having poked at it?

Author:  RuwinReborn [ Tue Feb 04, 2014 9:49 pm ]
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I read it over again, but I can't for the life of me remember what was wrong with it. T_T

Was it just grammatical stuff? I wasn't really on the look out for that, but maybe I should have been...

Author:  Barinellos [ Tue Feb 04, 2014 11:06 pm ]
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I read it over again, but I can't for the life of me remember what was wrong with it. T_T

Was it just grammatical stuff? I wasn't really on the look out for that, but maybe I should have been...

I'll reread it and see what I have to say. I do remember part of that was you that you named the primarch. Other than that, there are some typos and such.

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Author:  RuwinReborn [ Wed Feb 05, 2014 3:38 am ]
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Ok, I can work with that. I remember writing this on my ipod, actually. That was a pain in the uh. Neck.

Anyway, I'll clean it up and re-post it for review sometime soon! :D Uh... hopefully. T_T

Author:  Barinellos [ Thu Jul 31, 2014 4:07 pm ]
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So, I've actually been sitting on this for a... uh.... long time now. Ruwin did send it to me ages ago, but I tucked it away into my retention folder and it retained. However, since the retention folder tends to want to be used for storage, I sort of lost track of it, but there's no reason not to show everyone the tweaks Ruwin made, which officially makes this complete.

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