Having already done a couple of Jakkard-related microfics, I'm finding myself tempted by the notion of doing a few more in order to bring the total up to six, and them grouping them together as a six-shooter. (Hat tip to Raven, whose idea I may or may not be blatantly stealing lovingly appropriating.)
Which leads me to ask -- are there any characters or scenarios which people would like to see in a Jakkard microfic? I don't have anything specifically in mind at the moment, so any and all ideas are welcome.
I'd like to see something from that Nog what drove the train. (Sorry, I've been watching a TON of Monty Python the last few days.) But seriously, a slice-of-life moment from that guy would be pretty neat. Or how about that first guy who signed his rail property over to Jackie? What's he been up to? Or, of course, anything with Trotter trying to get Jackie to dance again...
Which leads me to ask -- are there any characters or scenarios which people would like to see in a Jakkard microfic? I don't have anything specifically in mind at the moment, so any and all ideas are welcome.
I have had an idea sort of floating around for a while. I've half started it a number of times, but never quite gotten to the point of bothering to follow through. It plays on the idea of the specter in magic, and more specifically The Ghost Riders (of the "in the sky" fame). I even managed to come up with a really good set piece for the drama to play out on, but I could never bother to climb into the nameless extra's head.
I have one or two others that I've sort of been toying with, but they haven't been as strong.
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At twilight's end, the shadow's crossed / a new world birthed, the elder lost. Yet on the morn we wake to find / that mem'ry left so far behind. To deafened ears we ask, unseen / "Which is life and which the dream?"
But it came into my mind, and then I felt like I had to get it written down, so that I could get it out of there.
Trigger warning for child abuse.
The Cure
The tiny bed was empty. The single rough, cotton sheet lay undisturbed. The pillow had not been slept upon.
Slowly, the Supreme Mother swept her gaze across the dark expanse of the room. A series of small, scared faces stared back at her from atop the long row of bunks. One-by-one, she locked eyes with each of them in turn. Searching. Sensing. Waiting.
Finally, one of the girls buckled under the pressure. She held up a tiny hand and furtively pointed at the floor beneath her bed. The Supreme Mother cast her eyes downward and saw just the toe of a child’s shoe sticking out from beneath the hanging corner of the bedsheet.
Silently, she motioned for the two Sisters who waited behind her, and the three of them moved across the night-black room to stand next to the indicated bed. Then the Supreme Mother reached down quick as she could, closed her hand tight around the thin ankle which she found connected to the protruding shoe, and pulled. Hard.
She could feel the child scrabbling to catch hold of a bedpost, clawing at the bare wooden floor with her tiny fingernails as she was dragged out from her hiding place. The child thrashed away beneath her grip, trying desperately to break free, to crawl back under the bed.
“No!” the child screamed, so loudly and fiercely that the Supreme Mother flinched, and many of the other girls hid beneath their bedsheets. “No! No!”
The child kept on screaming until the Supreme Mother nodded to one of the Sisters, who managed to force a folded-up washcloth into the child’s mouth. The child must have taken a bite at the Sister as she did, because the Sister jerked her hand away with a look of horror on her face, and stared wide-eyed down at blood which started to trickle from her finger. Meanwhile, the second Sister slipped the heavy cloth hood over the child’s head.
Between the hood and the gag, the child’s cries were more or less silenced.
The Supreme Mother put her hands beneath the child’s arms, lifted her up into the air, and carried her bodily out of the room, with the two Sisters falling into place behind her. She held the child out at arm’s length as they processed down the darkened hallway, so that the child couldn’t catch her with her flailing legs and kicking feet.
Heavens, but the child was strong. Much stronger than a girl her size ought to be.
Of course, we know where that strength comes from, the Supreme Mother thought to herself with a shiver.
At last they entered into the Sanctuary, where a third sister had readied the font beneath the altar. The Supreme Mother carried the squirming, kicking child over to the filled basin. The trio of Sisters fanned-out around her and began to sing the hymn, their voices rising as one to fill the small room with the song of the angels.
The Supreme Mother looked up at the altar, looked up at the Sign – two angled, golden staves, joined at the top so that they resembled the wings of an angel.
She looked at the Sign, and she prayed for strength.
Then she took hold of the child by the hood and forced the child’s head down into the font, until it was entirely beneath the water.
The child fought hard against her, lashing out with redoubled strength as she tried to grab hold of the basin, to pull her head above the surface. Water splashed up and over the side of the font, and great bubbles churned around the child’s thrashing head. But the Supreme Mother’s grip was firm as iron, and, even as they continued to sing, two of the Sisters moved next to her and grabbed hold of the child by the shoulders, holding her firmly in place.
“Angels of Mercy, we beseech you,” the Supreme Mother said, looking up at the Sign. “Just as we cleanse this wicked child’s body, so may you cleanse this wicked child’s soul.” Her voice rose above the singing of the Sisters, and the gasping of the child, so that it carried loud and clear up to the Heavens. “Wipe clean the stain of her vile birth, that she might know your tender Mercy.”
As she spoke, she could feel mana streaming out of her body and into the child’s, which only seemed to increase the urgency with which the child thrashed beneath her. It was as if the child’s very blood fought against the Light, as though her very being defied the Cleansing.
The Supreme Mother looked down at the struggling child whose hooded head she struggled to hold underwater, and, as she did, she found herself wondering – not for the first time – whether the real Mercy might not be to hold the cursed child there until her struggling ceased once and for all, until no more bubbles rose to the water’s surface.
Not the Cleansing, but the Cure. Would that not be the greater kindness?
But the Supreme Mother put that thought aside, as she always did. That choice was not hers to make. Only the angels could command it. And they had not spoken to her. They had not spoken to her for a long time.
As she felt her mana exhaust itself, the Supreme Mother pulled the child’s head up and out of the font. She and the Sisters released their grip, and the child collapsed onto the floor in a gasping, crying heap.
The hymn finished. The Supreme Mother looked once more to the Sign, and said one more silent prayer. Then she lifted the sodden hood up off of the child’s head.
She looked down at the child, and her heart fell as two blood-red eyes looked back up at her. She held the red-eyed child’s terrified gaze for just a second before she felt herself forced to look away.
She had always found it nigh impossible to look in the child’s eyes. She looked at those red eyes, and she saw corruption, and it pained her.
The Supreme Mother bowed her head. Then she motioned for two of the Sisters to carry the child back to the bunk room.
The third Sister moved to stand behind her, and placed a hand on the Supreme Mother’s shoulder.
“What will we do?” she said, the fear evident in her voice.
The Supreme Mother sighed.
“We will keep trying,” she said. “Every moon, we will perform the Cleansing. We will keep trying, and it will work. The angels will grant her their Mercy. I know this to be so.”
“And if not?” the Sister asked. “What then?”
The Supreme Mother sighed again, and again she found herself thinking about the Cure.
“Then we pray,” she said.
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"And remember, I'm pullin' for ya, 'cause we're all in this together." - Red Green
Yikes. That wasn't a pleasant read. Well done, though, and I think it's a good expansion of what we know of Jakkard's religious customs from other stuff. And... yeah, wow, this sure does provide some context for the final story in the series eh?
Yeah... I won't say "I'm glad you enjoyed it," or anything like that, because I sure as heck didn't enjoy it. I'm not sure "enjoy" is on the menu. But thanks for reading.
And, yeah, just another little peak behind that particular closed door. Did not make me a happy camper to see what was back there.
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EDIT: Heard Jackie's voice in my head a moment ago, and it cheered me back up.
"Living well is the best revenge," she told me. "But blowing that damnable place up was a close second."
Then she cracked me a smile and winked.
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"And remember, I'm pullin' for ya, 'cause we're all in this together." - Red Green
Since all the ones I've done so far have been downers (not intentional, but oh well...), here's something a little bit different.
Hat tip to Raven.
The Switch
Junior conductor Remmy Wacha had finished checking on the couplings and was already on his way back to the engine compartment when he felt the train lurch beneath him and start grinding to a halt. He only managed to stay on his feet by grabbing hold of a nearby door handle and hanging on for dear life, and he cringed as he heard the sound of crates toppling and splintering in the boxcars behind him.
Well, it could have been much worse, he reckoned after a moment for reflection. He could have still been in one of those boxcars. Those crates could have been tumbling onto him rather than each other.
As fast as his shaky legs would carry him, the noggle hurried his way up to the locomotive. When he got inside, he found the engineer – an ancient fox named Ayte, who had been driving iron on the rails for as long as there had been rails – slumped over the control panel of the mana engine, his hand hanging limply down just next to the dead man’s switch.
For a moment, Remmy just stared at the motionless driver, scarcely able to breathe. He was terrified that the old fox – whose health was known to be poor, and who increasingly relied upon the medicinal contents of his silver hip flask to make it through long stretches on the rails – had simply keeled over dead. So, when he heard a low, rumbling snore escape the prone fox’s lips a moment later, the sense of relief which the noggle felt was palpable.
The relief didn’t last long, though. They were already behind schedule, and Brax was not known for his tolerance when it came to missed deliveries.
Remmy slowly crept up next to Ayte and gave the passed-out fox a tentative poke in the ribs. When that didn’t draw any response beyond another long, staccato snore, Remmy escalated to a firmer poke, and then, finally, a shove.
At this last provocation, the fox spluttered, and his heavy-lidded eyes slowly peeled open, revealing bloodshot whites and dilated pupils. The noggle could smell the whiskey on the old driver’s breath.
“What’s all this, then?” the old fox slurred, trying to draw himself upright and nearly falling out of his seat in the process.
Remmy drew back slightly, his nerves causing his body to shake even more than it usually did.
“You fell asleep at the wheel, sir,” he ventured, figuring that “fell asleep” sounded less confrontational than “passed out.”
The drunk fox harrumphed, and then belched a liquor-laden belch which would have stunned a basilisk. “I did no such thing,” he insisted. “Just resting my eyes for a moment, that’s all.”
Remmy listened to how the old fox spoke, watched how he moved. There was no way that the engineer was going to be able to complete his run. Not without sobering up first, to say the least – and who knew how long that might take.
“That’s fine, Ayte,” Remmy said. He tried to help the fox up onto his feet, but it was unsteady going. “You could do with a rest. You deserve one.”
That seemed to strike a chord with the engineer, who nodded enthusiastically. “That’s right,” he said, grabbing the front of his pinstriped overalls with both paws. “I deserve a break.”
“That’s right,” Remmy repeated back. “Take a break, Ayte. You’ve been on this shift too long.” The noggle tried to steer the staggering fox back towards the rear of the engine compartment, where there was a wooden cot folded-up beneath an instrument panel. If he could just get the old fox into bed, then Ayte could sleep it off before they reached their destination.
He had just about gotten the driver to lie down when, suddenly, the old fox stiffened, and pointed back towards the mana engine with anxious, stabbing gestures.
“Wait a second,” he said, sounding just a smidge more lucid than before. “Who’s gonna drive the train?”
Remmy was silent for a moment. Then the nog sucked in a big breath, puffed out his chest a little bit, and tried to sound more confident than he felt.
“I’ll drive the train, Ayte,” he said.
The old fox guffawed. “You’ll drive the train?” The engineer snorted. “You can’t hardly sit in your chair without shaking yourself to pieces, and you’re gonna work the mana engine?”
“My hands don’t shake,” the conductor said. There was a trace of desperation in his voice, and he held his hands out for the fox to see, willing them to keep steady as he presented them for inspection.
The fox just snorted again. “You ever drive a train in your life, Shakes?”
“No,” the noggle said. “But I’ve been studying. I bought a manual for the engine from the company store, and I’ve been reading up at nights. And I always watch the engineers when I’m riding up front, watching what they do, and how they do it.”
The fox seemed to consider this for a long moment. Remmy tried to gauge the old engineer’s expression, but his glassy eyes were impossible to read.
Finally, the fox shook his head.
“No way,” he said. “Booker’d kill me.”
“Booker never has to know,” the noggle said, getting desperate. “Besides, what do you think he’ll do to us if we show up late? We’re already behind, and we’re still a ways away. I can make up the time. I can max this train out.” He sank down, practically to his knees, and he looked the old fox in the eyes.
“Please,” he said. “I know I can do it.”
A few seconds passed in silence, except for the old fox’s labored breathing. Then, finally, Ayte sank down onto the cot with a heavy, tired sigh. He crossed his arms over his chest, and he closed his eyes.
“Just blow the whistle when you’re going through New Progress,” the engineer said. “Damn baloth herders let ‘em just cross right over the tracks. You get us derailed hitting one of those lizards, and Booker’ll be the least of your worries.”
“You got it, Ayte,” the noggle said. He wasn’t able to contain his excitement, and he didn’t really try.
Then the conductor hurried back up to the front of the locomotive, and sat down in the engineer’s seat. He was about to start the mana engine, when something on the floor caught his eye – it was Ayte’s pinstriped engineer’s cap, lying at the foot of the seat, where it had fallen from the fox’s head when he’d passed out.
Remmy bent over and picked up the cap. He placed it on his head, and, in that moment, he felt – no, he knew – that the dream which he had dreamed in secret for longer than he could remember was going to come true.
He reached out and took the dead man’s switch with a hand which did not shake.
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"And remember, I'm pullin' for ya, 'cause we're all in this together." - Red Green
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I'm glad that you enjoyed it, Keeper! I like Shakes, too. Honestly, one of my favorites lines in all the Jackie stories is when Shakes introduces himself by saying: "My friends call me Shakes, on account of the shaking." It's a silly little line, but it's honest, and it makes me smile.
Ah, we've got such an interesting stable of characters and it's so cool to see them explored through these little moments...
I just wish we had more notable planar natives, but that plane that is nipping at Phostus's heels should fill that in, hopefully. I have a very clear idea for a character that is a planar native.
And she's a black aligned protagonist!
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At twilight's end, the shadow's crossed / a new world birthed, the elder lost. Yet on the morn we wake to find / that mem'ry left so far behind. To deafened ears we ask, unseen / "Which is life and which the dream?"
Okay, so, maybe not under 500 words. But under 700!
The Admission
“You did not just say what I think you said.”
Dazie scraped one hoof across the floor in a reflexive gesture of menace. She leaned down close to Presto’s face – which meant leaning down a long way – and gave a good, guttural snort. The air escaping from her flared nostrils sent the artificer’s stringy hair waving and momentarily fogged the outside of his goggles.
Presto swallowed involuntarily, but he repeated himself. “Since you got shot, you’ve lost a second on your draw,” he said. “And your aim isn’t what it used to be.”
Dazie snorted again. Almost without meaning to do it, she flexed her knuckles. The popping noise made Presto flinch.
“That’s what I thought you said,” Dazie rumbled. “Say it again, and it’ll be the last thing you ever say with teeth in your mouth.”
Presto held his ground. “You may not want to hear it,” he said. “But are you seriously going to tell me that it isn’t true?”
For a moment, Dazie just stood there, towering over the diminutive, seven-toed artiticer, glowering at him, and looking for all the world like she wanted to crush his head like an empty can. Then, slowly, she drew herself back. Her shoulders slouched, and she seemed to visibly deflate, as though all the air inside her were escaping through one of her still-healing bullet wounds.
And then the big minotaur did something which the artificer had never seen her do before: She fought back a sniffle, and a single, great tear rolled down the side of her muzzle.
“You think I don’t know it?” she said. “You think I don’t know what it means?” Her voice shrank, and it wavered a little as she spoke. “I’m out of the game, Presto.”
The minotaur was about to say more, but the artificer held a single finger up in the air.
“Not necessarily,” he said. He walked across his workshop to a long, low table, and, after a moment’s hesitation, Dazie followed behind. On the table’s surface, the outline of some large object was visible beneath an oil-spattered dropcloth.
“Let’s change the game, shall we?” Presto said, and he pulled away the cloth to reveal the single biggest, baddest-looking boomstick that the minotaur had seen in her life.
It was less of a gun, and more of a hand-held cannon. The short barrel opened to nearly the width of a man’s head, and powerful runes were etched around both the barrel and the stock.
Dazie’s jaw hung open in a look of stunned silence as she reached down and picked up the massive shotgun. She held it up in front of her, getting a feel for its weight and balance.
“You designed the grip to fit me?” she said, a kind of hushed awe in her voice.
Presto nodded. “It’s properly balanced for one-handed firing, but, when that thing goes off, it’s going to buck like a baloth in heat. So I’d recommend firing from the hip, even for someone as strong as you.”
Dazie shifted her posture, holding the gun down against her hip, putting one hoof slightly forward, and flexing her knees.
“How many shots?” she asked.
“Holds ten shells,” Presto said. “Lever action, load through the opening on the side. The shells have sangrite mixed in with the pellets – I can show you how to make them.”
Dazie mimicked pulling the trigger, then mimicked the sound of an explosion. “So all I have to do is hit the broad side of a barn,” she said.
“Do that, and there won’t be a barn there anymore,” Presto said.
Dazie turned the gun over one more time in her hands, then paused. She hadn’t noticed it at first, but her name was engraved on the side of the stock.
Then she did something else which the artificer had never seen her do: She wrapped the barefoot human in a hug which nearly crushed his ribcage.
“Presto, you’re not half bad,” she said.
It took some doing, but the artificer managed to wheeze a reply.
“Go do some damage,” he said.
EDIT: Belated hat tip to Ruwin, for putting this image in my mind some time ago.
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"And remember, I'm pullin' for ya, 'cause we're all in this together." - Red Green
Lucy’s black eyes glinted in the darkness as she slid the small, black-lacquered box out from beneath her bed, just as she did each night when the darkness was at its peak. She felt her heartbeat quicken as she lifted the box’s hinged top and looked down at the two objects which lay inside.
She reached inside and picked up the first object. It was a knife – long, and thin, with a razor’s edge and a finely-balanced grip. There was just enough light in the room for her to see her own face reflected in the blade as she held it up and tested the sharpness of its point with the tip of her clawed finger.
She felt the familiar kiss of the metal, felt a warm drop of blood bubble up through the surface of her pale skin, and she smiled.
She put the knife back into the box, and she took out the second item. It was a train ticket – one-way, second-class, with a spattering of dried blood along its lower edge. She flipped the ticket over, and read the handwritten note on the back:
“Talk to the station master. Ask for Red.”
She held the ticket in her hands for a moment, as dark, delightful thoughts filled her mind. She drew her tongue across her bloodless lips, feeling the sharp edges of her pointed teeth as she did.
Then she put the ticket back into the box next to the knife.
Not today, she thought to herself.
Gently, she closed the box’s lid, and slipped it back beneath her bed.
But someday?
In the darkness, Lucy grinned.
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I'll group all the stories down here. I'm actually pretty excited by how these turned out. Not sure how well they cohere together as a group, but individually I like the variety.
A Jakkard Six-Shooter
The Vow
Tears rolled down both sisters’s pale cheeks as the twins cried without sound.
For minutes, they simply knelt together on the blood-slicked floor, looking at each other, weeping wordlessly. Each held the other’s shaking hands.
Each was the mirror image of the other, except in one regard. A line of small punctures crossed one twin’s brow just below her hairline. The wounds were days old, but they still bled. Thin, red rivulets of blood stood out starkly against the woman’s pale skin.
The unharmed twin could stand it no longer. She let go of one of her sister’s hands. She gathered up the edge of her robe’s long sleeve and, reaching up to her sister’s face, gently mopped away the blood which marred the image of her Other Self.
The bleeding twin tried to remain still, but found it too painful. So she reached across with her own free hand and touched her sister’s face. There was no blood to clean on her sister’s brow. Instead, she ran the tips of her fingers across her sister’s cool, smooth skin, so that the movement of her arm mirrored that of her twin’s.
The wounds on her head hurt, but that pain was not the pain that made her or her Other Self weep.
I am sorry, the unharmed twin thought.
We are sorry, the bleeding twin corrected.
Both sisters bowed their heads slightly. Then they both looked back up. Their four blue eyes met, and, in that moment, the vow was made.
We will never be alone again, they thought.
Their tears stopped. Their eyes turned cold.
We will die first.
The Drop
Sax had been to enough hangings to know that most men closed their eyes in the second before the lever was pulled.
As he bent his head forward so that the Judge could slip the noose over his neck, Sax resolved not to. He would hold his head high, and he would keep his eyes open, so that the gathered crowd would see that he was not afraid, that he was not ashamed, that he felt no remorse.
His moment of shame and remorse had come the day before, when his eyes had drifted upward from Jane’s body to rest on the white fox. He remembered the shocked, astonished expression on the fox’s face. Sax too had felt shock at first, but his shock had quickly been replaced by other emotions. He had always thought of the fox as a rival, as one of the perpetrators of his misery. But, in that moment, he saw the fox as a victim, too – another soul trapped in the nightmare that was Jane. And he felt a deep sense of shame that the white fox had done what he himself had for so long contemplated doing.
At first, it had been difficult to take the knife, but eventually the white fox had loosened his grip.
Now, as he swept his eyes over the crowd which had gathered to watch him hang, Sax caught a glimpse of the white fox among the assembled faces. His gaze did not linger long, but, for just a second, he caught the white fox’s eyes, and a moment of recognition passed between them. Sax was not sure that all was forgiven, but he felt that a mutual understanding had been established, and that a truce had been agreed.
It was a truce which would not have to last long.
The rope was tight and scratchy around his neck. Sax wondered what the moment itself would be like – if it would hurt, or if he would even be cognizant of what was happening.
On his way to the gallows, a deputy had surreptitiously offered him a flask. But, after a long moment of consideration, Sax had declined it. For once in his life, he would face his troubles sober.
The sun was hot on his face. The crowd was buzzing with nervous anticipation. The Judge had finished speaking. All that was left was the drop.
Sax kept his eyes open, and his head held high.
He heard the sound of the lever being pulled, and was surprised by how peaceful he felt.
He didn’t even blink.
The Cure
The tiny bed was empty. The single rough, cotton sheet lay undisturbed. The pillow had not been slept upon.
Slowly, the Supreme Mother swept her gaze across the dark expanse of the room. A series of small, scared faces stared back at her from atop the long row of bunks. One-by-one, she locked eyes with each of them in turn. Searching. Sensing. Waiting.
Finally, one of the girls buckled under the pressure. She held up a tiny hand and furtively pointed at the floor beneath her bed. The Supreme Mother cast her eyes downward and saw just the toe of a child’s shoe sticking out from beneath the hanging corner of the bedsheet.
Silently, she motioned for the two Sisters who waited behind her, and the three of them moved across the night-black room to stand next to the indicated bed. Then the Supreme Mother reached down quick as she could, closed her hand tight around the thin ankle which she found connected to the protruding shoe, and pulled. Hard.
She could feel the child scrabbling to catch hold of a bedpost, clawing at the bare wooden floor with her tiny fingernails as she was dragged out from her hiding place. The child thrashed away beneath her grip, trying desperately to break free, to crawl back under the bed.
“No!” the child screamed, so loudly and fiercely that the Supreme Mother flinched, and many of the other girls hid beneath their bedsheets. “No! No!”
The child kept on screaming until the Supreme Mother nodded to one of the Sisters, who managed to force a folded-up washcloth into the child’s mouth. The child must have taken a bite at the Sister as she did, because the Sister jerked her hand away with a look of horror on her face, and stared wide-eyed down at blood which started to trickle from her finger. Meanwhile, the second Sister slipped the heavy cloth hood over the child’s head.
Between the hood and the gag, the child’s cries were more or less silenced.
The Supreme Mother put her hands beneath the child’s arms, lifted her up into the air, and carried her bodily out of the room, with the two Sisters falling into place behind her. She held the child out at arm’s length as they processed down the darkened hallway, so that the child couldn’t catch her with her flailing legs and kicking feet.
Heavens, but the child was strong. Much stronger than a girl her size ought to be.
Of course, we know where that strength comes from, the Supreme Mother thought to herself with a shiver.
At last they entered into the Sanctuary, where a third sister had readied the font beneath the altar. The Supreme Mother carried the squirming, kicking child over to the filled basin. The trio of Sisters fanned-out around her and began to sing the hymn, their voices rising as one to fill the small room with the song of the angels.
The Supreme Mother looked up at the altar, looked up at the Sign – two angled, golden staves, joined at the top so that they resembled the wings of an angel.
She looked at the Sign, and she prayed for strength.
Then she took hold of the child by the hood and forced the child’s head down into the font, until it was entirely beneath the water.
The child fought hard against her, lashing out with redoubled strength as she tried to grab hold of the basin, to pull her head above the surface. Water splashed up and over the side of the font, and great bubbles churned around the child’s thrashing head. But the Supreme Mother’s grip was firm as iron, and, even as they continued to sing, two of the Sisters moved next to her and grabbed hold of the child by the shoulders, holding her firmly in place.
“Angels of Mercy, we beseech you,” the Supreme Mother said, looking up at the Sign. “Just as we cleanse this wicked child’s body, so may you cleanse this wicked child’s soul.” Her voice rose above the singing of the Sisters, and the gasping of the child, so that it carried loud and clear up to the Heavens. “Wipe clean the stain of her vile birth, that she might know your tender Mercy.”
As she spoke, she could feel mana streaming out of her body and into the child’s, which only seemed to increase the urgency with which the child thrashed beneath her. It was as if the child’s very blood fought against the Light, as though her very being defied the Cleansing.
The Supreme Mother looked down at the struggling child whose hooded head she struggled to hold underwater, and, as she did, she found herself wondering – not for the first time – whether the real Mercy might not be to hold the cursed child there until her struggling ceased once and for all, until no more bubbles rose to the water’s surface.
Not the Cleansing, but the Cure. Would that not be the greater kindness?
But the Supreme Mother put that thought aside, as she always did. That choice was not hers to make. Only the angels could command it. And they had not spoken to her. They had not spoken to her for a long time.
As she felt her mana exhaust itself, the Supreme Mother pulled the child’s head up and out of the font. She and the Sisters released their grip, and the child collapsed onto the floor in a gasping, crying heap.
The hymn finished. The Supreme Mother looked once more to the Sign, and said one more silent prayer. Then she lifted the sodden hood up off of the child’s head.
She looked down at the child, and her heart fell as two blood-red eyes looked back up at her. She held the red-eyed child’s terrified gaze for just a second before she felt herself forced to look away.
She had always found it nigh impossible to look in the child’s eyes. She looked at those red eyes, and she saw corruption, and it pained her.
The Supreme Mother bowed her head. Then she motioned for two of the Sisters to carry the child back to the bunk room.
The third Sister moved to stand behind her, and placed a hand on the Supreme Mother’s shoulder.
“What will we do?” she said, the fear evident in her voice.
The Supreme Mother sighed.
“We will keep trying,” she said. “Every moon, we will perform the Cleansing. We will keep trying, and it will work. The angels will grant her their Mercy. I know this to be so.”
“And if not?” the Sister asked. “What then?”
The Supreme Mother sighed again, and again she found herself thinking about the Cure.
“Then we pray,” she said.
The Switch
Junior conductor Remmy Wacha had finished checking on the couplings and was already on his way back to the engine compartment when he felt the train lurch beneath him and start grinding to a halt. He only managed to stay on his feet by grabbing hold of a nearby door handle and hanging on for dear life, and he cringed as he heard the sound of crates toppling and splintering in the boxcars behind him.
Well, it could have been much worse, he reckoned after a moment for reflection. He could have still been in one of those boxcars. Those crates could have been tumbling onto him rather than each other.
As fast as his shaky legs would carry him, the noggle hurried his way up to the locomotive. When he got inside, he found the engineer – an ancient fox named Ayte, who had been driving iron on the rails for as long as there had been rails – slumped over the control panel of the mana engine, his hand hanging limply down just next to the dead man’s switch.
For a moment, Remmy just stared at the motionless driver, scarcely able to breathe. He was terrified that the old fox – whose health was known to be poor, and who increasingly relied upon the medicinal contents of his silver hip flask to make it through long stretches on the rails – had simply keeled over dead. So, when he heard a low, rumbling snore escape the prone fox’s lips a moment later, the sense of relief which the noggle felt was palpable.
The relief didn’t last long, though. They were already behind schedule, and Brax was not known for his tolerance when it came to missed deliveries.
Remmy slowly crept up next to Ayte and gave the passed-out fox a tentative poke in the ribs. When that didn’t draw any response beyond another long, staccato snore, Remmy escalated to a firmer poke, and then, finally, a shove.
At this last provocation, the fox spluttered, and his heavy-lidded eyes slowly peeled open, revealing bloodshot whites and dilated pupils. The noggle could smell the whiskey on the old driver’s breath.
“What’s all this, then?” the old fox slurred, trying to draw himself upright and nearly falling out of his seat in the process.
Remmy drew back slightly, his nerves causing his body to shake even more than it usually did.
“You fell asleep at the wheel, sir,” he ventured, figuring that “fell asleep” sounded less confrontational than “passed out.”
The drunk fox harrumphed, and then belched a liquor-laden belch which would have stunned a basilisk. “I did no such thing,” he insisted. “Just resting my eyes for a moment, that’s all.”
Remmy listened to how the old fox spoke, watched how he moved. There was no way that the engineer was going to be able to complete his run. Not without sobering up first, to say the least – and who knew how long that might take.
“That’s fine, Ayte,” Remmy said. He tried to help the fox up onto his feet, but it was unsteady going. “You could do with a rest. You deserve one.”
That seemed to strike a chord with the engineer, who nodded enthusiastically. “That’s right,” he said, grabbing the front of his pinstriped overalls with both paws. “I deserve a break.”
“That’s right,” Remmy repeated back. “Take a break, Ayte. You’ve been on this shift too long.” The noggle tried to steer the staggering fox back towards the rear of the engine compartment, where there was a wooden cot folded-up beneath an instrument panel. If he could just get the old fox into bed, then Ayte could sleep it off before they reached their destination.
He had just about gotten the driver to lie down when, suddenly, the old fox stiffened, and pointed back towards the mana engine with anxious, stabbing gestures.
“Wait a second,” he said, sounding just a smidge more lucid than before. “Who’s gonna drive the train?”
Remmy was silent for a moment. Then the nog sucked in a big breath, puffed out his chest a little bit, and tried to sound more confident than he felt.
“I’ll drive the train, Ayte,” he said.
The old fox guffawed. “You’ll drive the train?” The engineer snorted. “You can’t hardly sit in your chair without shaking yourself to pieces, and you’re gonna work the mana engine?”
“My hands don’t shake,” the conductor said. There was a trace of desperation in his voice, and he held his hands out for the fox to see, willing them to keep steady as he presented them for inspection.
The fox just snorted again. “You ever drive a train in your life, Shakes?”
“No,” the noggle said. “But I’ve been studying. I bought a manual for the engine from the company store, and I’ve been reading up at nights. And I always watch the engineers when I’m riding up front, watching what they do, and how they do it.”
The fox seemed to consider this for a long moment. Remmy tried to gauge the old engineer’s expression, but his glassy eyes were impossible to read.
Finally, the fox shook his head.
“No way,” he said. “Booker’d kill me.”
“Booker never has to know,” the noggle said, getting desperate. “Besides, what do you think he’ll do to us if we show up late? We’re already behind, and we’re still a ways away. I can make up the time. I can max this train out.” He sank down, practically to his knees, and he looked the old fox in the eyes.
“Please,” he said. “I know I can do it.”
A few seconds passed in silence, except for the old fox’s labored breathing. Then, finally, Ayte sank down onto the cot with a heavy, tired sigh. He crossed his arms over his chest, and he closed his eyes.
“Just blow the whistle when you’re going through New Progress,” the engineer said. “Damn baloth herders let ‘em just cross right over the tracks. You get us derailed hitting one of those lizards, and Booker’ll be the least of your worries.”
“You got it, Ayte,” the noggle said. He wasn’t able to contain his excitement, and he didn’t really try.
Then the conductor hurried back up to the front of the locomotive, and sat down in the engineer’s seat. He was about to start the mana engine, when something on the floor caught his eye – it was Ayte’s pinstriped engineer’s cap, lying at the foot of the seat, where it had fallen from the fox’s head when he’d passed out.
Remmy bent over and picked up the cap. He placed it on his head, and, in that moment, he felt – no, he knew – that the dream which he had dreamed in secret for longer than he could remember was going to come true.
He reached out and took the dead man’s switch with a hand which did not shake.
The Admission
“You did not just say what I think you said.”
Dazie scraped one hoof across the floor in a reflexive gesture of menace. She leaned down close to Presto’s face – which meant leaning down a long way – and gave a good, guttural snort. The air escaping from her flared nostrils sent the artificer’s stringy hair waving and momentarily fogged the outside of his goggles.
Presto swallowed involuntarily, but he repeated himself. “Since you got shot, you’ve lost a second on your draw,” he said. “And your aim isn’t what it used to be.”
Dazie snorted again. Almost without meaning to do it, she flexed her knuckles. The popping noise made Presto flinch.
“That’s what I thought you said,” Dazie rumbled. “Say it again, and it’ll be the last thing you ever say with teeth in your mouth.”
Presto held his ground. “You may not want to hear it,” he said. “But are you seriously going to tell me that it isn’t true?”
For a moment, Dazie just stood there, towering over the diminutive, seven-toed artiticer, glowering at him, and looking for all the world like she wanted to crush his head like an empty can. Then, slowly, she drew herself back. Her shoulders slouched, and she seemed to visibly deflate, as though all the air inside her were escaping through one of her still-healing bullet wounds.
And then the big minotaur did something which the artificer had never seen her do before: She fought back a sniffle, and a single, great tear rolled down the side of her muzzle.
“You think I don’t know it?” she said. “You think I don’t know what it means?” Her voice shrank, and it wavered a little as she spoke. “I’m out of the game, Presto.”
The minotaur was about to say more, but the artificer held a single finger up in the air.
“Not necessarily,” he said. He walked across his workshop to a long, low table, and, after a moment’s hesitation, Dazie followed behind. On the table’s surface, the outline of some large object was visible beneath an oil-spattered dropcloth.
“Let’s change the game, shall we?” Presto said, and he pulled away the cloth to reveal the single biggest, baddest-looking boomstick that the minotaur had seen in her life.
It was less of a gun, and more of a hand-held cannon. The short barrel opened to nearly the width of a man’s head, and powerful runes were etched around both the barrel and the stock.
Dazie’s jaw hung open in a look of stunned silence as she reached down and picked up the massive shotgun. She held it up in front of her, getting a feel for its weight and balance.
“You designed the grip to fit me?” she said, a kind of hushed awe in her voice.
Presto nodded. “It’s properly balanced for one-handed firing, but, when that thing goes off, it’s going to buck like a baloth in heat. So I’d recommend firing from the hip, even for someone as strong as you.”
Dazie shifted her posture, holding the gun down against her hip, putting one hoof slightly forward, and flexing her knees.
“How many shots?” she asked.
“Holds ten shells,” Presto said. “Lever action, load through the opening on the side. The shells have sangrite mixed in with the pellets – I can show you how to make them.”
Dazie mimicked pulling the trigger, then mimicked the sound of an explosion. “So all I have to do is hit the broad side of a barn,” she said.
“Do that, and there won’t be a barn there anymore,” Presto said.
Dazie turned the gun over one more time in her hands, then paused. She hadn’t noticed it at first, but her name was engraved on the side of the stock.
Then she did something else which the artificer had never seen her do: She wrapped the barefoot human in a hug which nearly crushed his ribcage.
“Presto, you’re not half bad,” she said.
It took some doing, but the artificer managed to wheeze a reply.
“Go do some damage,” he said.
The Point
Lucy’s black eyes glinted in the darkness as she slid the small, black-lacquered box out from beneath her bed, just as she did each night when the darkness was at its peak. She felt her heartbeat quicken as she lifted the box’s hinged top and looked down at the two objects which lay inside.
She reached inside and picked up the first object. It was a knife – long, and thin, with a razor’s edge and a finely-balanced grip. There was just enough light in the room for her to see her own face reflected in the blade as she held it up and tested the sharpness of its point with the tip of her clawed finger.
She felt the familiar kiss of the metal, felt a warm drop of blood bubble up through the surface of her pale skin, and she smiled.
She put the knife back into the box, and she took out the second item. It was a train ticket – one-way, second-class, with a spattering of dried blood along its lower edge. She flipped the ticket over, and read the handwritten note on the back:
“Talk to the station master. Ask for Red.”
She held the ticket in her hands for a moment, as dark, delightful thoughts filled her mind. She drew her tongue across her bloodless lips, feeling the sharp edges of her pointed teeth as she did.
Then she put the ticket back into the box next to the knife.
Not today, she thought to herself.
Gently, she closed the box’s lid, and slipped it back beneath her bed.
But someday?
In the darkness, Lucy grinned.
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I like this little grouping. It does a lot to flesh out the minor characters, and I love anything we see of Jackie's gang basically. I could read about them all day.
I like this little grouping. It does a lot to flesh out the minor characters, and I love anything we see of Jackie's gang basically. I could read about them all day.
Thanks, Keeper. Hearing that puts a big, goofy smile on my face.
(Really, all of my smiles are goofy, I guess. Some of them are just bigger and/or goofier than others.)
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The rewrite of The King's Gambit is coming... Eventually. Last night, I was playing around with the generator and got a prompt about Vasilias drunkenly planeswalking to Cyrea. I laughed, amused, and then clicked to generate another prompt. A couple minutes later, I realized that that could actually work. And then this happened:
Mortality
There was an old saying in Cyrea: Those who can’t think, steal. Being a hired thief was almost as financially rewarding as being a biomancer or experimentist.
Being a guard, on the other hand, was not.
Officially, theft was illegal and, if caught, violators could face lengthy prison sentences or even be executed. Unofficially, any crime would go away for the right price. Especially if that price was some ancient artifact or coveted spell that could benefit the governing body in question. As a result, facilities had to hire their own private security. It was a thankless job with little pay, but it was necessary for the preservation of knowledge, and Raxin Maaz was not ashamed of it.
Raxin was patrolling the outer walls of the Mt. Corvintas Facility, as he did every night, when he caught sight of the ebony-cloaked figure.
Raxin’s first instinct was to attack on sight, but something stopped him. The stranger’s movements were off, somehow, and he didn’t actually appear to be moving toward the facility. Mostly, he just looked lost.
“Halt!” Raxin called, holding up a single crab-like hand to gesture for the stranger to stop. The cloaked figure didn’t move, with the exception of swaying side to side, seemingly controlled by some invisible tune that only he could hear. Raxin approached cautiously, all the while connecting with his mana bonds in case this turned ugly.
“I’m dying.” The man said in little more than a whisper. Had it not been for Raxin’s enhanced hearing, he might have missed it entirely.
“Sir, do you need me to escort you to a medical facility?” Raxin asked, now reasonably confident that this man was no thief. The stranger let out a deep laugh in response, nearly toppling over.
“My sickness is one that even your doctors can’t cure.” The stranger laughed some more at some private joke, continuing for about half a minute before it subsided. “It’s life.”
“You’re aging.” Raxin stated, more to himself than to the stranger. Raxin nodded in understanding. “Have you considered Cerebral Relocation?”
Again, the stranger laughed. This time even deeper and harder than before.
“You mean putting my brain in a jar?” The laughter continued. As the hooded stranger laughed this time, a glass object in his hand caught the silvery glow of the moon.
“Sir, are you drunk?” Raxin inquired, only to be met with laughing.
Abruptly, the stranger turned his head and looked off into the night sky.
“They need me.” He said softly, almost sadly. He sighed, then turned back to Raxin. “You need me.” He paused contemplatively. “You’ve destroyed yourselves so many times. All in the name of your precious science. You allow yourselves to be ruled by blind, chaotic advancement. And for what?” The stranger was practically shouting, and Raxin was becoming slightly frightened. “So you can do it all over again? And I, who attempts to save worlds like your own, to bring peace and order to them, am branded a tyrant?”
“They have no idea how I’ve protected them, the sacrifices I’ve made.” The stranger trailed off, averting his gaze to the ground. “But someone has to do it. No one else will.”
Finally, the man outstretched a single, gold-nailed hand, placing it on Raxin’s shoulder. Raxin flinched back in response to the gesture, but the man took no notice. “Thank you, my friend.” As he spoke the words, the man vanished into nothingness. A fraction of a second later, a glass bottle hit the ground, shattering into pieces, and a liquid spilled out upon the ground, permeating the air with the smell of alcohol.
Raxin just stood there, not quite knowing what just happened.
The next morning, Raxin would file a report of the incident, and somewhere, in the infinite universes, a king would recover from a hangover, and set out to find a way to restore his lost immortality.
And now I see that I have a lot to catch up on here.
So, I've been grading papers all day, and decided to take a quick, 20 minute break to write something. This is what happened as a direct result:
Writer’s Block
Raiker Venn sat at one of his favorite writer’s desks, one situated under a dark canopy in the courtyard of his private villa in the south of Foraine, the only land worth visiting on Thorneau, as far as he was concerned. The courtyard was mostly dark, lit only by a single line of torches along the wall and the candles illuminating the desk. The weather was pleasant, his seat was comfortable, and his Queen’s Vintage Chateau Lenaire was transcendent. Life should have been fantastic.
Except, of course, for Raiker Venn’s writer’s block.
It was an exceedingly frustrating thing. It was simply a matter of time, Raiker knew, but he was an impatient man when it came to writing. He wanted to get started on his newest poem, but his damned writers block was making it impossible. Any moment now, he told himself, yet still he waited, staring at an empty paper and a dry quill. Raiker Venn downed another glass of the profoundly expensive wine and cursed at his writer’s block yet again.
Finally, after an excruciating wait, Raiker heard the sound, and knew his time had finally come. He looked to his left, where the terrified face of Pierrene looked up at him, securely locked in Raiker’s writer’s block. Pierrene had claimed, publicly even, that he was a greater writer than Raiker, and so Raiker had paid him an unexpected social visit to have a little chat about it. Now, after an impressive and willful effort, Pierrene could no longer hold the tripwire in his teeth, and he had let it go. The writer’s block exaggerated mechanisms were working now, giving the prideful poet time to think about his fate.
Raiker Venn smiled. “You claim to be the better poet? You believe that talent is a race, my friend, and that you are ahead?” Finally, the last of the mechanisms clicked, and the massive guillotine descended in a blink of an eye, crashing down on Pierrene’s neck, sending a splatter of blood in every direction. “Perhaps you are right.” Raiker made sure none of the blood landed on him, although he allowed a few drops on his paper. With a smile, Raiker dipped his quill into the blood and began his newest poem.
“The Tragic Poet,” he said aloud. “By Raiker Venn.”
This was a fun one. There's something about the line "Have you considered Cerebral Relocation?" that put me perfectly in mind of a prescription drug commercial: "Common side effects of Cerebral Relocation include headache, insomnia, and jar algae."
Thanks for this one, Moonbeam!
@ Writer's Block
Raiker stories always have this jigsaw puzzle quality to them -- I know how they're going to end up, and the question is just how they're going to get there. Unsurprisingly, the same vibe is at play, here. And, as usual, it works.
Somehow, I can't envision Raiker cleaning the blood off of his stuff. I wonder if he has people for that, or uses Magic scrubbing?
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@The Switch I liked this one. It is nice to see one that ends on a good note, given how many downers there are. I'm also a little curious whether he became a driver for real later on or if this was the day he encountered Jackie.
@The Admission Cool. With all these microfics with Jackie's gang, I'm really starting to believe they could hold their own full stories, even without Jackie there.
@The Point SHE KNOWS! I guess Red's school for the next generation of criminals isn't going to last very long.
@Writer's Block I had to read this twice to get what was happening. A third time to get the pun at the end. Well done.
@The Switch I liked this one. It is nice to see one that ends on a good note, given how many downers there are. I'm also a little curious whether he became a driver for real later on or if this was the day he encountered Jackie.
Yeah, this was a fun one to do. Shakes does in fact get himself promoted to engineer after this; roughly speaking, this story takes place about six years before he meets Jackie, since he tells her that's how long he has been driving trains for Brax when she offers him a change of employment. So, a glimpse of the younger Shakes, if you will.
@The Admission Cool. With all these microfics with Jackie's gang, I'm really starting to believe they could hold their own full stories, even without Jackie there.
That was a big part of the fun for me in doing these micro stories. Up until now, the only member of Jackie's gang who we've ever had a POV experience with was Mister Sharps. So it was an interesting experience to slip into the shoes of some of the other troublemakers for a while, and see what the world looked like from their perspectives. In this case, it was very strange to see Dazie have something resembling a tender moment, but it turned out to nice to see her and Presto bury the hatchet -- at least for now.
I hope that we've seen just enough from these characters now that people could revisit them if they wanted to, and have at least some information to go off of, but that there's enough blank canvas left for us to still discover new things about them.
@The Point SHE KNOWS! I guess Red's school for the next generation of criminals isn't going to last very long.
She does know.
I think it was inevitable. There are too many moving pieces -- to many human pieces -- involved in Red's operation for it to remain secret forever. And we know that Lucy is very talented at finding things out when she wants to.
That being said, I'm not sure I'd jump to the same conclusion. This is certainly an ominous development, if you care about Jackie's peaceful retirement. But I do think there is a reason that Lucy doesn't just hop on the next train east, and it's not just a question of letting the sword hang for a little while. I think that attacking Jackie DeCoeur on her home turf is something that I, for one, would be very, very reticent to do. Jackie is a planner, and she's smart. She knows that there are people out there who want to hurt her, and she'll have taken steps to protect herself. For starters, I would assume that Hush-Hush have done some extensive work on and around the ranch, and the husher twins are very good at what they do. I'm not sure what protections or traps they would have laid down, and I would not want to find out by springing one.
We've seen what Lucy can do when she sets her mind to hurting or killing someone, and she frightens the bejeezus out of me. But Jackie can be very lethal, too. Especially when the people she cares about are being threatened. And I can get a glimpse in my mind of what Jackie would be like if Lucy or anyone else was threatening to hurt Trotter or any of the kids on that ranch, and the flashes I see of Jackie frighten the bejeezus out of me, too. I see red eyes moving through the shadows, I see a muzzle flash coming from where you least expect it, and I see someone getting very, very dead.
I don't claim to know who that someone would be. As Jackie herself would say, once the bullets start flying, anything can happen. But I think that very ambiguity would make even a black-eyed demon bent on revenge think a second thought.
Anyway, I myself don't have any plan to ever fire this particular Chekhov's gun. But I get a little tingle of excitement just knowing that it's up there on the mantle.
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