This is probably going to sound much harsher than I mean it (so please don't read too much into this) but I really have to disagree with you here. The way a story is presented is often as important as the story itself. Occasionally more so. Honestly, I think if you didn't want the framing device to have significance, then you shouldn't have used it. Whether you intended it or not, there is a strong subtext here that speaks volumes about an established M:EM character (Raleris) and your newly accepted one (Maral) that, as much as I do like the Hands, is more interesting than the object you are introducing. So I think you either need to accept the fact that you're telling more of a story than you meant to, or alter it so that you're not. That's my take anyway.
Honestly, I have no problem with people reading into it, the biggest issue is that nobody considered this was an
omniscient collection and that it HAD to be one or the other. I hope with the coin and the fact that we have TWO excerpts/addendums, it makes it more clear that we're getting the absolute full view rather than an actual physical document. I chose the framing device to present some characterization, it was meant, but I had lost patience since nobody considered that were were seeing more than either of the parties involved.
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The Coin: What I find interesting here is that we still know almost nothing about the coin. Did Tyson make it? Did he find it? Does it, like the Hands before them, have some sort of agency or agenda, and moved into a position to be given a body? We don't know. Even though it's the coin that is the vaulted artifact, the story itself was about Eirene and Tyson. So really, there's still a lot that no one seems to know about the object. Also, I would be remiss to not point out more apparent angst between Raleris and Maral coming through with Raleris's personal notes.
Well, similar to how Maral expressed concern over Raleris's curiosity, we have a bit of a turnaround where more emotions are playing through the other way.
As to the coin, akin to Xantcha's heartstone, it might have been something before, but it is definitely a new thing now.
But yes, I left the coin's provenance purposefully vague. The fact that Maral, who is a pretty skilled metallurgist, can't identify what metal it is plays into that even further.
It's interesting, too, that beyond the description of "coin" we don't have a clear description of what the object looks like. It's a very particular choice of words with particular connotations, and it's interesting that one of the two characters now knows why that word was chosen while the other does not.
I like this structure a lot.
Part of that was on purpose, but part of it was also just that I couldn't find a place to put a description where it would feel natural.