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PostPosted: Fri Dec 18, 2015 5:08 pm 
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Cool poem, Raven! Interestingly, it works even if stopped nine stanzas short with an ellipsis, with all the implication of the case.. but the last four stanzas depict nicely his grim merriness (if that makes sense...)

The only things that makes me go "meh" are the two stanzas describing his annoyance (starting from "he tossed" to "he got up to go"); I feel like they are a bit superfluous, and when one understands who is the 'grinch' there's no real need for an explanation... I dunno, they just felt slightly unnecessary, while tasty like the other verses are.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 25, 2016 6:42 pm 
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Barinellos wrote:
Saigo cares pretty deeply about nature, but he's pretty much the only one in my roster that does. He particularly hates artifice and the destruction of lands.


Taking inspiration from this observation:

"Write a story where Nodeshi Saigo meets Daneera in the midst of an unfortunately timed Stone Rain."


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PostPosted: Sat Feb 06, 2016 12:28 am 
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What happens when Jackie catches one of the kids at the ranch singing "Red Jackie?"


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PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2016 7:25 pm 
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What happens when Jackie catches one of the kids at the ranch singing "Red Jackie?"

Hrmm... good question.

Let's take a peek, shall we? :)

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2016 7:49 pm 
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What happens when Jackie catches one of the kids at the ranch singing "Red Jackie?"

Hrmm... good question.

Let's take a peek, shall we? :)

No angel

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2016 8:13 pm 
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I guess I fudged the prompt a little bit, but it was too much fun not to. :D

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PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2016 8:17 pm 
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I guess I fudged the prompt a little bit, but it was too much fun not to. :D

A thoroughly acceptable thing to do when it results in great little moments like this!


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2016 5:20 pm 
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I challenge someone to write the following story:
On Ravnica, vedalken are haggling with the Orzhov over some debts, in one of their churches because why wouldn't the Orzhov do it on their own turf. In the middle of negotions, the church is assaulted by nephilim-born sand-people, which begin molesting the church-goers. Of course, a fight is mounted to push them back, and in the commotion the vedalken take the opportunity to sneak away without paying their debts.

Points go to whomever writes the sentence I want from that.


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2016 5:26 pm 
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I challenge someone to write the following story:
On Ravnica, vedalken are haggling with the Orzhov over some debts, in one of their churches because why wouldn't the Orzhov do it on their own turf. In the middle of negotions, the church is assaulted by nephilim-born sand-people, which begin molesting the church-goers. Of course, a fight is mounted to push them back, and in the commotion the vedalken take the opportunity to sneak away without paying their debts.

Points go to whomever writes the sentence I want from that.

"Like sand through our glass, so are the pays of our wives."?


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2016 5:42 pm 
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I challenge someone to write the following story:
On Ravnica, vedalken are haggling with the Orzhov over some debts, in one of their churches because why wouldn't the Orzhov do it on their own turf. In the middle of negotions, the church is assaulted by nephilim-born sand-people, which begin molesting the church-goers. Of course, a fight is mounted to push them back, and in the commotion the vedalken take the opportunity to sneak away without paying their debts.

Points go to whomever writes the sentence I want from that.

"Like sand through our glass, so are the pays of our wives."?

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I thought I could count on you to get this one.

YOU ARE TEARING ME APART, LISA RAVEN!


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2016 5:44 pm 
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I challenge someone to write the following story:
On Ravnica, vedalken are haggling with the Orzhov over some debts, in one of their churches because why wouldn't the Orzhov do it on their own turf. In the middle of negotions, the church is assaulted by nephilim-born sand-people, which begin molesting the church-goers. Of course, a fight is mounted to push them back, and in the commotion the vedalken take the opportunity to sneak away without paying their debts.

Points go to whomever writes the sentence I want from that.

"Like sand through our glass, so are the pays of our wives."?

:(
I thought I could count on you to get this one.

YOU ARE TEARING ME APART, LISA RAVEN!

Meh.

I like mine...


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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2016 6:03 pm 
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"Escape? No, the boss said to sand them away".

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CotW is a method for ranking cards in increasing order of printability.

*"To YMTC it up" means to design cards that have value mostly from a design perspective. i.e. you would put them in a case under glass in your living room and visitors could remark upon the wonderful design principles, with nobody ever worring if the cards are annoying/pointless/confusing in actual play

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PostPosted: Mon Feb 08, 2016 8:55 pm 
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Points go to whomever writes the sentence I want from that.

Why do I just know that, when I eventually see the correct answer, here, it's going to make me groan? :)

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TPmanW wrote:
"Escape? No, the boss said to sand them away".

Eff for effort.

Points go to whomever writes the sentence I want from that.

Why do I just know that, when I eventually see the correct answer, here, it's going to make me groan? :)

You know me too well. But I want to leave the challenge up for a few days to give people a chance at it.


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PostPosted: Tue Feb 09, 2016 12:39 am 
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I got a triple letter grade! Beat that Raven!

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Cato wrote:
CotW is a method for ranking cards in increasing order of printability.

*"To YMTC it up" means to design cards that have value mostly from a design perspective. i.e. you would put them in a case under glass in your living room and visitors could remark upon the wonderful design principles, with nobody ever worring if the cards are annoying/pointless/confusing in actual play

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here's a prompt:

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don't you see? the punching was inside you the whole time.


make a thing?

:duel:

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PostPosted: Tue Feb 09, 2016 5:12 pm 
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razorborne wrote:
here's a prompt:

razorborne wrote:
don't you see? the punching was inside you the whole time.


make a thing?

:duel:

Okay, then.

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2016 12:08 am 
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huh. that's not what I meant but neat none the less!

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PostPosted: Wed Feb 10, 2016 12:21 am 
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razorborne wrote:
huh. that's not what I meant but neat none the less!

:duel:

I actually had a few different ideas for how to take this one out of context, but settled on this one because, well, I go back to the Dual-Walkers pretty much whenever I can.

My other main idea was to use Dantalion, the parasitic planeswalker who causes people immense pain from inside them. That would have been fun...

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I challenge someone to write the following story:
On Ravnica, vedalken are haggling with the Orzhov over some debts, in one of their churches because why wouldn't the Orzhov do it on their own turf. In the middle of negotions, the church is assaulted by nephilim-born sand-people, which begin molesting the church-goers. Of course, a fight is mounted to push them back, and in the commotion the vedalken take the opportunity to sneak away without paying their debts.

Points go to whomever writes the sentence I want from that.

So the phrase was:
The attitude of the lewd dune-brood set the mood for the feud in the pews, and the blue dudes took that as a cue to eschew their dues.


No one gets points for this.


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