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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 6:47 am 
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Ok, so I have absolutely no idea where this came from. It just sort of happened midway through the next installment of Jinsen's and Kimberley's most excellent adventure. I don't know why? ???

Usually I post character biographies at the end of introductory pieces, but the surprise is that I DON'T HAVE THEM!! Yeah, so you all get as much context for this as I did, basically. I will get those backgrounds/appearances things up eventually, though. Probably tomorrow. (Today, I guess? Friday. The 23rd of January, 2015. That day. I am up waaaay too late.)

Anyway it's sort of cool to be back in the swing of things. Let me know what you all think!

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Every Light Casts A Shadow


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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 12:37 pm 
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I am very much looking forward to this, Ruwin! I have my fingers crossed that I'll be able to read it tonight.

Ok, so I have absolutely no idea where this came from. It just sort of happened midway through the next installment of Jinsen's and Kimberley's most excellent adventure. I don't know why? ???

I don't know about you, but I feel like those are some of the most exciting moments. You're trying to work on one thing, and this other story or character just kind of elbows its way into your brainspace. It can be terrifying, but it can also be exhilarating. I mean, basically every character of mine who isn't Beryl showed up unannounced during a moment where I was kind of spinning my wheels on a Beryl story.

It's like they arrive precisely when you don't expect them. Which is pretty neat.

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PostPosted: Fri Jan 23, 2015 5:03 pm 
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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 5:37 am 
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Thanks for reading, Raven! I fixed those typos - thanks for pointing them out!

Also, I added those character backgrounds - feel free to take a look whenever!

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PostPosted: Sun Jan 25, 2015 7:36 pm 
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Wow, Ruwin, that was *chilling*. Thanks so much for sharing! Comments in the spoiler block below.

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 9:57 am 
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You know, thinking about this more reminds me of a stanza from Blasphemous Act:

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 6:36 pm 
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Thanks for reading, OL! I didn't have much time to respond to comments before as I was wrangling a rather frustrating online assignment, but now that I've snagged some free time, I will do so!

First, we'll start with Raven!

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PostPosted: Mon Jan 26, 2015 7:55 pm 
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@ Ruwin

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PostPosted: Tue Jan 27, 2015 5:18 pm 
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@Ruwin: Glad I could help get the wheels a'turnin'. :D


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PostPosted: Wed Feb 04, 2015 9:07 pm 
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Well that was a hell of a read.

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PostPosted: Thu Feb 05, 2015 1:47 am 
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Keeper, thanks for reading! I'm glad you enjoyed it.

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Alright, I edited Leon's little rambling at the end to give the idea of the sorts of things he sees when he's searching through people's minds for intentional malice. Allen's still unstable, but I let Elizabeth muse for a while longer at the end about what had happened, and hopefully that should give some insight into her situation. Probably only added like, two paragraphs in total.

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I think the changes clarify things quite a bit. Leon's got quite a poetic manner of speech in the updated version.


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