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PostPosted: Sat Oct 18, 2014 11:56 pm 
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I've decided to post some of my old dropped projects in case anyone sees something they like in them. Feel free to pick them up and change them however you'd like, or to bug me to complete it, or to just ask me for any extra information I may recall. This is the information I recorded on notepad or wordpad files, which isn't the extent of what I created for the plane since I often worked with note cards, scrap paper, and notebooks -- I recognize that there are things that aren't in this write-up, but I can't really remember at the moment what they are. If I find my notes when cleaning up or something I can bring those in as well if anyone wants them.

A few notes going forward: First, I notice a lot of information, such as several creature types I had chosen, is absent from these notes. Second, this was originally created along the same guidelines as one of Keeper's (or whomever organized it) plane creation contests, even though I never participated in said contest -- I simply used the either/or challenges as guidelines to create the plane. Third, I dropped this place because I realized how far off I ended up going from the Magic aesthetic with the new creature type and the whole wastes thing in the first place; it played out a lot more like a sci-fi than anything.
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I think this is an interesting start to a plane (as long as your Karfuul about it...)

We've certainly seen Wastes on other planes before, but I like the take on this one with the artifact spider-monsters. As for your concern with the creature types, I can sort of see your point, although I'm not convinced this stuff is TOO far out there to still be accessible. I would need to look at it more in depth before I could say for certain, but I think this is a pretty workable plane.


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I think this is an interesting start to a plane (as long as your Karfuul about it...)

That name is actually something I've never been enamored with. I tend to pronounce fantasy names with a much more Romanized-Japanese bent, so to be it ends up being more like "car-fool", but it's still something I didn't really like; though I didn't want the wastes to be the same name as the plane itself, at least to the natives. It makes sense for outsiders to refer to it as the most prevalent feature, but I figured we call it "Earth" and not "the Pacific Ocean", so that's what I decided to go with.


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I think this is an interesting start to a plane (as long as your Karfuul about it...)

That name is actually something I've never been enamored with. I tend to pronounce fantasy names with a much more Romanized-Japanese bent, so to be it ends up being more like "car-fool", but it's still something I didn't really like; though I didn't want the wastes to be the same name as the plane itself, at least to the natives. It makes sense for outsiders to refer to it as the most prevalent feature, but I figured we call it "Earth" and not "the Pacific Ocean", so that's what I decided to go with.

Yeah, admittedly, I've always found it a little odd that we call Jakkard "Jakkard," because that seems to refer specifically to the Wastes. It's been an interesting challenge, for instance, trying to decide how Antine would explain where he's from, considering he has no other context.


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Yeah, admittedly, I've always found it a little odd that we call Jakkard "Jakkard," because that seems to refer specifically to the Wastes. It's been an interesting challenge, for instance, trying to decide how Antine would explain where he's from, considering he has no other context.

Well, it's important to remember, as far as Jakkard goes, that we're looking at a case of a once vibrant world being ruined and the one livable spot ending up getting split off for some time.
When Verkell became isolated, it gave them a more prominent "here" and "there" for the sake of reference.

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