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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2014 2:20 pm 
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This is my latest Raiker Venn story. Enjoy!

Also, as per recent conversation, Trigger Warnings for, um, a couple mildly unpleasant things.

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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2014 6:47 pm 
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Wow, Raiker Venn is, how do I put this, really freaking creepy! But I like it! It's interesting to know a little more about Raiker. Oh, I suppose I should do the spoiler thing, huh?

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Really well done!

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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2014 6:49 pm 
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You're a bad, bad man, Raven.

That'll have to do for now - more in-depth review later!

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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2014 7:09 pm 
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You're a bad, bad man, Raven.

That'll have to do for now - more in-depth review later!

Stop it, I'm getting misty.

I can't believe I'm making THAT movie reference.

Really well done!

I'm glad you liked it! Thanks for reading!


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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2014 7:11 pm 
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I loved it, but then you knew that. :P

I love your trigger warning, too. Warning: generalized unpleasantness. No seriously, it's just unpleasant all around, really.


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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2014 10:04 pm 
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Nicely done, as usual, sir.

I'm going to edge out on a limb here and say that our Mr. Venn is maybe not a particularly nice gent.

And I also have a funny mental image of the jade planeswalker defeating him in part by reciting really bad poems:

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Sugar is sweet.
You are a big stupid face, Raiker Venn.

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PostPosted: Fri May 30, 2014 10:26 pm 
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I'm going to edge out on a limb here and say that our Mr. Venn is maybe not a particularly nice gent.

What? Didn't you see how friendly he is to all those townsfolk? He's often smiling and being conversational and offering to enrich their lives with poetry! It's like they say in Pirates of Penzance: "Although we live by strife, we're always sorry to begin it, / For what, we ask, is life without a touch of poetry in it?" :shifty:

And I also have a funny mental image of the jade planeswalker defeating him in part by reciting really bad poems:

Roses are red.
Violets are blue.
Sugar is sweet.
You are a big stupid face, Raiker Venn.

That might work, actually. I can feel it defeating me as we speak! :)

Nicely done, as usual, sir.

Thank you!, and Thanks to Keeper, Ruwin and DisGo, as well!


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