To put simply no planeswalker could have possibly slotted into the story being told in Lorwyn. It was entirely native-centric. While you could have had tourists, they wouldn't mesh in any way with what was going on.
That leaves us with two options (assuming they still get introduced in Time Spiral): Either we rewrite most of Lorwyn's plot or (better idea), Lorwyn doesn't get planeswalkers and they only reappear in Alara.
I am a bit of a story novice, newby, casual, whatever you want to call it. The Innistrad stories I liked a lot and I think it is because it showed the life of the people there and had a sprinkling of the walkers. Seemed like you get enough to know they were around but not too much so you were left wanting more. Which i think should be a goal. To me it feels like the story has switched to be completely about the walkers with a sprinkling of whatever setting they might happen to be in. We have a long time to explore the walkers but only one chance to explore these settings.
I get where you're coming from, but I'm not sure if shifting the balance more towards the planar natives fixes a lot of problems. I completely understand that it's annoying to see less of, say, Thalia or Drana and instead get five stories about Nissa doing the same thing, but I think you're mistaken about the time you have to explore the 'walkers. In theory this is true, but if you take focus less on the 'walkers you slow down their overarching plots to a crawl. No matter the flaws of current storytelling, the characters are now able to evolve a lot quicker, because their arc ties in to the plane's arc.
I'm against starting the Lorwyn 5 in Future Sight. They would be just as out of place there as they would in Lorwyn. The Time Spiral block (with future Sight being the ending) had two-ish Neo-Walkers already (
Venser and
Radha). Now, for story purposes, Rhada didn't quite make the leap into 'Walker-dom, but having the Lorwyn 5 in Future Sight would have distracted greatly from the story Time Spiral was telling. Also, most of those characters (Chandra, Jace, Ajani, and Garruk) were born Post-Mending, so you'd have to explain what alternate versions of their future selves were doing gathering around the dying husk of Dominaria. time Spiral had enough stuff it was trying to explain and it doesn't need that mess too.
Fair points. I hardly know anything about Time Spiral, so thanks for pointing this out.
Having them slotted into the background of Lowryn could work if you kept it like a purely coincidental B plot and slowly filtered them in over the course of all four sets.
Having four Blocks to introduce them
is a luxury I hadn't considered. Lorwyn's easy-going environment might be a safe and nice place to introduce the planeswalkers.
-Introduce Nissa first. (This would require both swapping her for Garruk and rewriting time so that the Design comes up with her first instead of elevates her from her popularity in the Duels game.) She has actual ties with Lorwyn and would have worked well in-block with the tribal theme.
I'm perfectly okay with rewriting time for this exercise. It's, I think, an important part of the exercise. We do need to keep in mind that this creates a need to introduce Garruk later on, because we need to know him before we get too Innistrad. (Unless Innistrad changes a lot due to these ripples.)
-Introduce Chandra second. She could have been visiting the Flamekin. Maybe making some friends.
The important question is: Does she fight Jace :-)
Introduce Ajani third. He is here coincidentally. He is the oddity of the plane.[/spoiler]
The problem we run into here is that Ajani Goldmane was supposed to be an older version of Ajani already. He should come, chronologically, after Ajani Vengeant.
It would be nice to focus more on Jace's knowledge for the sake of knowledge thing right from the bat. I feel like that was originally intended for the character (given his card-draw abilities). It's a shame we can't tie Illusion Magic into this somehow.
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I like it. You also get a better division of human-non-human and of the hero-villain spectrum.