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The part where Lord Dark redirects black mana to Kusho is also kind of bizarre. Like, fine, I believe he can do that, but why does that result in people on Kusho getting some strange addicition to magic? Rather than, you know, the island producing black mana?
It makes sense to me. Dark cast a spell that redirects and shapes black mana into Kusho in the form of curse that poisons the lands Mana pool. It is basically a "turn all lands into swamps in addition to whatever type of land it is" plus with a added effect.
That's probably the intention, but I wish
Emperor's Fist had made that a bit clearer and distinguished the black mana intrusion from the curse a bit better. That plotline is left sort of open at the end, though, so maybe the third book will clarify that a bit more..?
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On the other hand, the magic of Tetsuo and some other people feels more like it's straight out of Dragon Ball Z. The fact that he can do pretty much anything that he wants as long as it's roughly in his colours doesn't exactly make him more fun to read about.
I honestly can't see why you have a problem with that. The trilogy makes it abundantly clear that the lands in madara are particularly potent. Which means in-universe they probably tap for
or
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Mana or more without side effects because Gameplay/Story Segregation. Furthermore, this man is no novice battlemage getting ready to journey across the land and therefore gain more lands. This man is a master who is not only well traveled IE very powerful but very, very good at swordmanship. A deadly combination if Baral is any indication.
The DBZ part bothers me to some extent because it gets pretty repetitive after a while and isn't really in line with what you'd normally expect magic in MtG to look like. He's just throwing around random energy bolts half the time, then some more random energy bolts that look different, but you don't really know what the difference between them is. The idea that his 'finishing move' is actually
Doom Blade before that card even existed is charming, though. And I like the idea that he's a skilled swordsman who can channel spells through his sword, but he's just too good at everything. He's a great archer, he's a master swordsman with almost superhuman speed and reflexes who can go toe to toe with Wasitora (and yet he seems to be just as dangerous without his swords), he's the most powerful battle mage in the whole empire (despite other people having access to the same kind of abundant mana), he's great at controlling his emotions and accessing the meditation plane, he's a competent teacher, everyone looks up to him etc. Sure, he's the imperial champion for a reason, but he's really a bit over the top. And when he can do pretty much anything, every new ability he reveals could potentially cause plot holes like the one I mentioned. First we learn he can pass through walls, then he can suddenly teleport (even to a different island) which I'm sure woud have been super handy at earlier points where he
doesn't do it. He also intuitively understands how to improvise a cure for Kei's parasite when Lord Magnus can't, he can suddenly open a portal to Lady Orca's cave, instantly understands her weak spot, blows up the cave and heads back. Oh, and that near-omnipotent Elder Dragon planeswalker who wants to kill him? He can totally hide from that one because magic. Admittedly, the last one is necessary because Bolas would just eat him at the end of book two otherwise, but if you look at everything together, it feels like a bit of a stretch. He still has to face Bolas and Dark, who are pretty overpowered, too, so at least there's still a bit of a challenge for him, and his attendants being in danger makes him vulnerable to some degree. Don't get me wrong, the trilogy is a really fun read and has lots of things to like, but I think Tetsuo's abilities could have been handled better. I think reducing the overall powerlevel of Tetsuo, Dark (who's similarly hypercompetent and can do almost everything) and Bolas would have done the books well.